Mary the Shewolf 3

[NightmareHero]

http://www.renderotica.com/modules.php?nam...1&orderby=dateD (http://www.renderotica.com/modules.php?name=My_eGallery&file=index&do=showpic&search_type=gallery&search_var=1&pid=117311&orderby=dateD)

Comments are welcome.

[Were Dono]

All I get is...

" If you are a member of Renderotica, please login before following the link that brought you here.

If you are not a member of Renderotica, you may have followed an illegal link.

If you feel you have reached this message in error, please email Systems Administration."

Find some other way to post it please.

[Night Wolf]

Same here...and judging by the site name...o.o

[NightmareHero]

[img=http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/6219/marytheshewolf35ic.th.jpg] (http://img101.imageshack.us/my.php?image=marytheshewolf35ic.jpg)

Hope this helps

[Night Wolf]

Interesting...3D Modeling o.o
I think it's nice =]

[of wolf and man]

nicely done.
i must check out this "renderotica" site. is it all 3D modeling? if so...feh...not so much. i just think 3D modeling looks so fake.

[Were Dono]

Very interesting and well done.

Mind if I make some suggestions, hmm?
Though the detail on the fur is very well done...
it almost looks like skin.
Like it's to press on the body.

And the tail is to stick straight.
I don't think a tail that long would stick up so perfectly.
Not with the weight of that amount of fur anyway.

Other than that, it's very good.

[Lycanthropy]

Pretty good. Besides the stuff Dono said I think it's great.

[of wolf and man]

Originally posted by Were Dono@Mar 18 2006, 06:46 PM
Very interesting and well done.

Mind if I make some suggestions, hmm?
Though the detail on the fur is very well done...
it almost looks like skin.
Like it's to press on the body.

And the tail is to stick straight.
I don't think a tail that long would stick up so perfectly.
Not with the weight of that amount of fur anyway.

Other than that, it's very good.

12417

well maybe he isn't that good with 3-D rendering yet.

[Were Dono]

Originally posted by of wolf and man@Mar 18 2006, 09:45 PM
well maybe he isn't that good with 3-D rendering yet.

12427

...It doesn't matter how good you are.
I'm just pointing out things to make it BETTER.
I'm not the best drawer
But that doesn’t stop people from pointing out what I did wrong
or making suggestions.

[NightmareHero]

Thank you for the suggestions. I'm using bumps now to give the fur an impression.

[Taser]

Also, i find it useful to enhance the shading on the texture, like i do for low poly models such as this http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/28035232/
Of course, i only do this because i had low lighting capabilities.

Make the light more intense (with either texture or with the render settings) and make the backround more... night-ish.

And what dono said :P

[neoritter]

Those are very good computer renderings, I chalk Dono's issues to common problems of 3D rendering, but a more power and more experience does fix those problems.
My issue with the first pic is that there seems to be no eyes.