Help?

[Rantourus]

ok this is for anyone who wants to give me a paw. its rather complex but simple... i need a few things that on the net i can't find or realy have very little time to hunt for. i need 1 list of Ranks in a wolf pack, 1 new brain(J/K), and some critis and questions about the information so far, that way i can add the information now, and not have some going well why this or why that..erm thats for listenging and or helping.
the piece in question is Rantourus Information (http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/30311935/)
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[Night Wolf]

I think that Info is pretty detailed...I could almost visualize the actual creture o.o
About the Wolf Ranks, I think that there is an Alpha Male and a female, the Betas and I heard that the lowest rank is Omega...I'm not sure though =|

[Rantourus]

Same here, i know Alphas and Omegas..but thats about it...and thanks for loking at it, *takes deep breath* and its nice to hear you can almost see it in your mind. hopefulyl when i get the Culture reworded and typed it will better give the loks of them aswell.

[of wolf and man]

i was just getting into it, then it stops at culture. ah well.
the males breasts swell.
wow.
creepy visual.

[neoritter]

Interesting, whats the whole thing for?

[Rantourus]

OWAM: Yeah the way i have it on paper its slight..worded very oddly and yeah that wasn't my idea, was a male frined of mines idea*giggles* it is kinda odd to think about it.

NeoRitter: its for my books i am currently working on (Rewritting the first one). I plan to write out the specs on all 4 not counting Rantourus, then i have 15 smaller side creatures to finish and flush out a bit better. least last count was 15 on those..but anyway i can get all tech about it but i wont.


Anyone else got any questions? comments? Concerns? :wtf: