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Kitsune57
05-01-2006, 07:54 PM
A/N: Yeah, I wrote a fanfic. I hope you all enjoy! I also can’t think of a title. So any suggestions are welcome. I hope Leo enjoys it too.
DISCLAIMER!!!!: These characters aren’t mine. They are copyright Leonardo Vidal.
(I forgot to put that in earlier.)
Luna had only recently come to terms with the fact that she was a werewolf. A creature that is feared, with good reason. She knew this would be an important night. The powerful instinct had welled up inside of her. Luna felt terrible nausea building in her stomach and chest pains. She had to hurry…
She had packed her backpack with “supplies.” Spare clothes, a glasses case, and spare clothing and undergarments, just in case she didn’t make it in time. Luna ran to the closest woods. Her heart muscle ached in her chest; an oncoming sign of the change.
Luna had run by so fast that she completely missed her pink-haired friend, Collie.
Collie made a feeble attempt to greet Luna, but Luna didn’t see it.
“Hey!” Collie said as Luna blew right by her. “How rude! She looked in trouble though…” Collie turned around and began to follow Luna.
Luna’s hand crackled and pain struck her in the face in head. She steadied herself on a tree as she felt her face already begin to shift. Her fingernails began to crack as her claws grew out from under them. Blood trickled out. Luna was so close she couldn’t give up now. She forced her shaky muscles just to walk a few more feet. There wasn’t anymore time left…
Collie had run to try to catch up to Luna. She had caught up to the tree and tried to catch her breath. As she laid her hand on the tree, she felt the moist blood.
“What the…?” Collie looked at the blood. “Is she hurt?” Collie heard some noises coming from the brush just a little bit away. She walked quietly towards to sound.
Luna bellowed in pain as her change accelerated. Her glasses slid off her face as her ears began to shift. A tingling sensation ran from her stomach to her chest. Blood mixed with her saliva dripped off her chin. Her teeth began to grow and shift.
Collie stopped after she saw the sight of her friend changing her shape. “What the hell is happening?” Collie asked herself.
Luna’s growing feet exploded from her shoes and socks. Luna cried out in both pain and relief as the confining shoes were freed from her feet. Darker fur began to spread across her shoulders and down her back. A nub of extra bone began to grow from her backside. The black fur began to her it as it grew longer and push the waistband of her pants further down.
Kitsune57
05-01-2006, 07:54 PM
“Fuck! What is this? What the fuck is going on here?” Collie asked. However she was transfixed to the transformation.
Luna’s muscles rippled down her frame, tightening and changing their shape. Luna’s leg muscles bulged and tore apart her pants at the seams. More fur covered Luna’s partially nude body. White fur covered her stomach. Luna’s deep black hair grew out long and wilder. Black fur covered her back, arms and legs. Her tail had grown out long and sleek.
Her black pointed ears moved to the top of her head. Luna stood on her padded feet and rose up to her full height. Luna’s face and jaws pushed out into a short canine muzzle.
Luna howled loudly into the night sky.
“Holy shit!” Collie said.
She had said that a little too loudly for Luna’s comfort.
Luna turned and growled at the intruder who dared invade her privacy. Luna’s piercing amber gaze stared directly at Collie.
“Whoa, easy…uh…girl…” Collie was at a loss at what to do now. She never thought that she would wish for silver to ward off her best friend who is a werewolf.
Luna was unphased. She went down on all fours, to attack. Luna continued to growl, flashing her lethal white teeth.
Collie kept her gaze on the werewolf. She slowly raised up to try to bolt, or at least run up a tree…Can werewolves climb tress? she thought to herself. Collie was getting desperate.
Luna made that decision for her… She leapt at Collie, just as Collie had turn to run.
Collie was hit with the full force of an oncoming truck. A big truck. The breath was knocked completely from her lungs, and she was pinned. Collie felt the claws dig into her arms. Her face was pressed hard into the ground. Collie felt Luna’s hot breath in her ear and the saliva drip onto her neck.
Luna’s prey shivered under her weight. Her prey whimpered. Luna felt the hot blood on her padded hands. She stuck her nose into Collie’s pink hair. Luna breathed deeply, and snorted. The fruity smelling shampoo tickled her sensitive nostrils. However, something about it registered in her brain. It was something….familiar. Luna wanted to figure it out. She moved to smell more.
Kitsune57
05-01-2006, 07:55 PM
Collie felt Luna shift her weight as she moved her left hand from one of Collie’s injured arm. Luna moved her nose further down Collie’s back. She felt little relief come to her bleeding arm. Collie decided to take a chance. She swung her free elbow into Luna’s lower jaw.
Luna was not expecting the blow. She whimpered as she felt the elbow slam into her mouth. She backed off her capture, as she shook off the blow and regained her senses. Luna opened her eyes to see that the girl was running away. This angered the werewolf. She roared a warning and then leapt again.
Collie first felt the pain in her side as the claws dug into her. Then she felt the snap of her collarbone as the teeth sank into her shoulder, just shy of her neck. Collie fell again. She felt lightheaded and the pain began to fade away. Although she still saw the wolf muzzle dug into her flesh. Collie felt so tired, so weak, and her vision faded to black.
Luna felt the hot blood splash into her mouth and over her tongue. It tasted salty and sweet. It was familiar, and mixing with that familiar smell she had earlier.
It is…Luna opened her amber eyes. Collie!
Luna had regained her senses and control. She realized that the limp body in her mouth, the blood spilled on her hands and in her mouth, was Collie.
She released her vice-like jaws. Collie was as limp as a ragdoll. Luna nuzzled her friend with her snout. She whimpered and tears began to well up in her eyes. Luna turned Collie over to her back.
Her face portrayed someone that is simply asleep, but there was a stream of blood from the corner of her mouth. The gruesome neck wound was exposed. Blood trickled from the torn tissues and the exposed broken bone snapped like a stick. Blood stained her clothes at her other wounds. A large bloodstain was at Collie’s side and her arms were scratched.
Luna howled in mourning. It was a cry for help.
The howl reached some experienced ears. Fang returned the cry and ran towards its direction.
He reached the gruesome scene. He saw the girl lying on the ground. Fang recognized her as Collie, one of Luna’s friends. He saw Luna cowering by a tree and crying.
“Luna, what happened?” Fang asked approaching Collie’s injured body.
Luna only shook her head and shuddered.
Kitsune57
05-01-2006, 07:59 PM
Fang crouched near the body. He smelled the air, but it was mixed with Luna’s smell and the blood from the body. He placed his fingers on Collie’s neck.
“That’s what I thought…” Fang muttered.
Luna raised her ears in confusion and worry.
Fang lowered his ear to Collie’s neck, and held his hand over her mouth.
“She’s alive.” He said, but it was an almost grim tone. “She’s still breathing and her pulse is beginning to pick up. Collie lives Luna, but do you realize really what you have done?” He was almost scolding the werewolf.
Luna shook her head.
“Think Luna!” Fang yelled.
Luna winced at the anger he was showing. She tried to concentrate. Then the realization hit her like a ton of bricks. It happened in all the werewolf movies and novels. When werewolf bites another person and that person lives, the curse is spread.
Collie was living, but she was now robbed of her humanity.
Collie wheezed in a deep breath and then coughed. Blood sputtered out. Collie moaned and resumed her sleep-like state.
“She’s healing physically.” Fang said as he watched Collie. “Come, you should change back. First we need to get her somewhere safe. Then, you need to tell her what happened.” Fang said picking up Collie. “Get your things.” He turned his back to Luna. Fang spoke to Luna as if he were scolding a puppy.
Luna grabbed her things together and followed a distance behind Fang. Her ears and tail were lowered in punishment.
A/N: I apologize that this isn't complete. I am in the middle Exam Hell in college. :mournhowl: I am working on it the best I can during this craptacular time.... :frown: *Sigh.* I'll keep posting installments as I get more time...
vega123
05-02-2006, 05:35 AM
it's pretty good. it looks like Fang owns Luna.
The wild one
05-02-2006, 09:53 AM
I agree. Well done to you!
of wolf and man
05-02-2006, 02:22 PM
Originally posted by vega123@May 2 2006, 04:35 AM
it's pretty good. it looks like Fang owns Luna.
16193
owns? owns how?
vega123
05-02-2006, 02:42 PM
Originally posted by of wolf and man@May 2 2006, 07:22 PM
owns? owns how?
16230
Fang said picking up Collie. “Get your things.” He turned his back to Luna. Fang spoke to Luna as if he were scolding a puppy.
Luna grabbed her things together and followed a distance behind Fang. Her ears and tail were lowered in punishment.
Guest
05-02-2006, 07:10 PM
I tried to make it more of a parental tone. Because Fang is more experienced as a werewolf than Luna would be. I assume. So it might be more of an older brother tone. That is what I was trying to get at. Plus, he's pretty pissed at what has happened so.....yeah....
but that is what I was trying for...
Guest
05-02-2006, 07:11 PM
AGH!!!! That's me. Kitsune....
Stupid computer....
*Kick.*
vega123
05-02-2006, 07:30 PM
i get it know. keep writing, i want to know what happens next.
Kitsune57
05-14-2006, 10:59 PM
Sorry this is taking me so long but this is just an update. I am finally free of school! But I have a full-time job, so time is...limited.
I just now dug out my laptop out of my moving things. -_-()
But I have every intention of comtinuing this.
Just an update. So uhh....yeah. Later.
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