Wolf War

[Moon Hunter]

Before i start my story, i need something for the people who wish to read it. I was to put chariters into it, but i want them to be fan made, so here are the rules.

1. The chariters can be werewolves, vampires, or mages(wiches/wizzards). If you want something else contact me and we'll talk about varations.

2. The story is set in modern day, so... anything is possable.

3. Leave your chariter discriptions here and i'll post when i have enough people, but i can always add more people :allears: .

The first chapter will be out when i fell like i'm ready to start the story.

[Moon Hunter]

Prologe

There blood is on my hands... i've lost everything... and for what? Everyone i've loved and now their dead... and now it's my turn to fight back. They've pissed off the wrong wolf and now they'll pay the price. I will tast their blood before the night is done... THEY WANTED A WAR, WELL GUESS WHAT, I'll GIVE THEM ONE!

[Were Dono]

Can you make up a profile thing we can fill in
So we know what to all put?
I'm intrested in making a character.

[angelslayer666]

I would love too, as well n.n *waves* Hi, Moonhunter!

[kiba]

Yes, you really should post a character form if you expect people to do this for you. u.u Like, what exactly are you looking for in a character? And what genders? And are they supposed to be normal at the time or more advanced? You should tell us more about the plot-and work on your punctuation skills. Capitalize your 'I's and right in a more...formed paragraph, don't be afraid to be descriptive.

P.S.~ In case you have no idea what W.Dono is talking about, she means something like this:

Name:
Race:
Bloodtype:
Gender:
Appearance:
Sp. Abilities:
History:
Other:

Etc..something to that extent.

[Moon Hunter]

Name:
Species:
Age:
Gender:
Eye Color:
Hair color:
Skin Color:
Special abillity:
Personality(optional):
Extra Discription(optional):
History(optional):

That's the chariter sheet, now it's up to you. :closedgrin: Once again your choices are werewolf, human, mage, or vampire, anything else, send me a message or leave it as a reply, and i'll make a choice.

[Were Dono]

Name: Brittany Smith
Species: Werewolf
Age: 21
Gender: Female
Eye Color: A very deep, unusual blue. A dark ring around the iris, and in the middle a light blue.
Hair color: Brown, shoulder length.
Skin Color: Very pale, skin about a shade darker than white paper.
Special ability: She is able to Cure people of wounds, sicknesses and diseases and make it seem as if they were never there. (Not able to revive the dead)
Personality(optional): She is very shy with people she doesn't know, but once people warm up to her and she is able to get along with them, she opens up. Though she sometimes enjoys the company of those who are close to her, she REALLY likes to be alone. And though she is very timid, it doesn't take much to actually make her mad such as simple jokes that almost seem to insult her. She seems to blush a lot, if any attention is placed on her.

She always keeps her secrets to herself and doesn't dare tell a soul. Whenever things come up regarding her issues, she seems to suddenly take off.

Though she tries hard to make herself seem happy most of the time, she more or less gives off a sad feeling, which comes from a tragedy that scared her for the rest of her life. Her voice is calm and soothing. She tends to look down when she walks and finds it hard to look people in the eye. She also have a nervous habit of poking her fingers together. She loves more than anything to curl up and take a nice long nap.
Extra Discription(optional):
Werewolf form:
She stands about 7'1". The werewolf's fur is pure white. While in werewolf form, her hair still lays on top of her head, still brown, but a bit longer than when she is in human form. Her claws, nose, and pads are all black. A tiny bit of her fangs poke out from her lips and her fur seems to be very fluffy. Everything on her is covered. So, so doesn't need to worry about clothes in this form, even though they do get torn to shreds in her transformations.

Human form:
She stands about 5'7". She wears a very white,dress that is short in the front and trails on the back. On her ankles are two silver colored bracelets. Around her neck she wears a silver colored necklace that allows her wedding ring to dangle from. Tattooed on her back in a light blue color, are two small angel wings.
History(optional): There isn't much of interest in her history that went on. She fell in love. A strange man, who seemed to know everything about her just by having one conversation with her. They connected so fast. She couldn’t go a day without him. It took a bit, but they finally started dating. During that time, their abnormalities came out. She became a werewolf and he a werecat. They thought they were the only ones of their kind that existed. It only brought them closer. After a bit, they married. She became the most happiest she had ever been. Then, in one terrible day...it all ended. He went out. And didn't return. She went out to go find him, to only find his body torn to shreds and parts actually eaten. She could tell by the foot prints and markings around the area that it was another of their kind. Of his kind. It was a werecat, trying to show dominance. And it won.

Ever since then, she has wandered the Earth with no real destination. Completely miserable. Almost crazy at times, thinking that her lover's ghost is at her side. She talks to it at times, even though nothing is there. Mostly about how much she misses him. After she realizes what she was doing, she gets embarrassed and moves onto other things. She looks everywhere to find some kind of spell that could raise him, but to no avail.

She now has a deep hatred for werecats. And grips onto her wedding ring, that she wears on a necklace when she thinks.

[Galist]

Name: Galist Selphanis
Species: Gende (Werewolf)
Age: 26
Gender: male
Eye Color: yellow
Hair color: dirty blond
Skin Color: white with a slight tan
Special abillity: Kuy (his pheonix) becomes a huge, but very light sword, and when stabbed into the ground giant spikes come out of the ground, however this takes much out of Galist and he can only do it once in a battle.
Personality: Very positive, he doesn't speak mush but his voice is calming like waves in the ocean.
Extra Discription: Strong, usually has a Red cloak on with a pheonix feather in the bandanna, a large button on his chest, when he presses it the cloack folds up into it, like a pocket cloak reveavling his scars that goes across his right arm 3 belts hold a Sheath on his back that holds no sword. his pants are baggy, wrapped arond in three seperate bands are pull srings tha he can pull to tighten the pants incase he needs to move fast. -No shoes
History: he was born ona planet called Xavis, a desert planet, but the sand is iron based. He has no memory of his life before the age of 12, (nor will he ever find out) his friend Duke Dedunye of the Selfan took him in and became his foster parent. at the age of 18 he joined the army under the command of Duke Dedunye where he served during the "Midnight War" (betwenn the selfan and the gende). and that leads us up to the now.

[Indiana_Jones]

Name: Taris K. Straywood
Species: Human
Age: 32
Gender: Male
Eye Color: hazel
Hair Color: dark brown
Skin Color: white, a little shade of tan.

Occuption: High Mage, Journeyman for Mage Guild.

Special Ability: Taris is a high mage of the Silver Mages Guild. He can freeze any living organism with his magic spells. He has a long staff made out of a special elven material. Is is white and it has a violet diamond on top of the staff. The staff is pretty heavy. Spells include: Fire bolt, Ice shock, Leviating, Frost nova, Flame wall, Ice path, Holy blessings, anti-lycanthropy shield, lycanthropy disease resistance, lycanthropy curse, magic immunity shield, water wave, God's Might, disease cure, Earthquake, Sleep, and Stun. Most of the powerful spells can cost throughly from the mind and voice. But most of them are from his book.

Personality: Stubborn, serious, and headstrong. Even though he is in second command of the Mages Guild, he treats high ranks as low ranks. He is not mean, but he is inpatient with dumb people and werewolves.

Extra description: He is seen usually wearing a dark blue mage's robes with magical runes on it, the robes itself is immune to magic. He even wears dark blue cloth gloves to protect his arms and hands from spell casting. Also carrying a long heavy white staff. Sometimes when he is off-duty or taking a break. He is wearing extravagant clothes. He is 6'1'', has a beard. He is a european look in his face, very british. He has a british accent.

History: Taris is interested in magic, when he was very young. His parents are wealthy. He has a rich and normal life, he made many friends in school and college. He taken many alchemist and magic classes. Taris' fahter was a powerful mage, he is following his father's footsteps, as he grew older. He eventually became a full-fledged Mages guild member at the age of 18. He started practicing magic as a child. He doesn't like werewolves, since he almost got bitten by one. Taris' father rescued him from when he was kidnapped by a evil werewolf clan (that's what most people say in his town, including his friends, and family). Taris is a powerful man, you do not miss with him, since he is rich. After his father died in a war, he took care of his mother and his siblings in his large manor. He became in second in command of the Silver Mages Guild, some other man took his father's place in leader. Taris doesn't 'hate' werewolves, but he doesn't trust them. Since Taris' father died, he gave him a lycanthropy-immunity amulet to him. Now he can fight werewolves without getting scared from being bitten. Taris is an experienced mage. He has helped many residents in his town.

[Moon Hunter]

I figured that i should put in my chariter, i try to write from the mind of someone in the story.

Name: Blood Claw
Species: Werewolf
Age: 486 (Looks 25)
Gender: Male
Eye Color: Dark Red
Hair color: Black
Skin Color: Healthy White
Special abillity: When his nails/claws and his teeth turn a shade of red it means a monster has been awakened.
Personality(optional): Now the nicest guy on the planet, likes to be alone, vary dangerous whan angered, but can be very kind.
Extra Discription(optional): Has a scar going down the right side of his face, over the rigth eye. Always wears black, rides a motorcycle, and looks very scary.
History(optional): In mid-evil times he was a soldger of light, a werewolf who faught for the gods of good, truth, and light. His last misson was to kill another soldger, this one of darkness, and then he would be free to live the rest of his life any way he wanted. He found the soldger of darkness and their battle lasted for days. In his enimies final moment, he cast a curse on Blood Claw, binding his to this world and to his age. He could never die, but in return for this gift was the curse. Blood Claw was fused with the sprit of a demon, the second he killed the soldger, for all time. The curse turned him into the very thing he had tried to destroy and became a target himself. For the last 461 years he had hidden form the Angels sent after him, countinued to desroy the darkness, and killed anyone who got in his way, good or evil. Now he is a target of both sides, good and evil, but both fear him. As he ages, his power grows, along with the demonds, and has become a threat to both sides. He has heard, from an unreliable source, that the sides of light and dark may join together to kill him.

[midnightclubx]

Looks interesting, here's mine:
UPDATE: I made some changes on his profile

Name: Steven Armstrong (known as DJ NEXUS in rave clubs)

Species: Werewolf

Age: 23

Gender: Male

Eye Color: Green

Hair color: Silver (naturally dark brown)

Skin Color: Healthy white

Special abillity: Other than making Trance music, he has visions of the future.

Personality: A shy, but nice person to talk to even though he isn't much of a talker. He doesen't like it when people want to know his past. His voice is a surfer accent.

Extra Discription: Werewolf form:His height is 7' 3'' and his fur is grey and silver.

Human form: His height is 6' 1'', wears a black short-sleeved shirt that says "Sensation" and kinda saggy jeans, has spikey hair ,and has bitemarks and scratches on his arm from the night he got bitten.

History: Do what you want with his history, just keep the "People shouldn't know my past." thing in mind.

[kitetsu]

-Name: Terusugu "Smooth Noodle" Kanegumi; His werewolf form is named "Hard Kimchi"

-Species: Werewolf

-Age: 302 (looks 26)

-Height: 6'10"; werewolf form 8'7"

-Weight: 208 lbs; werewolf form 487 lbs

-Gender: Male

-Eye Color: Opal green

- Hair color: Peridot green (light green); darkens to olive green just to the base of his scalp

- Hairstyle: neck length, both eyes covered by the hair, curled at the ends

- Skin Color: Okinawa-tanned

- Fighting discipline: Self taught acrobatic fighting with a stance that makes him face his back to his opponent, while moonwalking to move forward. Often uses his elbows to parry attacks, hence why he uses reinforced elbow pads. His preferred weapon is a tambourine-sized teacup with 2 handles on each side.

- Special abillity: Emanation of an unknown slippery liquid (most likely sweat) he likes to call "Soju Hardwalk" coming from the soles of his feet while he does the moonwalk. Can only be activated when he has ingested enough spicy materials to make him sweat at an inhuman rate. How he is always the only one not to slip from his own special technique remains unanswered.

- Personality(optional): Teru would carry a bottle of water mixed with tabasco with him everywhere he goes while chewing spearmint gum. Teru is also a well-mannered speaker, much to the contrary of his ultra-thick Kansai dialect whenever he talks to other japanese people, which he would always speak with to virtually everyone. Everytime he greets anyone he would always gesture a parody of a military salute with his left hand, unless he is greeting someone of a high rank like prime ministers, where he would shake people's hands like any other formal greeting, also with his left hand.

- Extra Description: he has 3 very large moles on his chin. His nails are genetically altered, making them look green, just like his eyes and hair. Speaks english in a german accent. Doesn't have a vulnerability to silver, as he wears 2 rings in each finger. He also has a hate for the moon, not for the reason that he changes unwillingly as lunar rays also do not affect him, but because he felt that it was over-glorified by his kin. He acts the same in werewolf form.

Teru is ambidextrous.

- History: A television executive with a passion for music, born in Osaka. He's even made music for some time. Also a hardcore culinary fan, he's taken a liking for hot foods, thus naming his werewolf form "Hard Kimchi". He's also no stranger to fighting, as he's had rival executives from either the media or music industry blackmail him in the manner of physical confrontations.

Teru has a Kansai dialect more thicker than any other japanese in the world.

And the rest is up to the author.


... Of course this screams JoJo!! *JoJo Junkie*

[Were Dono]

Kitetsu, I like your character. o_o

[kitetsu]

You're gonna like him more, cos here he is.

http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f124/ongyoki/TerusuguKanegumi.jpg

[Were Dono]

Someone's packin' >_>
XD
*coughs* I like the hair the most in this picture.

[midnightclubx]

If people wanted to know, my character looks like this guy from Kai Tracid.
http://ftb.pl/_files/obrazy/inne/tracid2.jpg

By the way Kitestu, your character looks badass.

[anarchy]

Name: Naoy Lebel (Ha&#33; I&#39;m so unorriginal....I inversed my real name to sound like I was <.<)
Species: Human
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Eye Color: "Ocean" blue
Hair color: Hazelnut, about jaw lenght

Skin Color: White, like someone who don&#39;t see the sun often.

Special abillity: Can pick most locks, expert of sneaking, skilled with throwing knives.

Personality(optional): Will avoid killing someone if he can, but he will protect himself if in danger. He can also fight in close combat, but he always hated being counter-attacked, he prefer striking from one&#39;s back. He also bluff a lot and compliments people to save him trouble or to get favors; he&#39;s at least as sneaky when he talk as when he walks.

Extra Discription(optional): X

History(optional): Often worked as a theif or as an information hunter. The rest is leaved to you.

[Moon Hunter]

:coolshift: Very good people, a few more and i&#39;ll start writting :closedgrin: .

[kiba]

Name: Mia Tobira
Species:Werecat
Age:63 (looks to be...about 18~19, somewhere around there)
Gender: Female
Eye Color: Golden-green, almond-shaped, like a cats
Hair color: white, with pale bluish-purple on the tips, in a sort of bob just underneath her ears.
Skin Color: very pale cream color (like...cream itself )
Special abillity: Very smooth changing ability, her transition is very easy, and she becomes a large, cream-colored cat, looking similar to a snow-leopard, only with spots that are bluish-purple instead of black. She can adjust the length of her claws, and can also make her tail and ears appear at will.(in human form)
Personality: Very calm, and excedingly neutral towards everyone and everything. Her personality suits her, for her facial expression hardly changes or alters.
Extra Discription(optional): Her normal outfit is a knee-length skirt(usually plad or a plain color) and a long-sleeved-a-bit-too-big-for-her-shirt. Just...normal tennishoes...but she does have a very slim figure, and her bust isn&#39;t too exceptional, just...average. Everything but her pretty face, cat eyes and hair color are just that...average.
History:
She has no memory of her life before becoming a werecat at age 19, and no idea who turned her into a what she is, although she remembers the training that he gave her to be able to defend herself and shift easier. His face is a blur in her memories, ever since he left her 7 years ago...in a ditch....for dead...

...(which will bring us to Aki&#39;s character...whom he will post as soon as he gets over this mopey, lazy-ass b.s&#33; I donno why, but he&#39;s been all, &#39;aah...I don&#39;t deserve to live, nobody likes me.&#39; whiney lately...>< GAH&#33;&#33; AKI, JUST MOVE ON&#33;&#33;&#33; YOU DON&#39;T HAVE TO LIVE FOR THE PEOPLE AROUND YOU&#33;&#33; LIVE FOR YOUR STUPID SELF&#33;&#33;&#33;Grrr....

[Guest]

This is what my character looks like. Expect he is a bit younger for that look.

http://images.epilogue.net/users/vvj/vvj-elder-mage.jpg

[Indiana_Jones]

^Opps, that was me. Forgot to log in.
^
^

[Moon Hunter]

This is so i can keep tabs on who i have.
1.
Name: Brittany Smith
Species: Werewolf
Age: 21
Gender: Female
Eye Color: A very deep, unusual blue. A dark ring around the iris, and in the middle a light blue.
Hair color: Brown, shoulder length.
Skin Color: Very pale, skin about a shade darker than white paper.
Special ability: She is able to Cure people of wounds, sicknesses and diseases and make it seem as if they were never there. (Not able to revive the dead)
Personality(optional): She is very shy with people she doesn&#39;t know, but once people warm up to her and she is able to get along with them, she opens up. Though she sometimes enjoys the company of those who are close to her, she REALLY likes to be alone. And though she is very timid, it doesn&#39;t take much to actually make her mad such as simple jokes that almost seem to insult her. She seems to blush a lot, if any attention is placed on her.

She always keeps her secrets to herself and doesn&#39;t dare tell a soul. Whenever things come up regarding her issues, she seems to suddenly take off.

Though she tries hard to make herself seem happy most of the time, she more or less gives off a sad feeling, which comes from a tragedy that scared her for the rest of her life. Her voice is calm and soothing. She tends to look down when she walks and finds it hard to look people in the eye. She also have a nervous habit of poking her fingers together. She loves more than anything to curl up and take a nice long nap.
Extra Discription(optional):
Werewolf form:
She stands about 7&#39;1". The werewolf&#39;s fur is pure white. While in werewolf form, her hair still lays on top of her head, still brown, but a bit longer than when she is in human form. Her claws, nose, and pads are all black. A tiny bit of her fangs poke out from her lips and her fur seems to be very fluffy. Everything on her is covered. So, so doesn&#39;t need to worry about clothes in this form, even though they do get torn to shreds in her transformations.

Human form:
She stands about 5&#39;7". She wears a very white,dress that is short in the front and trails on the back. On her ankles are two silver colored bracelets. Around her neck she wears a silver colored necklace that allows her wedding ring to dangle from. Tattooed on her back in a light blue color, are two small angel wings.
History(optional): There isn&#39;t much of interest in her history that went on. She fell in love. A strange man, who seemed to know everything about her just by having one conversation with her. They connected so fast. She couldn’t go a day without him. It took a bit, but they finally started dating. During that time, their abnormalities came out. She became a werewolf and he a werecat. They thought they were the only ones of their kind that existed. It only brought them closer. After a bit, they married. She became the most happiest she had ever been. Then, in one terrible day...it all ended. He went out. And didn&#39;t return. She went out to go find him, to only find his body torn to shreds and parts actually eaten. She could tell by the foot prints and markings around the area that it was another of their kind. Of his kind. It was a werecat, trying to show dominance. And it won.

Ever since then, she has wandered the Earth with no real destination. Completely miserable. Almost crazy at times, thinking that her lover&#39;s ghost is at her side. She talks to it at times, even though nothing is there. Mostly about how much she misses him. After she realizes what she was doing, she gets embarrassed and moves onto other things. She looks everywhere to find some kind of spell that could raise him, but to no avail.

She now has a deep hatred for werecats. And grips onto her wedding ring, that she wears on a necklace when she thinks.

2.
Name: Galist Selphanis
Species: Gende (Werewolf)
Age: 26
Gender: male
Eye Color: yellow
Hair color: dirty blond
Skin Color: white with a slight tan
Special abillity: Kuy (his pheonix) becomes a huge, but very light sword, and when stabbed into the ground giant spikes come out of the ground, however this takes much out of Galist and he can only do it once in a battle.
Personality: Very positive, he doesn&#39;t speak mush but his voice is calming like waves in the ocean.
Extra Discription: Strong, usually has a Red cloak on with a pheonix feather in the bandanna, a large button on his chest, when he presses it the cloack folds up into it, like a pocket cloak reveavling his scars that goes across his right arm 3 belts hold a Sheath on his back that holds no sword. his pants are baggy, wrapped arond in three seperate bands are pull srings tha he can pull to tighten the pants incase he needs to move fast. -No shoes
History: he was born ona planet called Xavis, a desert planet, but the sand is iron based. He has no memory of his life before the age of 12, (nor will he ever find out) his friend Duke Dedunye of the Selfan took him in and became his foster parent. at the age of 18 he joined the army under the command of Duke Dedunye where he served during the "Midnight War" (betwenn the selfan and the gende). and that leads us up to the now.

3.
Name: Taris K. Straywood
Species: Human
Age: 32
Gender: Male
Eye Color: hazel
Hair Color: dark brown
Skin Color: white, a little shade of tan.

Occuption: High Mage, Journeyman for Mage Guild.

Special Ability: Taris is a high mage of the Silver Mages Guild. He can freeze any living organism with his magic spells. He has a long staff made out of a special elven material. Is is white and it has a violet diamond on top of the staff. The staff is pretty heavy. Spells include: Fire bolt, Ice shock, Leviating, Frost nova, Flame wall, Ice path, Holy blessings, anti-lycanthropy shield, lycanthropy disease resistance, lycanthropy curse, magic immunity shield, water wave, God&#39;s Might, disease cure, Earthquake, Sleep, and Stun. Most of the powerful spells can cost throughly from the mind and voice. But most of them are from his book.

Personality: Stubborn, serious, and headstrong. Even though he is in second command of the Mages Guild, he treats high ranks as low ranks. He is not mean, but he is inpatient with dumb people and werewolves.

Extra description: He is seen usually wearing a dark blue mage&#39;s robes with magical runes on it, the robes itself is immune to magic. He even wears dark blue cloth gloves to protect his arms and hands from spell casting. Also carrying a long heavy white staff. Sometimes when he is off-duty or taking a break. He is wearing extravagant clothes. He is 6&#39;1&#39;&#39;, has a beard. He is a european look in his face, very british. He has a british accent.

History: Taris is interested in magic, when he was very young. His parents are wealthy. He has a rich and normal life, he made many friends in school and college. He taken many alchemist and magic classes. Taris&#39; fahter was a powerful mage, he is following his father&#39;s footsteps, as he grew older. He eventually became a full-fledged Mages guild member at the age of 18. He started practicing magic as a child. He doesn&#39;t like werewolves, since he almost got bitten by one. Taris&#39; father rescued him from when he was kidnapped by a evil werewolf clan (that&#39;s what most people say in his town, including his friends, and family). Taris is a powerful man, you do not miss with him, since he is rich. After his father died in a war, he took care of his mother and his siblings in his large manor. He became in second in command of the Silver Mages Guild, some other man took his father&#39;s place in leader. Taris doesn&#39;t &#39;hate&#39; werewolves, but he doesn&#39;t trust them. Since Taris&#39; father died, he gave him a lycanthropy-immunity amulet to him. Now he can fight werewolves without getting scared from being bitten. Taris is an experienced mage. He has helped many residents in his town.

4.
Name: Blood Claw
Species: Werewolf
Age: 486 (Looks 25)
Gender: Male
Eye Color: Dark Red
Hair color: Black
Skin Color: Healthy White
Special abillity: When his nails/claws and his teeth turn a shade of red it means a monster has been awakened.
Personality(optional): Now the nicest guy on the planet, likes to be alone, vary dangerous whan angered, but can be very kind.
Extra Discription(optional): Has a scar going down the right side of his face, over the rigth eye. Always wears black, rides a motorcycle, and looks very scary.
History(optional): In mid-evil times he was a soldger of light, a werewolf who faught for the gods of good, truth, and light. His last misson was to kill another soldger, this one of darkness, and then he would be free to live the rest of his life any way he wanted. He found the soldger of darkness and their battle lasted for days. In his enimies final moment, he cast a curse on Blood Claw, binding his to this world and to his age. He could never die, but in return for this gift was the curse. Blood Claw was fused with the sprit of a demon, the second he killed the soldger, for all time. The curse turned him into the very thing he had tried to destroy and became a target himself. For the last 461 years he had hidden form the Angels sent after him, countinued to desroy the darkness, and killed anyone who got in his way, good or evil. Now he is a target of both sides, good and evil, but both fear him. As he ages, his power grows, along with the demonds, and has become a threat to both sides. He has heard, from an unreliable source, that the sides of light and dark may join together to kill him.

5.
Name: Steven Armstrong (known as DJ NEXUS in rave clubs)

Species: Werewolf

Age: 23

Gender: Male

Eye Color: Green

Hair color: Silver (naturally dark brown)

Skin Color: Healthy white

Special abillity: Other than making Trance music, he has visions of the future.

Personality: A shy, but nice person to talk to even though he isn&#39;t much of a talker. He doesen&#39;t like it when people want to know his past. His voice is a surfer accent.

Extra Discription: Werewolf form:His height is 7&#39; 3&#39;&#39; and his fur is grey and silver.

Human form: His height is 6&#39; 1&#39;&#39;, wears a black short-sleeved shirt that says "Sensation" and kinda saggy jeans, has spikey hair ,and has bitemarks and scratches on his arm from the night he got bitten.

History: Do what you want with his history, just keep the "People shouldn&#39;t know my past." thing in mind.

6.
-Name: Terusugu "Smooth Noodle" Kanegumi; His werewolf form is named "Hard Kimchi"

-Species: Werewolf

-Age: 302 (looks 26)

-Height: 6&#39;10"; werewolf form 8&#39;7"

-Weight: 208 lbs; werewolf form 487 lbs

-Gender: Male

-Eye Color: Opal green

- Hair color: Peridot green (light green); darkens to olive green just to the base of his scalp

- Hairstyle: neck length, both eyes covered by the hair, curled at the ends

- Skin Color: Okinawa-tanned

- Fighting discipline: Self taught acrobatic fighting with a stance that makes him face his back to his opponent, hile moonwalking to move forward. Often uses his elbows to parry attacks, hence why he uses reinforced elbow pads. His preferred weapon is a tambourine-sized teacup with 2 handles on each side.

- Special abillity: Emanation of an unknown slippery liquid (most likely sweat) he likes to call "Soju Hardwalk" coming from the soles of his feet while he does the moonwalk. Can only be activated when he has ingested enough spicy materials to make him sweat at an inhuman rate. How he is always the only one not to slip from his own special technique remains unanswered.

- Personality(optional): Teru would carry a bottle of water mixed with tabasco with him everywhere he goes while chewing spearmint gum. Teru is also a well-mannered speaker, much to the contrary of his ultra-thick Kansai dialect whenever he talks to other japanese people, which he would always speak with to virtually everyone. Everytime he greets anyone he would always gesture a parody of a military salute with his left hand, unless he is greeting someone of a high rank like prime ministers, where he would shake people&#39;s hands like any other formal greeting, also with his left hand.

- Extra Description: he has 3 very large moles on his chin. His nails are genetically altered, making them look green, just like his eyes and hair. Speaks english in a german accent. Doesn&#39;t have a vulnerability to silver, as he wears 2 rings in each finger. He also has a hate for the moon, not for the reason that he changes unwillingly as lunar rays also do not affect him, but because he felt that it was over-glorified by his kin. He acts the same in werewolf form.

Teru is ambidextrous.

- History: A television executive with a passion for music, born in Osaka. He&#39;s even made music for some time. Also a hardcore culinary fan, he&#39;s taken a liking for hot foods, thus naming his werewolf form "Hard Kimchi". He&#39;s also no stranger to fighting, as he&#39;s had rival executives from either the media or music industry blackmail him in the manner of physical confrontations.

Teru has a Kansai dialect more thicker than any other japanese in the world.

And the rest is up to the author.

7.
Name: Naoy Lebel (Ha&#33; I&#39;m so unorriginal....I inversed my real name to sound like I was <.<)
Species: Human
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Eye Color: "Ocean" blue
Hair color: Hazelnut, about jaw lenght

Skin Color: White, like someone who don&#39;t see the sun often.

Special abillity: Can pick most locks, expert of sneaking, skilled with throwing knives.

Personality(optional): Will avoid killing someone if he can, but he will protect himself if in danger. He can also fight in close combat, but he always hated being counter-attacked, he prefer striking from one&#39;s back. He also bluff a lot and compliments people to save him trouble or to get favors; he&#39;s at least as sneaky when he talk as when he walks.

Extra Discription(optional): X

History(optional): Often worked as a theif or as an information hunter. The rest is leaved to you.

8.
Name: Mia Tobira
Species:Werecat
Age:63 (looks to be...about 18~19, somewhere around there)
Gender: Female
Eye Color: Golden-green, almond-shaped, like a cats
Hair color: white, with pale bluish-purple on the tips, in a sort of bob just underneath her ears.
Skin Color: very pale cream color (like...cream itself )
Special abillity: Very smooth changing ability, her transition is very easy, and she becomes a large, cream-colored cat, looking similar to a snow-leopard, only with spots that are bluish-purple instead of black. She can adjust the length of her claws, and can also make her tail and ears appear at will.(in human form)
Personality: Very calm, and excedingly neutral towards everyone and everything. Her personality suits her, for her facial expression hardly changes or alters.
Extra Discription(optional): Her normal outfit is a knee-length skirt(usually plad or a plain color) and a long-sleeved-a-bit-too-big-for-her-shirt. Just...normal tennishoes...but she does have a very slim figure, and her bust isn&#39;t too exceptional, just...average. Everything but her pretty face, cat eyes and hair color are just that...average.
History:
She has no memory of her life before becoming a werecat at age 19, and no idea who turned her into a what she is, although she remembers the training that he gave her to be able to defend herself and shift easier. His face is a blur in her memories, ever since he left her 7 years ago...in a ditch....for dead...

OK, that&#39;s everone i have... I&#39;ll start writting and still acept chariter discriptions. If i missed one, please tell me, i have 8.

[Moon Hunter]

PROLOGE
Good and Evil, that&#39;s how all stories begin... or in this case heven vs hell. They have been at war since the dawn of time, and Earth is the battle ground. And not just this Earth, but other Earth&#39;s, in other dimenchens. For millions of years this war has been fought in the shadowns, few humans know of it, but now something is changing. The war is spilling out into the world and is becoming harder to contain, soon it will be imposable to hide from human eyes.

[Were Dono]

=] sounds intresting.
I can&#39;t wait to see you put the characters in the story.

I worked on my picture more so everyone could see what she looks like better
And my friend put in the words and nifty design.

http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b215/0Were0Dono0/EverythingIdocolor.png

[Moon Hunter]

CHAPTER ONE, BEGINING&#39;S- part one
Brittany Smith
1
I turned down the cournry road, in was close to midnight, and i had the black convertable&#39;s roof down and the headlight&#39;s on high. I wouldn&#39;t say my brown hair was being &#39;dramaticly flung around&#39; in the wind, it was only at my shoulder&#39;s. I glanced in the rear-view mirror and saw A very deep, unusual, blue looking back. My eyes had a dark ring around the iris, and in the middle a light blue, not the best way to blend into human socity, but i&#39;ve lasted 21 years, so i must be doing something right. The road turn ahead and i turned with it. I had very pale skin, about a shade darker than white paper... made some people unconfertable.
I smiled at that thought, made most humans unconfterable... and some werewolves. My hand moved to my wedding ring, on a necklace, around my neck. My heart grew heavy at his memory, but life must go on... or did it? "I wish i knew." I muttered aloud, wishing he was beside me again, "Mabey some day you will be."
I was on my way to New York, i had heard there where a few vampires experimenting with raising the dead, i had to find out. I doubted the mages would let that happen much longer so i had to hurry. I pushed down on the gas and the car&#39;s speed went into the hundreds. A few moments later it happened, there was a bright flash of light, ahead of me, and, when i could see again, a man dressed in a... red cloak... standing in the middle of the road? I swerved, crashed intoa tree and everything went dark.

[Were Dono]

Oh, wow.
You&#39;re a good writer. I love how it turned out so far.
Keep up the good work and I can&#39;t wait to read more.

[midnightclubx]

Awesome writing.
Just like what Were Dono said: "Keep up the good work and I can&#39;t wait to read more."

[Indiana_Jones]

Nice writing. I can&#39;t wait for more, keep it up.

[neoritter]

Concurring with everyone else about the first.....chapter?....anyway, its good though there are some grammatical errors which considering its a story should be fixed. But again otherwise good. The imagery was well done.

[kitetsu]

one thing i forgot to tell you: Terusugu&#39;s werewolf form when naked is primarily green-colored.

Sorry.

[xXNightwindXx]

Hmm...this type of topic is a really good way to start a story...I love to write, but I can never really think of a good character...&#39;cept when I rp...but my brain works different when it&#39;s my story and when it&#39;s someone else&#39;s....so....not to be a copycat....I think I&#39;ll (eventually) start a thread like this...just gotta think of a good plot....

and, I also dig your story so far. I agree there are quite a few grammar mishaps...but that&#39;s what editors are for&#33;
keep up the good work

[Moon Hunter]

CHAPTER ONE, BEGINING&#39;S- part two
Galist Selphanis
1
What the hell??? I looked around, i seemed to be in some kind of forest... but where was this forest? I heard something behind me as i turned, just to see a car speeding toward me. It swerved off the road and crashed into a tree. I ran over as flames began to leap up from the engine. I reached the drivers side, grbbed the woman fron the inside of the car, and pulled her out. I ran, carrying her in my arms, and the car expoloded. The force of the blast knocked me too my knees and sent her crashing to the ground. I lunged forward and cover her body with mine, protecting her.
After a few seconds I looked up and got to my knees. "Um... could you get off me?" A voice said from below me.
I looked down and saw light blue eyes, with a dark ring around the iris, looking back at me. "Um... sorry." I said getting to my feet, and off of her.
"Thanks." She said standing up and then yelled, "WHAT THE HELL WHERE YOU DOING???"
"What are you talking about?" I said looking around, where the hell am I?
"You appered in the middle of the road, what where you doing there?" She asked, anger in her voice.
"I wish I knew." I replied looking at her, "But I don&#39;t even know where &#39;here&#39; is."
She stared at me for a second, "This is norther New York... your not from around here are you?"
"What was your first clue?" I replied, I didn&#39;t have time for this.
"Well, the red cloak, yellow eyes, bandanna with a feather in it, the sheath on your back, and the fact that you have no shoes are a dead give away." She replied, "Where the hell did you come from?"
"Xavis," She stared at me, "A desert planet."
"Not ringing any bells."
"What is this place?"
"Earth."
"Never heard of it."
"Great." She said rubbing her temples, "I don&#39;t know what your doing here, but I&#39;m on my way to New York, you can tag along if you want."
"I need to find Kuy." I replied and set off into the forest.
"Who the hell is Kuy?" She called after me.

[Moon Hunter]

CHAPTER ONE, BEGINING&#39;S- part three
Brittany Smith
1
"Who the hell is Kuy?" I called.
"My pheonix." He called back.
I stood there for a second and started after him, granted fallowing a nut case into the forest isn&#39;t the best idea. A pheonix hasn&#39;t been seen on Earth in alomost seven hundred years. I cought up to him and asked, "Ok, what&#39;s you name?"
He turned to me and took a small bow, "I&#39;m Galist Selphanis. May I ask you name?"
"Brittany Smith." I replied.
"It&#39;s a pleasure to meet you." Galist said and countinued his search.
I few minutes later we came to a clearing in the forest. There was a man their, hazel eyes, dark brown hair, and white skin, with a little shade of tan. He was wearing dark blue robes with some siblols on it, runes if i had to guess. He was sitting on a log in the center of the clearing, a white staff with a violet diamond on top leaned aginst it next to him. But the thing that caough you attention the most was the pheonix sitting next to him.
It feathers where to color of fire, duh, it&#39;s eyes seemed to be on fire, and it was about the a foot and a half tall. "Kuy?" I asked.
"Kuy." Galist replied and the pheonix looked up.
It seemed smile as it flew over. As it landed on Galist shoulder the man stood. "You are very lucky to have a pheonix at your side." He said lift his staff.
"And you are?" I asked.
"Taris K. Straywood, High Mage, Journeyman for Mage Guild." He replied bowing his head, "And you are?"
"Brittany." I replied.
"Galist Selphanis, why are you out here?"
"I felt a... lets just say i was drawn here." Taris looked Galist over, "Your not from around here."
"It&#39;s a long story." I replied.
"And the night is still young." Galist said looking at me.

[Were Dono]

Ohhohoh..
And the night is young.

Pst.
You should get on and post more xD
The curiosity about this story is killing me.

[midnightclubx]

I agree, we must see more.

[Moon Hunter]

CHAPTER ONE, BEGINING&#39;S- part four
Taris K. Straywood
1
"Well now, that one hell of a story. A little longer than I would have hoped, but still..." I said trailing off at the end, could this be what I felt?
"Well now that we have Kuy we can go, right?" Brittany said looking at Galist.
"What&#39;s your rush?" I asked, she wanted to be somewhere else, but something seemed off about her.
"I need to get to... a place that&#39;s non of your business." She replied.
"New York." Galist said, glaring at her, "We&#39;re going to New York."
"Ah." I said getting back to my feet, "I&#39;m on my way to New York on..." I looked at Brittany, "It doesn&#39;t concern you."
"Could you give us a ride then, because my car is in no shape to go anywhere for a long long time."
I opened my mouth to reply when the far end of the clearing exploded. I lifted my staff and aimed at the man... who had been pinned to the ground by a... demon??
The demon&#39;s eyes where black, it&#39;s scales red, it possesed no tail or wings, it was a low level demon. The man kicked it over his head and stood up. The demon swung and he went flying. When he crashed into a tree I got a good look at him. His hair was black, his skin was a ruddy white, a long scar went down the right side of his face, and his eyes where red.
The guy dropped to the ground and roared, baring his teeth, which had taken on a red tint. He pulled of his jaket and black fur bagan to grow, werewolf. As he charged toward the demon his feet began to shift and claws grew. When he had cover half the distance his muzzle grew, his ears began to shift, his tail was almost done growing, and fur covered his entire body. Then the change was done and he colided with the demon.
There was a flash of red light to my right and Galist stepped forward, a eight foot long sword in his hand made of fire, so he has bonded to the pheonix. Brittany stood by his side claws and fangs fully grown. "I don&#39;t think we should get involved," I said looking back to the black werewolf and the demon trying to tear eachother appart, "This is their fight."
Their was a roar from the werewolf as the demons claws ripped into his chest. He fell back and crash to the ground. The demon lunged and the werewolf&#39;s right hand shot up, tearing into the demon&#39;s chest. The demon stood the for a second, shock on it&#39;s face, and then it burst into flames.
The black werewolf stood up, after the demons corpse dropped to the ground, and faced us. It growled, took a step towards us, and collapsed.

[Moon Hunter]

CHAPTER ONE, BEGINING&#39;S- part five
Brittany Smith
1
"What the hell was that?" I asked as Galist and Taris rushed over to the black werewolf.
"I&#39;ll ask questions later," Galist replied, "Right now we need to find out if-"
Galist was cut shrt when the black werewolf shot to it&#39;s feet and lunged at him. Taris&#39;s hand shot up and a fire ball shot from his palm. The fireball colided with the black werewolf&#39;s chest, causing him to stumble back. It roared again and Galist roard back, just as loud. The werewolf&#39;s eyes filled with rage and it lunged again. This time at Taris, who wasn&#39;t prepared. He went flying back, crashing into a tree, and slumping to the ground, out cold. Galist charged, jumped, and landded on the black werewolf back, his pheonix/sword cslashing acrros his back.
While the two of them fought I closed my eyes, time to change. I pulled off my dress, my necklace, and put them on the ground. I focused and my change began. Pure white fur began to grow and my brwon hair lightened and grew longer. Black claws grew, along with my muzzle, and my tail started to form. As my change picks up speed I hear Galist get thrown off the werewolf&#39;s back and crash to the ground.Then my change was done and i oppend my eyes. I could feel some of my fangs poking out from my lips and my fur always seemed to be fluffy, but that&#39;s bisides the point, the black werewolf male was staring at me, teeth bared.
I bared my teeth and took a stepp to the right, i need to get Galist next to me, for his safty. The black werewolf took a step to the left and i took another step to the right. After a few more steps to the right i was next to Galist, who was trying to get to his feet. "I&#39;m ok," He gasped, "I&#39;m on this palnet for less than a hour and i get attacked."
I smilled a little and the black werewolf fell to his kness. Taris stood their, a second fireball in his hand. The werewolf turned on him, and i lunged. The black werewolf looked back to me as my roundhoused kicked the side of his head. This time when the werewolf hit the ground, he stayed down. "Tie him up." Taris said, "And then we&#39;ll get some answers."

[Moon Hunter]

CHAPTER ONE, BEGINING&#39;S- part six
Galist Selphanis
1
"Tie him up." Taris said, "And then we&#39;ll get some answers."
"And how do you suggest that?" I asked, "Last time I looked we didn&#39;t have any rope."
Brittany nodded in agreement and Taris shook his head. He lowered the end of his staff to the ground and made a line in the ground. Then he said a few words, that i don&#39;t knoew the meaning of, and the line in the ground, glowed and formed... rope. "Making something as simple as rope is easy for a Hight Mage." Taris replied, giving me a blank look.
"Brittany, do you think you could tie this guy up?" I asked, and then wispered, "I&#39;m going to get some answers from Taris."
Brittany nodded and grabbed the black werewolf&#39;s leg and dragged him over to the clearing&#39;s edge. I couldn&#39;t help but smile. "Why are you here?" I asked Taris, turnning to him.
"I felt a shift in power." I stared at him, "The level&#39;s of light magic were unusually high."
"Meaning?" I asked, as Kuy changed back into a pheonix and landed on my shoulder.
"Meaning something caused the shift i felt, perhaps to was you." He replied.
"Yeah, well I&#39;m lucky that way."
"How are you ribs?"
"Huh?"
"You took a nasty hit, i know your a werewolf, but it still could have broken something."
"I&#39;ve had worse."
"The scars on your right arm tell me that."
"Um... He&#39;s tied up." Brittany said, walking up dressed and in her human form.
"Good," Taris said, and he walked over to the black werewolf, who was beging to reverse forms.
"By the way, that was a nice kick. How&#39;d you lean it?"
Brittany&#39;s eyes seemed to cloud and she said, "Some one very close to me taught it to me."

[Moon Hunter]

CHAPTER ONE, BEGINING&#39;S- part seven
Blood Claw
1
My head was killing me, what the hell happened? I opened my eye slowly and pain shot through my skull. "Good morning sunshine." A male voice said to my right.
I looked over and saw a man, in blue robes. "Mage." I muttered and felt the bark of a tree digging into my back.
I looked at the ropes holding me to the tree and snarled, "Let me go."
"Who are you?" A young woman asked to my left.
I glared at her and asked, " What makes you think i&#39;ll answer that?"
The guy in the center shook his head, "What&#39;s your name?"
"Blood Claw, your&#39;s?"
"Galist Selphanis."
"Well arn&#39;t your formal, now let me go." I snarled, "Or i&#39;ll rip your throat out."
"You could be a little nicer." The woman said, and I looked back at her.
"I&#39;m not a nice guy, especially when i&#39;m tied to a tree by two werewolves, a mage, and i&#39;m naked&#33;" I roared.
They were silent for a second and then the woman vanished behind the tree, a second later the rope went limp and i got to my feet. "Who are you people?" I asked, looking to each of them.
"Brittany." She said, he eyes locked on my face.
"Galist Sel-"
"Yeah, i got yours, and what about you mage?" I asked, glaring at the mage.
"Taris K. Straywood, High Mage, Journeyman for Mage Guild."
"I&#39;m gona tell you three things right now. One: I don&#39;t like titles, they piss me off. Two: I have a motorcycle at the edge of the forest, so, how about I get some pants on and we&#39;ll talk more." I said and started to walk away.
"You said three things" Taris said and i stopped.
I turned my head and looked at him, "And three: I&#39;m not Mr. Personality."
"I would have never guessed." Taris muttered, he forgot i&#39;m a werewolf.
I started walking again, "And one more thing, Don&#39;t piss me off."

[Were Dono]

Ohh.
The badass character.
Hehe. Still can&#39;t wait for more.

[Moon Hunter]

Wolf War Chapter one BEGINNING’S, part eight
Taris K. Straywood
1
I watched at Blood Claw vanished into the wood. “He must be the motorcycle parked next to my truck.” I muttered.
“Is it just me or does he seem… off?” Galist asked as we started the quarter of a mile walk to my truck.
“I’m more concerned about the fact that he was fighting a demon, but… yes… something did seem off.” Brittany said quietly.
“Did you sense anything, Taris?”
I was quiet for a few seconds before saying, “He gives off a powerful dark aura, but I sense good as well.”
“And that mean’s?” Galist asked.
“I don’t know yet.” I replied, there was more to the situation than met the eye.
2
When we reached the truck, Blood Claw was fully dressed in black pants, boots, a white t-shirt, and a black leather jacket. He looked up at us and I got my first good look at him. His irises where blood red, his hair as jet black, he had a scar going down the right side of his face, over his eye, and ruddy white skin. “I was beginning to think you guys weren’t coming… can’t say I’m happy to see you.” He growled and stood up.
I saw a flash of metal under his jacket, I mutter the first few words to the fireball spell, and asked, “What do you have under there?”
He pealed back the jacket and I saw two handguns gleaming in the moonlight. “Are we done with the twenty questions?” He asked, letting the jacket fall back into place, “Cause it’s really getting old.”
“Why do you have those… you a cop?” Brittany asked, looking at Blood Claw in confusion.
“I’m not a cop, I have these because the hunters force me too. I don’t know about you but they have become on hell of a pain in the-”
“I thought using gun made a werewolf a cowered?” Galist said, eyebrow raised.
“I’m very adaptable.” He snarled, “I don’t like using them but I still do.”
He turned around and grabbed two pars of contacts out of the pack on his motorcycle and tossed one to Galist. “You’re gong to want those, red and yellow eyes stick out among humans, and I don’t think we’re going to want to attract attention.” He looked at me, “You might want to change into something a little less… robe, and Brittany… maybe a white is a little… much, we’ll need to get you a more discreet set of clothing, there’s a few shops with reasonable prices. Galist, your going to need something else too.”
“And who put you in charge?” I asked, my anger flaring, if I little patience for werewolves I had even less for werewolves who bossed me around.
He walked up to me, his eyes now dark brown, and stared into my eyes, “By the looks of it, I’m the only one here who has lived around humans and I have the most experience with them. If you have a problem with that, well, let’s just say I could care less.”
Blood Claw stalked back over to his motorcycle; oh this was turning out to be a wonderful friendship.

[Moon Hunter]

Wolf War Chapter one BEGINNING’S, part nine
Brittany Smith
1
Taris got into his truck and the windows turned black. Blood Claw let out a small chuckle, “Darkness spell.”
“You know a lot about magic.” Galist said, putting the contacts in, “How?”
“Lets just say magic and me go way back.” He replied.
“Just out of curiosity, where are you going?” I asked, “Because I’m heading to New York.”
“That’s where I’m going.” Blood Claw replied.
“Why?”
He stood there with his back to me and then growled, “My reasons are my own.”
Taris got out of his truck dressed in a… suit. “By the way Galist, your phoenix will have to stay hidden.”
“He’s right, most humans won’t be able to see it, but we don’t want to take any chances.” Blood Claw said, nodding.
“Very well.” Galist muttered.
“Um… Taris, where are you heading?”
“New York, I’m their on business.”
“What kind of business?” Galist asked.
“It would seem that a small group of vamps are experimenting with dark magic.” My heart stopped, “I’m heading there to stop them and speak with the leader of a small Mage guild in the area, they may be helping the vampires.”
I had too hurry, they may be my only chance… but no I had to beat a High Mage to them, great.
Galist and I got into Taris’s truck, as passengers, and Taris drove. Blood Claw was in front us on his motorcycle and we set off toward New York City. After half an hour of driving I felt the first waves of sleep wash over me. I leaned me head on Galist’s shoulder, without knowing it, and drifted to sleep.
2
I felt the car stop and I opened my eyes, it was still night. “Why’d we stop?” I asked, looking over at Taris and realizing my head was on Galist’s shoulder.
I shot up, blushing, and Taris said, “Clothing store, Blood Claw is already inside.”
I opened the door of the truck and got out, the air smelled wet. “It’s going to rain soon.” Galist said, getting out of the truck.
“Yeah, I like the rain.” I replied and walked into the story.
IT looked like any other tourist trap, souvenirs galore, and clothing that was too high priced. A young man, human, was at the counter. He watched me come in, eyes shifting down to my chest, his lips slightly curving up. I surprised a growl and walked into the clothing area of the store. Blood Claw was sitting in chair, eyes closed, and I asked, “Aren’t you going to get anything?”
“I have a small apartment in New York.” He replied.
I looked back to the door as Galist walked in with Taris, the guy at the register started at them. I walked into woman’s department and grabbed a pair of blue pants, a white shirt, and a white pair of sandals. While I didn’t like getting out of the dress, Blood Claw was right, I needed to be discreet.
I walked past him again and he murmured, when I passed him, “I spy, with my little eye, a tattoo on you back, light blue angel wings... nice choice.”
I smiled a little and walked into the changing room. While I took off the dress, I kept the bracelets on my legs and my necklace; there was no way I was talking those off. I pulled on the pants, slid on the shirt, and slipped on the sandals. I walked out and Galist got out of the dressing room next to me. He was wearing black pants, black sandals, a red shirt, and he still had his bandana and cloak on. We walked to the counter, Blood Claw and Taris where waiting there for us, and the guy said, looking at Galist, “Dude, wasn’t Halloween last month?”
“Just ring up the cloths.” Blood Claw growled.
He did and we left a few minutes later. “Well that went smoothly.” Taris said.
“For once.” Blood claw muttered, too low for Taris to hear.
I looked at Galist and he shrugged. We got back in the car, and the four of us got under way... again.

[Moon Hunter]

Wolf War Chapter Two NEW YORK FUN, part one
Blood Claw
1
It was close to ten when we finally reached the Brooklyn Bridge and the New York traffic. I pulled to a stop and looked back at Taris’s truck, dark blue... I liked black better. I could see that Brittany and Galist where talking, but Taris’s eyes where studying me. I looked back ahead and moved up a few inches. “I hate the city.” I muttered.
It took us a good hour to get into the city and get to my apartment. As I turned into the parking structure I saw a familiar car parked in one of my, two guest, spaces. I pulled into my spot, Taris pulling in on my right, as a young man got out of his sports car. “Blood Claw, it’s good to see you.” He said, louder than usual as I turned off my motorcycle.
Steven Armstrong was still as cocky as ever. He has green eyes, silver hair, and ruddy white skin. He was wearing his normal black short-sleeved shirt that says "Sensation", kinda saggy jeans, and his normal spiked hair “Hello Steven, is Terusugu here?”
“Yeah, I gave him a ride and he’s up at your-“ Steven’s gaze goes past me too Galist, Taris, and Brittany, who have all gotten out of Taris’s truck, “Who are they?”
“It’s a long story,” He looked at me nervously, he’s shy, “I’ll tell you and Terusugu when we get up to my apartment.”
Steven nodded and I took the lead, he fell behind and walked with Brittany, while Taris and Galist brought up the rear. “So… what’s your name?” Steven asked Brittany in a low voice.
“Brittany, yours?” She replied.
“Steven… Armstrong.” He replied and smiled, just as shy as when I first met him.
Brittany Smith
1
“Steven… Armstrong.” He said reaching out to shake hands.
I shook his right hand and saw scars and a huge bite mark on his arm. “What happened to you?” I asked, looking back up at him as he snatched his arm away.
“He won’t tell you.” Blood Claw said walking out onto the street, “I’ve known him for years and he still hasn’t told me.”
I nodded and we walked across the street, to a huge brick building. He walked into the lobby and a middle-aged man looked up and said, “It’s good to see you again Mr. Knight.”
“Thank you.” Blood Claw replied, and headed toward an elevator.
After we all got in, Galist asked, “Mr. Knight?”
“I can’t go around calling myself Blood Claw… Steven, does Terusugu still have a key?”
“I think so… why?”
“If you two have had a single party in my apartment, I’ll kill you.”
Steven burst out into a fit of laughter, “Yeah, that’ll happen when satin starts a snowball fight.”
The elevator doors opened and Okinawa-tanned skin, opal green eyes, and light green hair that darkened to olive green just to the base of his scalp man stood there. I could barley see his eyes because his hair went to his shoulders, covering both eyes, and was curled at the ends. “Hello, Blood Claw.” He said with a thick Japanese accent.
“Hello, Teru. It’s been a while.”
“Fifty years?”
“About.”

[midnightclubx]

I like how this is going so far, keep it up.

[Moon Hunter]

Wolf War Chapter Two NEW YORK FUN, part two
Galist Selphanis
1
“Fifty years?” Teru asked.
“About.” Blood Claw replied.
“WHAT?” Brittany and Taris shouted.
Blood Claw looked back at us, “Come with me, to my apartment, and I’ll explain what I can… or want too.”
“You haven’t changed.” Teru said, as Blood Claw got off the elevator.
“What floor are we on?” I asked.
“Fifty-Second” Blood Claw replied.
We walked down the hallway and came to apartment 66, with another six etched into the wood, and Taris laughed, “Your nuts.”
“Yeah.” Blood claw replied and opened the door.
I looked over at Taris, his eyes widened, and we walked into the… apartment??? The room was huge, their was a patio with a glass wall on the other side, in the center of the room their where three couches, firming a semi-circle, their was a bar to the right, book shelves to the right, a kitchen next to the bar, and a hallway leading to several room. “How does this qualify as an apartment?” Brittany asked as we all looked around.
Blood Claw walked to the couches and sat down on one, putting his legs on the rest of it. Teru and Steven sat down on the couch on the far side. Brittan, Taris, and I sat down on the third and final couch.
“So, where do you want to start?” Blood Claw asked, taking out his contacts.
“How about how you look twenty-something and he says.” I said, nodding to Teru and taking out the contacts, “that the last time you two saw each other was fifty years ago?”
“Well,” Teru said, “I’m 302 years old and Blood Claw here is 486.”
“How is that possible?” Taris asked, looking from Teru to Blood Claw.
“I don’t talk about it.” Blood Claw replied, getting up and walking over to the bar, “but, I was cursed.”
“I had an unfortunate accident.” Teru said as Blood Claw started mixing a drink.
“Teru was… um, “Steven said, “He had a misfortunate encounter with dragon’s blood.”
Taris looked over at him, “That would explain the green hair, moles, and the fact that your nails green… dark dragon?”
Teru nodded and said, “It had two good effects, I don’t age and the moon no longer effects me.”
“Lucky.” Blood Claw muttered, downing the glass.
“Blood Claw, maybe you should tell the who and what you are.”
“It’s a long story.”
“What’s your point?” Steven asked, “You told me… I could tell them.”
Both Teru and Blood Claw looked at him and Blood Claw said, “That’s the first time you’ve volunteered to talk to someone.”
Blood Claw stood their for a second and said, “No, I have nine quest rooms, each of you can have your own, and don’t come to mine… it’s the on at the end of the hall. The refrigerator is fully stocked, so feel free to eat something.”
Blood Claw walked down the hallway and vanished from sight. “Yeah, he’s Mr. Personality.” Turis said and Teru laughed.
“That’s putting in nicely, I’ve know him for a long time… he wasn’t always like that, but thing’s change.” Teru said standing, “I suggest you all get some sleep, you all look like hell.”
2
I took the first room on the right, it was decent. A bed, dresser, a fan on the ceiling, and a window, where Kuy was perched looking inside. I opened it and Kuy flew in, landing on the bed post. I laid down and closed my eyes, letting sleep take over.
Taris K. Straywood
1
I took the second room on the left, and sat down on the bed. I said a few words and my staff appeared leaning against the dresser. I laid down and flicked my wrist, closing the door and turning off the light. Who was Blood Claw, why was Galist here, how did Blood Claw and Teru know each other, why did Brittany seem sad, and, for lack of a better word, what the hell is going on?
Brittany Smith
1
I took the second room on right, when I closed the door I curl up and take a nice long nap, I loved naps. I stroked my wedding ring and couldn’t help but wonder how I was going to get to the vampires, could I beat Taris to them? “I miss you.” I murmured and fell asleep holding my ring, my thoughts lingering on him.
Blood Claw
1
I took of my jacket and put it on the hanger. The room was black, the bed, walls, dresser all black. Leaning on the foot of my bead, in its sheath, was my sword, the entire sword was white, a black diamond at the end of the hilt. I sat down on the edge of my bed and felt something moving beneath the skin on my back. I dug me nails into my palms until the feeling stopped and the smell of blood emanated from my hands. I laid down and closed my eyes, “Another demon dead and another day done.”
Terusugu
1
“Tonight I’m opening the club and I was wondering if you would come?” Steven asked me as I handed him his drink.
“You know I’ll be there, and Blood Claw too.” I replied, “And I thing the rest of them will come too.”
He gulped it down and asked, “What do you think about them?”
“They look like good people, but you know what they say about looks.” I replied, sipping my drink.
“I don’t know, what?”
“They can be deceiving.”
“Oh.”
“And they can kill.”
Steven was quiet for a second and said, smiling, “Aren’t you positive.”

[Moon Hunter]

Wolf War Chapter Two NEW YORK FUN, part three
Naoy Lebel
1
“The music is too loud.” Mia Tobira said to me, as I took another sip of beer.
DJ NEXUS, Steven Armstrong, had opened the club and the place had filled within less than an hour. I sat with Mia, a werecat, in a reserved area, waiting for Blood Claw, Teru, and a few extra guests. “So, who do you think is coming?” I asked, “Blood Claw doesn’t seem like a ‘I make friends easily’ person.”
Mia laughed, “Yeah, you defiantly don’t know him.”
Mia looked nineteen, but was sixty-three, had golden-green, almond-shaped eyes, like a cats, she always wore sunglasses around humans, she has white hair, with pale bluish-purple on the tips, in a sort of bobs just underneath her ears, very pale cream colored skin, and was wearing a brown knee-length skirt, black boots, and a long-sleeved-a-bit-too-big-for-her-shirt. She had a slim figure… completely average… except for the eyes and her face.
I had ocean blue eyes, hazelnut hair, about jaw length, white skin… I didn’t see sun that often. I wore black pants, a white t-shirt, and black boots. I took another drink and smiled, “I’m looking forward to talking to him again.”
“Talking about anyone I know?” Blood Claw asked, putting his hand on my shoulder.
“Hello, Claw.”
Blood claw and Teru sat down in two chairs and three more people took the last three seats. “This is Galist, Taris, and Brittany.” Gesturing to the three people.
“Can I get you something to drink?” A waitress asked stopping next to Blood Claw.
“Scotch.” Blood Claw said.
“Beer.” Taris asked.
“I’ll have a… water.” Galist said.
“Give him a Scotch.” Blood Claw said.
“I’ll have a beer.” Brittany said, “I don’t drink that often.
Brittany Smith
1
Mia looked at me and said, “Neither do I.”
I looked back at her and she took off here sunglasses. Here eyes where golden-green, almond-shaped… like a cats. “Werecat.” I snarled.
One of her eye brows raised, “Something tell me that we’re not going to get along.”
The drinks arrived and I downed the entire thing I a few gulps. When I looked back to the group they where all staring at me. “Another.” I said to the waitress.
“This is going to be a long night.” Teru muttered and Taris nodded.
Galist Selphanis
1
The night progressed slowly, by midnight Brittany had passed out, Mia and Naoy where dancing, Teru was talking to Blood Claw, and Steven was playing music and having a blast. I scanned the dance floor looking for nothing in particular. I took another sip of Scotch, and my eyes fell on Steven, he rubbing his forehead, like he was in pain. He let another person take over and stumbled over to us. “You look bad.” Teru said looking up at Steven as he sat down.
He was about to sit when he went lip and dropped to the ground, convulsing. Teru and Blood Claw lunged at him and the room went silent. Mia and Naoy push through the crowd, we all crowed around Steven. His eyes had turned white and he whispered, “Darkness closes in, the shadows grow, evil is here, death will come, and hell’s fire will burn this Earth.”
His eyes closed and he went limp. “We need to get him out of here.” Teru said and Blood Claw nodded.
Blood Claw and Teru lifted Steven, I lifted Brittany and we left the club, we needed to get to a safer place.

[Moon Hunter]

Wolf War Chapter Two NEW YORK FUN, part four
Blood Claw
1
I closed the door to Steven’s room and walked into the living room. Galist, who had changed back into his normal clothing, was sitting next to Brittany, who was holding her head. Mia was standing next to the window, looking out over the city, Teru and Naoy where at the bar staring at empty glasses, and Taris, who had also changed back into his robes, was sitting on the couch, running his hand through his beard. “Does this happen often?” I asked Treu.
“Only when soothing very good or very bad is going to happen.”
“How bad?” Taris asked.
“The last time he had one, this strong, it was September 11th.”
“What do you suggest we do?” Brittany asked.
“We should stay here.” Mia said, “It’s safe.”
“I wasn’t asking you.”
“I didn’t do anything to you.”
“Shut up.”
“No, I don’t know what your-”
Brittany go to her feet hand stalked over to Mia, they glared at each other for a good minute. “I want to make one thing clear, I don’t like you, and as far as I’m concerned you can go to hell. And if I want your opinion I’ll beat it out of you&#33;”
Galist got up and started Brittany back to the couch and Teru said, “She’s right, we should stay here, it’s the safest place there is.”
The door to Steven’s room opened and he came out rubbing his head. “What are you doing?” Teru and I lunged for him but he held up a hand. He walked over to the bar and sat down, “My head’s killing me.”
“Are you ok?” Taris asked, walking over and looking into Steven’s eyes.
“Yeah, but something bad is going to happen.”
“Could you be a little more specific?” Mia said walking over.
The glass wall to the balcony exploded, causing all of us to be knocked over.
Taris K. Straywood
1
I hit the ground and a bar stool crashed into my back. Glass ripped across my skin and I turned to look. Six men in full body armor where dropping down onto the balcony. I murmured the summing spell and my staff appeared in my hand. As I stood Blood Claw lunged over the bar, fangs and claws out. Mia, had sprouted fur, claws, and fangs lunged around the couch. Galist and Brittany, who both had their claws and fangs fully grown, lunged over the couch and charged. Teru and Steven stood up, their claws and fangs, growing. Naoy stood up, knives into his hands.
The first solder raised a two handguns and opened fire. We all dived for cover; Galist Brittany, Steven, and I took cover behind the couch. Teru, Naoy, Mai a took cover behind the bar. Blood Claw dived at the man, hit him, and they both went flying over the edge of the balcony.
“NO&#33;” Mia and Teru Roared
The front door burst open two solders raised their weapons. Naoy wrist flicked and the guy on the left had a knife sticking out of his forehead. I murmured a few words, a fireball appeared in my hand, and I ignited the second guy. He screamed and vanished into hallway. I looked over the couch and say Mia lung at the sixth guy, and ripped him apart. Galist and Brittany jumped through the air, and crashed down on the fourth and sixth guy, crushing them and tearing into them. Teru lumped at the third guy, who opened fire, bullets grazed the side of his chest. The second guy turned to fire at them and a knife ripped through his neck.
We all converged on the center of the living room and Brittany put her hands on the on Teru’s side. There was a glow and the wounds healed. “Thanks.” He said.
Gun fire ripped through the walls, and we all dropped to the ground. “What the hell is going on?” Galist yelled.
I pinched a second fireball through the door and screams filtered. Three men came in through the door and a roar ripped through the air behind us. I looked back, we all did, and what we saw shocked us. Standing to the side of the balcony was Blood Claw, his eyes on fire, his claws, which where blood red, where twice as long as normal, but the thing that topped all of that, was the demon wings sticking out from his back, and the horns on his forehead. “That’s a new one.” I muttered.
Blood Claw
1
We went soaring over the side of the balcony, and began to plummet. “Oh shit.” I said as I felt pain in my back. The wings tore through my skin and my claws lengthened, the horns tore through my skull, and my vision turned red. I beat my wings and shot back up to the balcony. I landed and saw the three hunters charge in. My anger boiled over and I roared, causing everyone one staring at me. I launched myself forward and crashed into the three hunters, ripping them apart. My feet touched the floor and I felt my wings receded, claws shorten, and the horns shrink. I looked back to them and said, “Yes, I know I have a lot of explaining to do, but can it wait until later?”
They nodded, one by one, and ran around the couch. “We need to get out of this building, the hunters are here.” I said as we ran into the hallway, this fight was just beginning.

[Moon Hunter]

Wolf War Chapter Three ESCAPE, part one
Taris K. Straywood
1
I was about to step into the hallway when a round of gunfire ripped into Blood Claw’s side. He dropped to the ground, gripping his side, and roared in pain. I murmured a few words and a wall of fire appeared between Blood Claw and the shooters and I stepped into the hallway. “Go to my room, grab the sword at the foot of my bed, and bring it to me.” Blood Claw gasped.
“Sword?” I asked.
“Just get it.” He replied standing up, blood dripping down the side of his shirt.
I ran back into the apartment, down to his room, and opened the door. I as a white sword at the foot of the bed, grabbed it, and white hot pain shot through me hand. I screamed and dropped it. “What the hell?”
There was a thud behind me and I turned around to see Blood Claw stumbling into the room, Brittany helping him. “Sorry,” He said grabbing the sword, “I’d forgotten it will hurt all but its true wielder.”
“One hell of a time to forget that&#33;” I snapped looked at Brittan’s hands over his wounded side, her face contorted in confusion. “I can’t heal you, it’s not working.” She said looking up at Blood Claw.
“My guess is that your powers don’t work on beings of shadow.” I said and he nodded.
“Weather you like it or not, I’m a demon or a demon werewolf hybrid.” He said, putting the sword in a sheath on his back.
His wounds glowed and healed. “You are one strange man.” I said as we ran back to the hallway.
“You have no idea.”
2
My fire wall spell was still in effect when we reached the rest of the group. “Well, things can’t get any worse.” Mia hissed, still semi transformed.
The lights flickered and then went out. “You had to say it, didn’t you?” Blood Claw replied as the emergency light’s came to life.
He walked over to the elevator, grabbed the doors, and pulled them open. Walked over, looked down, and saw the elevator rising. Blood Claw pulled the sword form its sheath, and pulled it back to cut the wire. Galist grabbed his hand and said, “What if those are innocent people?”
“They aren’t,” Teru replied, “I own the entire building, Blood Claw, Steven, and I are the only one’s who live here.”
“Oh.” Galist replied, letting go of Blood Claws arm, “Cut away.”
Blood Claw swung the sword and cut the wire, sending the elevator plunging down. “All right, we have two way’s down. Way one, we climb down the elevator shaft or, way two, we go down the stairs… or we could split into two teams, one takes the stairs and the other takes elevator. The elevator is a dangerous climb, but they are probably coming up the stairs.”
“Emergency lighting in the elevator is… nonexistent and very bad in the stairwell.” Steven said, glancing around nervously.
“So, in a nut shell, we’re stuck between a rock and a hard place?” Naoy replied.
“Yeah.” Brittany replied, “But things can’t-”
“Don’t finish that sentence&#33;” Teru snapped.

[Moon Hunter]

:coolshift: Now it&#39;s the readers choice, which way should they go? The elevator, the stairs, or both? Post your answers below. :coolshift:

[anarchy]

Stairs, the healthy way..heh

[midnightclubx]

Stairs, it&#39;s less risky.

[Were Dono]

I think stairs.

[Galist]

im sorry if this is out of place.....

Galist would just use his pheonix sword and make a way through (since it is powerful)

but other than that.. he would use the stairs

personally if they use the elevator they risk the chance of a trap (wich may or may not be what you want)

so i vote for STAIRS

[Moon Hunter]

Wolf War Chapter Three ESCAPE, part two
Blood Claw
1
“Stairs.” Everyone said collectively.
“They’re the safest way down.” Galist said.
“Plus it healthier.” Naoy Lebel added with a grin.
“Fine, let’s go.” I replied, “I’ll bring up the rear.”
Taris and Galist were in the front, then Brittany and Steven, Teru and Naoy, and bring up the rear was Mia and me.
“You mind explaining yourself, Blood Claw?” Taris asked, as we entered the almost pitch-black staircase.
“Later.” I growled, this wasn’t the best time to make noise.
After we got down a floor and a half all hell broke lose. Taris and Galist had just stepped down onto the fiftieth floor when a round of gunfire came from the floors below. Bullets came flying through the staircase’s floor, and we all pressed ourselves against the wall. After a few seconds there was silence and a voice echoed from below, “I think we got them.”
“WHAT THE HELL DO YOU THINK YOUR DOING?” another voice roared, “TRYING TO BRING THE ROOF DOWN ON US?”
“I’m sorry sir, but I heard moment up there.”
“I DON”T CARE&#33; SHOOT ONLY IF YOU CAN SEE THEM&#33;”
“Yes, sir.”
I stepped away from the wall and looked down, the beams of flashlights at least ten floors under us. “Naoy, I think this is your job, there are three, maybe four of them.” I whispered, waving Naoy over.
Naoy looked down, nodded, and pulled two combat knives out of his two sheaths on his legs. He went down another floor and vanished from view. By this point everyone was looking down the staircase, some of them gripping the railing. The flashlights reached the point where Naoy vanished and stopped. “Something’s off, its way too quiet.” A voice echoed.
There was a thud, a scream, a short burst of gunfire, and then silence. I took the lead as we moved down the stairs, making as little noise as possible.
2
Naoy wasn’t there. There was, however, two dead bodies, one with a knife in its head and the other, bullet holes in the head. The third guy, who was sat up against the wall, was still alive, a knife in his heart. He looked over at us, smiled, and a dull click emanated through the staircase. He raised his right arm, a grenade in his hand, the pin pulled, and then he went limp, the grenade dropping to the ground and rolling down the staircase.
Taris, Galist, Brittany, and I lunged trough the open door, to the forty seventh-floor, while Teru, Steven, and Mia scrambled up the stairs.
An explosion rocked through the stairway and fragments of the stairs and smoke shot through the doorway.
Naoy Lebel
1
I stabbed the last guy in the heart and stepped back, I hated killing, but when it came down to them or me… I choose them. There was a creaking sound behind me and I turned around. The door had opened and their where voices coming from the other side. I crept through the door, sticking close to the wall.
As I snuck the voices got clearer. “What do you mean they vanished?”
“The-they’re gone, sir.”
“I GOT THAT PART, HOW DID THEY VANISH?”
I got closer to the voices and came to an open apartment door. I crouched down, inched forward, and looked inside. There where three men standing their and one woman. The men where wearing identical black clothing, armor, hair cuts, and they each carried some kind of SMG. The woman had pitch black hair, ruddy white skin, and yellow eyes. She was wearing black boots, black pants, and a black tank top.
She was glaring at the guy in the center, her hands balled into fists. “What about the men who came in from the roof?”
“They where slaughtered, sir.”
An explosion echoed through the building and the three men turned around. They looked at me and I swore, time to run. I tried to run, but my body wasn’t moving. The woman walked over, a dark smile on her face. “Well now, who do we have here?” She said, darkly.
I glared at her and she said, “Don’t feel like talking, well then I’ll just have to find out for myself.” She said, reaching out.
Her right hand touched my right temple and pain shot through my skull. I could move, I couldn’t scream, and I heard her voice in my head. Her words came to fast, but each word cut into my skull sending hot flashes of pain. A few seconds she lifted her hand, but my head still throbbed. “Well now, Naoy Lebel, that’s quite a story.” She said walking back to the window and looking out.
How did she know my name? “Their in the stairwell, but by the sounds of it their dead, but still...” She looked back at the three men, “We can handle Blood Claw,” She looked back outside, “but who’s this Galist Selphanis and why is Taris K. Straywood here?” After a second she muttered, “And who’s Brittany Smith? I’m not surprised that Steven Armstrong and Terusugu are here.” She looked at me, “Mia Tobira and you are no threat.”
I saw her lips move and the glass window turned into a wall of fire, no… wait, it was a tunnel, a tunnel of fire? One of the men asked as she stepped into the fire-tunnel, “Um… sir, what do you want us to do?”
“Dispose of him.” She replied and the tunnel closed behind her.

[Silver Predator Wolf]

Hi, i just jion the forum and just read your idea. I like it. Hope you dont mind last minute entrys. Heres mine. If you dont like some parts you can remove them. But before u do that i hope u dont mind e mailing me wat r the parts that need to be remove or change. Thanks. My e mail is apocalypse_wolf_666@hotmail.com

Name:Lathena
Species:Werewolf
Age:17
Gender:Female
Eye Color:Purple
Hair color:Silver
Skin Color:White
Special abillity:Transform at will, agile, Rapid healing, Hand seal and telekinesis.
Personality(optional): Friendly, outgoing, smart, funny, helpfull and willing to do anything to protect her friends even if it means sacrificing her life.
Extra Discription(optional): Carries 2 kantana, one gaunlet at each hand with a triple blade double edge balde. Long hair till near the waist line and she looks like her mother.
History(optional):Entire clan was wipe out. Sole survivour. Daughter of the Alpha pair. Taken in by her fathers teacher and taught to become the first ninja werewolf. Was taught most of the hand seal including the forbiden seal. ( The Demon soul possession) Skill diss: After performing the seal the persons body will be taken over by a demons soul. If the person has a weak mind the demon will take over the body. If the person has a strong mind he/she will have full control of the demon and its powers and can eject the demons soul out of the body at will.

[Silver Predator Wolf]

They should head for the stairs.

[Were Dono]

Originally posted by Silver Predator Wolf@Jul 28 2006, 03:13 AM
They should head for the stairs.

20529


...If you read what he posted
You would have seen they already chose an action.

[Moon Hunter]

Wolf War Chapter Three ESCAPE, part three
Mia Tobira
1
My ears where still ringing when I came to my senses and dug my claws into the stairwell, my legs swinging in the air. I looked down and saw Steven, blood flowing down his left arm, holding onto my legs, staring down into the smoke. Someone grabbed my arms and I looked up at Teru, blood flowing down the left side of his face, and he said, “I don’t think this is the best time or place to hang out.”
“Yeah well,” I replied as he started pulling me up, “I think Steven is the one ‘hanging out’.”
Once I was able to pull myself up, Teru grabbed Steven and pulled him too. “Thanks.” Steven said as he pulled himself onto the remnants of the staircase and looked down, the smoke was still too thick to see through.
“Think anyone else made it?” Steven asked, leaning against the wall.
Galist Selphanis
1
My eyes fluttered open and I shook my head. There was a grown from under me and saw Brittany looking back up at me. “This is the second time we’ve ended up like this.”
I got to my feet, helped Brittany to hers, and looked around. Taris was leaning against the wall, looking into the stairway, his staff unharmed. Blood Claw pushed some wreckage off of him and got to his feet. “Anyone hurt?” Taris asked, as Blood Claw cracked his neck.
“No, you?” Blood Claw replied.
“No, what about you two?”
“No.” I replied.
“I’m not used to being blown up, but other than that I’m fine.” Brittany replied.
“Let’s not make it a habit.”
There was a shout from further down the hallway and Naoy came running toward us, cradling his arm. Three men where chasing after him, guns raised. By the time they saw us it was too late, Blood Claw broke one’s neck, I chocked the second to death, and Taris incinerated the third. Brittany healed Naoy’s wounds as Taris asked, “What the hell happened?”
“Heard voices, three solders, and one demon woman, fire tunnel.” He gasped.
“Demon woman... fire tunnel?” Blood Claw said looking up, concern in his voice.
“You know her?” Taris asked and Blood Claw glared at him.
“I don’t familiarize myself with demons... but this one I do know. She has black hair, ruddy white skin, and yellow eyes?” He asked.
“Yeah.” Naoy replied, completely healed.
“Her name is Vola (Vol-la)., she’s a high level demon.” We all stared at him, “We’ve run into each more than once.”
“We should go.” I said, “Or at least find out what happened to the rest of the group.”
“No need.” Mia said, poking her head down from the doorway.
She dropped down onto the hallway, fallowed by Steven and Teru.
“Glad to see your all alive.” I said as Brittany glared at Mia.
“So, how are we going to get down now?” Mia asked, ignoring Brittany.
“There is a second staircase; we can take that one down, but…” Teru said.
“But what?” Taris asked.
“But it’ll set off the fire alarm.” Blood Claw said, finishing Teru’s sentence.
“Why don’t we just use the outside fire escape?” Brittany asked.
“They’ll have that covered.” Blood Claw replied, “It would be suicide.”
“How can you be sure?”
“I’ve been hunter before.”
Steven Armstrong
1
We reached the second stairway, the fire alarm didn’t turn on, without incident, but Naoy seemed nervous. When we reached the bottom floor we ran into a problem, we had to get out of the building, and the only way out was through the front door. Blood Claw took the lead and stepped into the hallway. “It all clear.” He called back a few minutes later, “it’s like they where never here.”
We all moved into the lobby, it was completely deserted. “It’s like they went even here.” Blood Claw said again.
“We should get to the cars and the hell out of here.” I replied, “Something’s wrong.”
2
The street was the same, completely abandoned, and we hurried to the parking building. Our cars where parked on the second floor. When we got there we got a unpleasant surprise. Blood Claws motorcycle had been torched, Steven’s car’s tires had been slashed, and only Taris’s truck was intact. “Well, I guess we have our ride.” Blood Claw said, “Taris is driving, of course, two other people in the front, and the rest in the back.”
“Where should we go?” Teru asked.
“The mage guild, we should be safe there.” Taris replied, getting into the driver seat.
While Taris, Galist, and Brittany got in the front, the rest of us pilled into the back. Blood Claw was about to get in when foot steps echoed through the building. The light s began to flicker and he turned, facing the sound. At the far side of the parking structure was a woman walking toward us. Naoy grabbed my arm and murmured, “Vola.”
Vola
1
I walked slowly toward them, no need to hurry. Blood Claw looked at me, rage simmering in his eyes. I smiled and looked at the rest of them, I wasn’t impressed. “So, Blood Claw, how’ve you been?” I asked looking back to him.
“Get out of here.” Blood Claw said, turning his head to the driver, but keeping his eyes on me, “I’ll handle her.”
“We’re no t leaving you.”
“GO&#33;” He roared, they left.
“You’ll handle me, I like the sounds of that.”
Go to hell.”
“Come now Blood Claw, we had some fun, back in the good old days.”
“I was young and angry, but I thought I sent the message when I nearly ripped your arm’s off.”
“Good times.” I replied smiling, “We where quite the couple, killing anything that got in our way… or interrupted us.”
“Screw you.”
“You already did, but that beside the point, it’s time to come home.”
Blood Claw drew his sword, “You know that’s not going to happen.”
My smile faltered and I said, “You can bet me, you know that.”
“I can die trying.” He replied and lunged.
I held my hand out and a black sword, which was identical to his, appeared. I blocked his attack with no effort and said, “I would rather not do this, I don’t have the time.”
Blood Claw brought the sword around again, and I blocked it again. After a few minutes of him attacking and me blocking I got board and when he came in for his next attack, I disarmed him, and held my sword to his throat. “Well, now that that’s over with, come home, he wants to see you.”
“Go to hell.”
“Been there, done that… great place to get a tan.” I smiled, “I know what can change your mind.”
Before he could move my hand shot out and I gripped the side of his head. His eyes widened and then he went limp, dropping too his knees. I lowered with him and made my sword vanish, no need for it now. There was a screech off tires behind be and I spun around, breaking contact with Blood Claw.
The same truck that had left only a few minutes before was speeding toward me. “Oh, shit.” I muttered as it crashed into me.
I flew back and crashed into one of the concrete pillars. I looked back up and saw two men grab Blood Claw and hoist him into the back of the truck, and a woman grab his sword, using part of her sleeve to keep from touching the hilt. I got to my feet and they sped off, cowards.

[Moon Hunter]

Wolf War Chapter Three ESCAPE, part four
Terusugu
1
“We can’t just leave him there&#33;” Steven said, looking at Taris, his knuckles white from gripping the wheel.
“He told us to go.” Galist murmured.
“When do we do what were told to?”
“Steven, that’s enough.” I said, looking down at road as it sped by.
“You can’t seriously think-“
“That’s enough.”
Steven sat there for a second looking at us, and then his shoulders slumped in defeat. “Turn around.” Mia said barley above a whisper.
“I… agree.” Brittany murmured.
“Taris, do it.” Steven said.
Naoy nodded and said, “We can’t just leave him.”
“He’ll be fine.” I said, but I knew better.
Taris nodded and spun the wheel to the right, executing a perfect U turn.
2
We sped back into the parking building and up to the second floor. I saw Vola hovering over Blood Claw, and Taris hit the gas petal. Vola looked back up, at the last second, and then we crashed into her. Steven and I jumped out of the truck and, while Mia grabbed his sword, we put Blood Claw into the back of the truck. Mia jumped in and Taris hit the gas. As we speed past Vola, she tried to grab the truck, but missed. Once we where back on the road I looked down at Blood Claw, he was pail. Mia’s hand was on his forehead and she said, “He’s freezing.”
I put my hand oh his arm, it was stone cold. “What’s wrong with him?” Galist asked looking back at us.
Steven looked up at me and said one word, “Balance.”
“What the hell does that mean?” Brittany asked looking back at us.
“I didn’t reply as I reached for his eyes lid and slowly opened it. His eyes were completely black. “Shit.” Muttered, “We have a very big problem.”
“What’s wrong? Taris asked, glancing back at us.
“Blood Claw is balance, he’s half good and half evil. If this balance is ever… changed to quickly or by too much, he changes. If I had to guess Vola poured darkness into him, his demon half is extremely powerful now.” I took a deep breath, “We need to balance him out or their s going to be hell to pay.”
“How bad is it?” Naoy asked.
“If he wakes up, he’ll be pure evil… his demon half is powerful as it is, but with this… he would rank as a level nine or ten demon, maybe more.”
Taris swore and Brittany asked, “Is that bad?”
“A level nine or ten demon is extremely powerful, apocalypse launching powerful.” He looked back at us, “How do we fix this.”
“Good magic or energy has to be put in him, but I don’t know how much.”
“Then we need to get to the mage guild, they may be able to help.” Taris replyed.
“How far is it?”
“And hour or two away.”
“Drive faster.” Galist replied.
Taris K. Straywood
1
We reached the Blue Call Mage Guild in fifty some minutes, I had driven in the hundreds the entire way. The guild was on a property of twenty acres of forest and the building was a two story brick building.
“Stay here; I’ll go talk to them.” I said getting out.
I got out of the truck, grabbed my staff, and ran to the front door. I ran I and a young woman looked up for a desk in the back of a lobby. “I’m looking for High Mage Akron.”
The young woman stared at me for a second and then said, “And you might be?”
“Taris K. Straywood, High Mage, Journeyman for Mage Guild, where is he?” I replied and the young woman’s eyes widened.
“One moment sir.” She said, running through a pair of wooden doors next to her desk. A few minutes later a man in his mid-fifties, with gray hair, pail blue eyes, and grayish skin and was wearing silver robes, and caring a dark brow staff came out. “Taris, to what do I owe this pleasure?” he said, a wide smile on his face.
“I don’t have time for pleasantries, a friend of mine is in trouble and we need help.”
“Of course I’ll do everything I can to help, is their anything else?”
“I need eight rooms, we need to stay here for a while, and I need to contact my guild.”
“Right away.”
2
It took us five minutes to get Blood Claw in a medical room, and everyone else situated before we where all at the medical room. Blood Claw was on a medical table, and Akron was standing at the head of the table. “So, what’s wrong here?” He asked looking down at Blood Claw.
“A demon did something to him.” Teru said, rubbing his forehead.
“All right, I’ll figure this out, until then I would ask all of you to leave.” Akron said, “I need some privacy.”
Akron
1
After twenty minutes I was able to convince everyone to leave, but only because Taris said he would stay here. After the last person left and Taris closed the door, I put my finger tips on Blood Claw’s; I overheard Taris say his name, forehead and temples. “What are you doing?” Taris asked, and I looked up at him.
“I simple spell to find out what’s going on in his head; maybe he can tell me exactly what’s wrong.” I replied.
“All right, but be careful.”
2
I murmured the last few words of the spell and closed my eyes. I saw darkness and then flames shot up around me. I found myself standing on a rock in a pool of lava, what the hell is wrong with this guy? There was a roar from behind me and I turned around. “Dear god.” I muttered.

[Were Dono]

Another character,
as per request of the writer.

Name: Rathos Vitman
Species: Once human, turned demon
Age: Unknown
Gender: Male
Eye Color: White, there is nothing in his eyes but the white.
Hair color: White
Skin Color: Has a slight tan, but nothing too dark.
Special abillity: He is able to manipulate the darkness, making it dark any time he pleases. He can also form the darkness into energy attacks and objects to fight/kill with.
Personality(optional): Rathos seemed to have gained an alternate personality. One belongs to what’s left of his human side and the other belongs to his demon side. When his demon side is in control, he is very angry. He does not stop to ask questions, he just destroys whatever is in his way. He loves to kill, drink, smoke and do the "Nasty". But, what’s left of his human side, still harbors feeling for Brittany. And after many times of encountering her after he swore he’d kill her, his human side still tries to control himself to no do so.
Extra Discription(optional):
Human side: His hair is very short and white. His build is quite large. His expressions seem to be limited. He wears a tight black shirt (Only tight because he didn’t use to have that much muscle), a pair of dark grey pants, black boots and a pair of black gloves with the fingers cut off. He has a long scar along his right eye and a tattoo on his neck. He is often covered in blood.

Picture: http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b215/0Were0Dono0/tatoom_bryan_fury_tocopy-1.gif

Demon form: A strange black creature with 4 arms. 2 that are smaller than the other. His lizard like tail splits into two, with things that seem to be lights along the way, to help him see in the dark, and like the fish in the deep ocean, lure in his prey. In this form he stants quite tall. around 14 feet.

Picture: http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b215/0Were0Dono0/Xuriahl.gif
History(optional): Rathos had known Brittany for years, even as they were children. Through that time he had developed a love for her. But, when time came that he was going to confess his feelings for her, he found out that she had fell in love with a werecat. He still tried to tell her how he felt and asked her to be with him, but she rejected him. Rathos became upset and confused, feeling that she chose the werecat because he was stronger than him. So, he set out to become more powerful. He found an Mage, offering him the chance to be more powerful. Rathos accepted. But, the power that the mage gave him was one of a Demons, causing him to hate more, and lose a bit of himself. Rathos ended up killing the mage and returning to Brittany with his new found powers. His journey had taken so long, that he just returned when Brittany had found her lover dead outside their home. He became extremely happy. Now was his chance. He showed her his new power. But, instead of being happy, Brittany was freighted by him. She rejected him once more, saying she could never love such a monster.

Rathos became infuriated, when he would have normally not. His demon side began to take him over more and more. After hearing her plans to revive her lover, he swore to her that she would not succeed and if he couldn’t have her, no one would.

[Moon Hunter]

I would like everyone to creat an evil chariter for the story. One example is above and i have Galist&#39;s chariter. Please post soon.

[midnightclubx]

Here&#39;s my evil character:

Name: Travis Freeman
Species: Vampire
Age: Unknown (looks 18)
Gender:Male
Eye Color:Red (once green), wears shdes to cover them
Hair color:Black
Skin Color:African-American
Special abillity:Being able to walk in daylight, and see anything in the dark.
Personality: Not a nice person, but he rarely let&#39;s people talk to him.

History:He was teased at his hometown as a kid when it was around the Civil War. When he was 18, he decides to join the army to escape his owner. He was ranked as a captain after showing his bravery and spirit in battle. After the battle of Gettysbeurg, he mysteriously disappeared and was never seen again, that was because a vampire representing a soldier took him to a place far away from the battlefield without anyone noticeing and bit him on the neck. All of his rage are forever in his eyes and prays that one day the world will suffer like he did.

I was watching Blade (the movie, not the TV show) last night, that&#39;s how I got the idea.

[Silver Predator Wolf]

yo. here is my evil char. hope its good. :closedgrin:

Name:Apocalypse

Species:Devil wolf

Age:22

Gender:Male

Eye Color:Ruby red

Hair color:Black

Skin Color:Gothic black

Special abillity:summoning an army of demons,mind control,possession, resurrection( the spell brings the body back to live but it only a shadow of its former self and it is uder the casters control)and devil armour.(a armour when summon will wrap it self around the person who summons it and will protect it wearer from all fourms of attack. it is almost indestructible. the only type of weapons that is capable of destroying the armour is blessed or holy wepons), devil fire( the fire is so hot that it will melt anything it touches). Very fast and strong. ( his strength and speed is equal to silver ocean and Sweet Fur Amy)

Personality(optional):Pure evil. Nothing else needs to be said.

Extra Discription(optional):Carries a vampire soul blade that will suck the soul out of its victum after the victim died by its blade. As the number of souls the sword seals within it self grows its powers will grow too.

History(optional):The wolf devils son was sent to earth to geather an army of weres and humans to rule the earth and bring chaos to the world. But in order to do that he will first have to kill Silver Ocean who is actually a wolf send down from heaven to stop him. and so far the only person or were that is capable of attacking, widstanding, dogeing his attacks and even killing him is Silver Ocean and Sweet Fur Amy.


if any changes needed to be made plz e mail me. ty

[Silver Predator Wolf]

Name:Sweet Fur Amy

Species:Werewolf

Age:20

Gender:Female

Eye Color:Yellow green eyes

Hair color:Black

Skin Color:White

Special abillity: control over the elements, very fast and strong (slightly weaker than Silver). transform at will,rapid healing.

Personality(optional):always up for a challenge, have no fears, ready to fight at anytime, great werewolf to be friends with.she stand up for others and protect others. Very close to her parents and her brother.

Extra Discription(optional):carries 2 bleesed silver blade kodachi, shuriken( throwing stars) and pistols loaded with blessed silver bullets. She has the sword heaven seeker. it is the only sword that can destroy apocalypse's armour and kill him and it is also the only sword that can injured and kill Silver Ocean.

History(optional):She is the younger sister of Silver Ocean. she is sent down from heaven by their parents to look for her brother who has gone missing when she ran into them and jion their team. and found out that he is dead. and that she is now the new owner of the heaven seeker blade.

Name:Lathena

Species:Werewolf

Age:21

Gender:Female

Eye Color:Purple

Hair color:Silver

Skin Color:White

Special abillity:Transform at will, agile, Rapid healing, Hand seal and the ability to see through any illusion techinque.

Personality(optional): Friendly, outgoing, smart, funny, helpfull abd unquestionabley loyal and willing to do anything to protect her friends,team mates and mate even if it means sacrificing her life.

Extra Discription(optional): Carries 2 kantana, one gaunlet at each hand with a triple blade double edge balde. Long hair till near the waist line.She looks so much like her mother that other werewolfs will mistook her for her mother. whom they though is dead and she (Lathena) always walk around so silently that even when she runs at full speed you wont know that she is running towards you with your back turn till she starts to talk. train to kill with out making a sound and train in unarm combat.As for the 2 kantana the handle of one of it has a wolfs head with its mouth open and the handle of the other blade has a letter L on top of the handle. the one with the L is to be inserted into the open moth of the wolf head that is attached to the other handle. Once the handle is 1/4 inserted into the moth it will stop and holding the two handle together Lathena will have to twist both handle together in the opposite direction of each other. than a soft click will be heard, indicating that the 2 handles are lock. she can use the lock blades with 1 hand or two hands. The blades on the gauntlets are retractable. Her strength is that of an average werewolf. If the collar is remove she will be doing every thing in full strength. . two large dual pistols almost half the length of her arm. Fires blessed explodesive quick silver bullets. She uses these weapon as a last resort. Train to kill without making a sound. She is a professional sharp shooter. the clothes she wear are full lenght body armour, black leather tranch coat with collar fold down and black shoes.


History(optional):Entire clan was wipe out. Sole survivour. Daughter of the Alpha pair. Taken in by her fathers teacher and taught to become the first ninja werewolf. .Was taught most of the hand seal. her parents are the only weres whose eyes have the ability to see through any illusion techinque. it is unknow where they got the ability from. at the age of 20 got married to her child hood sweet heart silver Ocean. But one day Silver Ocean suddenly went missing for no reasson.

Name:Apocalypse

Species:Devil wolf

Age:22

Gender:Male

Eye Color:Ruby red

Hair color:Black

Skin Color:Gothic black

Special abillity:summoning an army of demons,mind control,possession, resurrection( the spell brings the body back to live but it only a shadow of its former self and it is uder the casters control)and devil armour.(a armour when summon will wrap it self around the person who summons it and will protect it wearer from all fourms of attack. it is almost indestructible. the only type of weapons that is capable of destroying the armour is blessed or holy wepons), devil fire( the fire is so hot that it will melt anything it touches). Very fast and strong. ( his strength and speed is equal to silver ocean and Sweet Fur Amy)

Personality(optional):Pure evil. Nothing else needs to be said.

Extra Discription(optional):Carries a vampire soul blade that will suck the soul out of its victum after the victim died by its blade. As the number of souls the sword seals within it self grows its powers will grow too.

History(optional):The wolf devils son was sent to earth to geather an army of weres and humans to rule the earth and bring chaos to the world. But in order to do that he will first have to kill Silver Ocean who is actually a wolf send down from heaven to stop him. and so far the only person or were that is capable of attacking, widstanding, dogeing his attacks and even killing him is Silver Ocean and Sweet Fur Amy.

Name: Silver Ocean

Species: Werewolf/demon (hybrid)

Age: 21

Gender: Female

Eye Color :( in the picture)

Hair color :( in the picture)

Skin Color :( in the picture)

Special ability: Rapid healing, extremely fast and strong, heighten senses, the ghost skill can be cast and won’t wear off after 30 minutes. It will last until she unspells it. By saying the word dis spell in her head. Speed and strength has increase greatly. She moves so fast than before a person can see her and even draw his sword she is already standing behind him/her. She also has the ability to see through any illusion technique. But her most dangerous skill is the ability to kill without damaging the other parts of the body. the skill is called the energy scalpel.( its a skill in which she start by focusing some of her energy into her hands. as the energy in her hands grow her hands will look like they are being burn by a blue flame. after that is done she can use her hands ( still looks like they are being burn by the blue flame) to attack her opponents. this skill will only effect the persons internal organs muscle and tissue and will not show any visible sign of external injury. that is y that skill is her most dangerous. its because all she need is to touch your heart and you will die.) she will only use this skill after she is done “playing” with her opponents or she is dealing with a powerful foe. Skin as hard as Adamantium. and death touch (if she uses this skill any thing she touches will die on contact with her hands. No one is able to block this attack and she is resistant against this spell).

Personality (optional): evil. Quiet, rarely speaks unless she needs to. Will not hesitate to kill another demon if that demon pisses her off.

Extra Description (optional): has a seductive voice, prefer type of combat is close range combat. Her nails are extremely sharp and impossible to break. Can no longer transform. This (the picture) will be her permanent form. She carries the devil soul blade. a blade that is equal to strength to the heaven seeker blade but can only be wield by a powerful demon or hybrid ( the blade is shape like a katana and 2.0 meters long and the blade is black in colour and she has it shaft on her back at the waist). She does not need any armour as her skin is as hard as adamantium. But soft to the touch. it feels like normal skin and even stretches when pulled but when a blade or any foreign object tries to pierce the skin it will either break or it will just hit the skin and drop on the floor. She moves so fast that when she moves in a circle the person or group she is running around of will see more than one of her circling them and she moves so fast that she can even doge bullets and block them with her sword. Her powers are almost equal to the God of Death. When she raises her sword up the blade will start to glow red. When the blade is fully red all she has to do is swing the sword and a huge energy wave that is red in colour will destroy everything that is in its way. (The picture below is Silver Ocean in his new form and the clothing that she will be wearing). And the only blade that can injured her and kill her is the heaven seeker. Her weaknesses are blessed silver bullets, fire and lighting. ( the fire and lighting will not kill her but will weaken her).

History (optional): Parents are werewolfs who are professional assassins.
Mother was known as &quot;The Black Widow&quot;. Father was known as &quot;The Ghost&quot;. (He earn that nick name because he useses that skill and the only other person who has master that skill is Silver Ocean) When Silver Ocean was still studying in Pre School his parents died of old age. He has been living by him self since. On the same day his parents died he meets Lathena and they became friends. They study at the same school and same class through out their study years. As their friend ship grew over the years so did their feeling for each other. They started dating at age 16. They also share their first kiss under the moon light 6 months after they start to date. When they both hit 20 Silver pop the question and ask Lathena to be his mate. She smiled and hugs him and said yes. 7 months later they got married. He is actually a wolf send down from heaven to prevent apocalypse from taking over the earth. Why he was bound with a demon is not known.

[Indiana_Jones]

My evil (neutral) character. Its not a living thing, it is a war robot. Is it good enough?

Name: Vanguara X
Species: Unknown (claimed to be an ancient war machine made by a advanced race)
Age: about 10,000 years old
Gender: Male
Eye color: Red
Hair color: None
Skin color: no skin, its a robot
Height (optional): 15 feet talll
Weight (optional) 4.5 tons

Special abilities: Summoning dark fusion energy that can destroy a building with just one blast. Laser beams, Heavy rocket launcers, Hellfire inferno thrower, auto machine guns, anti-gravity engines that makes Vanguara fly anywhere he wants, just like a hovercraft, but better. Can repair itself after heavy damaged to the body, also rebuilt itself after being destroyed. Immune to lava and nuclear weapons.

Personality: Unknown

Extra description: The machine has built in features. The color unknown alloy is gold, it has 3 scanning recptors (eyes), tough legs, detatchable weapons. Many remains unknown.

History: Vanguara X was built to protect an ancient city from a old advanced race that is extinct centuries ago. After the extinction of the race, it was encase in cold sleep. It keeps the War machine from decaying or destroyed by enivornment&#39;s air. After a few years, it was buried very deep in a old ruin city, probably underground in New York City. However, Vampires manage to find this ancient defender and reprogram its personality to guard their stronghold. The machine is powerful enough to destroy a whole city. The evil Vampire clan called &#39;Aquicels&#39; used this war machine and to destroy its enemies, werewolves and humans. When the Vampires grew tired of Vanguara X, they tore it apart and send it to the junkyards. They did not know its true powers. It can rebuilt and repair itself in 1 hour&#33; When Vanguara is left out in the junkyards, it losts its sanity and still looking for his &#39;true creator.&#39; Many people were afraid of this evil machine. But it is not meant to be evil. It can be a guardian, rather than a war machine.
After the Aquicels abandoned Vanguara, its programming is still evil&#33; To bring it back to the good, it must be taken back to the old city under New York.

Will you accept it?

[Silver Predator Wolf]

your evil char sounds alright. but. u might want to remove the Nuclear destruction abilitie and replace it will something less destructive like a grenade launcher.... or equipt your char with a jet pack on its back that can be seprated and be use as a seprate attack unit arm with twin laser blasters, air to ground and air to air rockets........... ( i got the idea of the jet pack on its back (if u want to have that idea) as a seprate attack unit from watching gundam seed). :allears:

[Were Dono]

Uh...it&#39;s not really up to you to decide if he needs to change anything.
That&#39;s the author&#39;s job.

[Moon Hunter]

Thank you, this is just what i needed. A few things:
One: Indiana_Jones: I like the robot, nice angle.
Two: Silver Predator Wolf: I have you revised chariters, plese don&#39;t make anymore changes.
Three: Were Dono: Got yours.
Galist: I have yours, where can i read Midnight war?
I&#39;m just about ready to make my next post, so no more new chariters for a little while, I need to introduce the others first. I&#39;ll let people knoe when it&#39;s ok to post new chariters again.

[Moon Hunter]

Wolf War Chapter Four EVIL’S part one
Taris K. Straywood
1
Akron went rigged for a second and then stumbled back, his eyes wide. “What’s wrong?” I asked, looking at his horrified face.
“He’s a demon.”
“Yeah, but he’s one of the good guys.”
“You brought a demon here and you knew about it?”
“Yes, now what’s wrong?”
Akron stalked over to me, eyes filled with rage, and said, “He’s a level ten demon, maybe more powerful… his mind is hell itself, or part of it. It looked like some kind of prison.”
“What did you see?”
“I need to think.” He said turning.
“I grabbed his arm, “What did you see?”
He stood there for a second and then said, “Darkness, a prison, and a very powerful demon.”
Brittany Smith
1
I lay on the bed and wondered what the hell had I gotten myself into this time. First his death, then Rathos, now this. We have a guy from another planet, a werewolf demon thing, a werecat, a high mage, a few other werewolves, a human, and a nutcase demon. “I’ve had one hell of a day… how do you think I’m holding up?” I turned over, but he wasn’t their.
I grasped my wedding ring as my heart sank. He knew everything about me, we clicked. They I became a werewolf and he a werewcat… and then we got married. I was the happiest I had ever been. I closed my eyes, felt a tear go down my check, and drifted to sleep.
Galist Selphanis
1
I was sitting in a cafeteria/lounge room, staring at the bottom of an empty glass. Kuy, who had fallowed us, was sitting on my shoulder. “There’s never any rum.” I muttered.
The door opened and Taris walked in and sat down across from me. “Well?” I asked.
“He’s royally screwed up.” He replied, “Akron doesn’t know if they can fix the damage.”
We sat there for a second and then Taris said, “I haven’t had the chance to talk to you.” A short pause, “Can you tell me about yourself?”
“Well, you know my name, but I come from a planet called Xavis, it’s a desert planet, but the sand is iron based. Duke Dedunye of the Selfan took me in and became my foster parent… I don’t remember anything before the age of twelve. At the age of 18 I joined the army under the command of Duke Dedunye and fought in the war between the selfan and the gende. Then was in the forest, what about you?”
“I’ve had an interested in magic since I was very young. My parents are wealthy. I have a rich and normal life, I made many friends in school and college. I took many alchemist and magic classes. My father was a powerful mage, I am following in his footsteps. I eventually became a full-fledged Mages guild member at the age of 18. I started practicing magic as a child. No offence but I don’t like werewolves, since I almost got bitten by one.”
“Don’t worry about it.”
“My father rescued me from them when I was kidnapped by an evil werewolf clan, that&#39;s what most people say in town, including his friends, and family). After my father died in a war, I took care of my mother and siblings in my large manor. I became in second in command of the Silver Mages Guild, some other man took my father&#39;s place in leader. I don&#39;t &#39;hate&#39; werewolves, but I don’t trust your kind.”
“Again, don’t worry about it.”
“Well, that’s my story.”
“This is a very strange world.”
I laughed, “You got that right.”
Steven Armstrong
1
I just laid there staring up at the ceiling, I was tired, but couldn’t sleep. I looked down at my right arm, the scars of my past. If anyone ever asked me about my past it would fall firmly under the area of ‘people shouldn&#39;t know my past’. I made a deal, so I could save people. The visions, they allowed me to save people, but put me in a whole new world, and it wasn’t a good one. Then I was bit and it cost me everything. Then there’s my debt. I closed my eyes and forced the thought out of my mind, I needed sleep.
Terusugu
1
Thing have gone to hell, there’s no other way of saying it. First the dragon blood incident and then my life started to look up. I was a television executive with a passion for music, born in Osaka. I’ve made music for some time. I’m also a hardcore culinary fan, taken a liking to hot foods, thus naming my werewolf form "Hard Kimchi". I’m also no stranger to fighting, as my rival executives from either the media or music industry blackmail me in the manner of physical confrontations. Then I met Blood Claw, a solder of the light.
Cursed in his final battle and now is hunted by both sides. For four-hundred and sixty-one years he had hunted the shadows, killed everyone who got in his way, is hunted by both sides, and is half demon. “And I thought I had it bad.” I murmured with a sad smile.
Naoy Lebel
1
My head still hurt, by laying down with my eyes closed helped. A long time ago I was a thief or as an information hunter, but then I came to New York and met Blood Claw, Steven, Mia, and Terusugu. I was able to straiten my life up a little bit and now I lived with Mia at her apartment. Now, well, now I didn’t know what was going to happen next. I hope things get better.
Mia Tobira
1
I lay there trying to remember, like so many night before. I have no memory of my life before becoming a werecat at 19, and no idea who turned me into a what I am, although I remember the training that he gave me. I can defend myself and shift easier thanks to him. His face is a blur in my memories, ever since he left me 7 years ago...in a ditch....for dead... that son of a bitch. Steven and Teru found me, brought me to New York, where I met Blood Claw and, a year later, Naoy. Life’s been good since then, but I wish I knew what happened to me.
Akron
1
I sat in my office thinking of what I had just seen. Blood Claw was a freak on nature and he had a demon in him. I couldn’t let him stay here, but I didn’t dare go up against Taris, so what should I do? Killing him was out of the question, too powerful, and I couldn’t fix him, to dangerous. I was stuck between a rock and a hard place and I had a feeling that things where not going to get any better. I stood and walked to the door, had to try and kill him.

[Moon Hunter]

Wolf War Chapter Four EVIL’S part two
Vola
1
“Never send a human to do a demon’s job.” Rathos Vitman said looking over at me, “I told you they would fail.”
I looked over at him, his eyes where white, nothing in his eyes but the white, his hair was white too, skin was ruddy white, but has a slight tan, but nothing too dark. His build was quite large and his face never changed. He was wearing a tight black shirt, a pair of dark grey pants, black boots and a pair of black gloves with the fingers cut off. There was a long scar along his right eye and a tattoo on his neck, and he had dried blood on his hands. “Oh shut up, you’re a human.” I replied.
He turned at me, his eyes blazing… I think. “I’ve killed people for lesser remarks; all I care about is Brittany.”
“Your human side still has a hold on you, you are weak.” A voice said from behind us, “You both are pitiful excuses for demons.”
We both turned around and glared at Art, a true gende from Xavis, and also Galist’s brother. He looks just like Galist except for his right eye is covered by a white scarf, he says that if you look into it you see the future; he has shorter curly-straight brown hair, and gray eyes. His clothes are made of Falley fur and cuts off at different places, these cut off points are kept together by bands of black leather, and it has rose designs inked all over it. A dagger is in the sheath on his waist, he says it can become a katana like blade. “Can we get along for five minutes?” I asked, “I need to make contact with Suhahdu, he should have Blood Claw’s body under control by now.”
“I don’t care about this little war, I want Galist, that’s all I care about.” Art replied and I turned around, I wasn’t going to listen to this.
“What kind of name is Art?” Rathos asked, as I settled my eyes on the building.
“What kind of name is Rathos?”
“Stop it you two&#33;” I growled, and then smiled, he’s awake.
I waved my hand over the ground, and seven shadows took form. They had a human form, black armor, four red eyes, swords, and where completely under my control. “Leave Galist and Brittany for those two, leave Suhahdu, he will come to me, kill everyone else.” I said and the shadow’s nodded.
“I’ll wait here, you two, go have some fun.”
Akron
1
I looked down at Blood Claw’s body, the demon scum. I head a dagger in my hand all I needed to do know was stab him in the heart and he, should, be dead. I raised the dagger and Blood Claw’s eyes shot open, they where completely black. Before I could move he was standing, one hand wrapped around my neck and the other around my wrist. He through me back and as I crashed to the floor the dagger flew out of my hand. Blood Claw walked over and stepped on my throat. “And you might be.” He asked, his voice echoing.
“Who are you?” I asked.
A dark smile spread across his face, “I asked you first.”
“Akron.”
“I am the high demon Suhahdu.” He replied.
Suhahdu
1
I looked down at him, he was no use to me. I pushed down and crushed his throat. “Puny human.” I muttered and walked to the door.
I opened it and walked into the hallway, it was empty. The clock on the wall read twelve-o-clock. I turned to the left and walked down the hall. After a few mintes of walking I came to a lobby, no one was at the desk. The doors burst open and two men walked in. When they saw me they stopped. “Who the hell are you?” The one with white hair asked.
A pillar of fire appeared in front of them and then formed into a woman with black hair, Vola. “Suhahdu.” She said, “It’s been a long time.”
“Vola, who are these incompetents?”
“The one with the white hair is Rathos, and the other one is Art.”
I nodded and she looked at them, “Do what you came here to do, then meet us by the main gate.”
“You know my dear,” Suhahdu said, “I feel like a little mayhem, let’s have some fun.”
Brittany Smith
1
I woke up to a hand stoking my head, and screams echoing through the walls. I shot up and spun around, scrambling back at who I saw. Rathos Vitman was sitting on the edge of my bed, smiling at me. “Long time no see.” He said reaching out for me.
Moved back, out of his reach, and fell off the bed. He laughed, stood up, and looked down at me. I scrambled to my feet and kept the bed between me and him, “What are you doing here?”
“What, no hello kiss?”
Galist Selphanis
1
I was still in the cafeteria/lounge with Taris when all hell broke out. A mage went flying through the wall, crashing into a few tables, fallowed by a large dark figure, in black armor. It looked at us as Taris pitched a fireball at it. Kuy turned into my sword and I swung at it. Long before it hit the monster another sword appeared, blocking mine, and I saw pink rose petals floating through the air. I grew cold as I followed the blade back to its owner, and even though I new who was their, I was still horrified. “Hello brother,” Art said looking at me, “I missed you.”
Taris K. Straywood
1
Galist and Art’s blades clashed, rose petals floated through the air. It’s would have been very nice to watch, if I wasn’t being attacked by some kind of shadow warrior. I blocked another strike with my staff and tried to freeze this creature again, it wasn’t working. It slamed it’s fist into my chest, sending me flying back. I crashed to the ground, my staff flying from my hands, and looked up. I saw it standing over me, ready to bring it’s sword down on my skull, when it exploded into a cloud of pink rose petals. Galist had dodged Art’s sword, which had stabbed the shadow worrier in the place where the heart should be. Rage filled Art’s face and Glaist slammed his elbow into Art’s face. Art stumbled back and I murmured a spell, my staff shot into my hands. I stood and advanced on Art, with Galist next to me. Art snarled, lunged, grabbed Galist, and then jumped up… through the ceiling. Screams ripped through the building, time to save some people.
Steven Armstrong
1
“Shit&#33;” I yelled as it took another swing at me.
I was just laying in my bed when this thing tore through the wall, swing it’s sword like a mad man, and just barley missing me. I ducked again as the sword nearly took off my head. I wanted to transform, but I didn’t have enough time.
I took another step back and hit the wall, shit&#33; It lifted it’s sword again, and I raised my arms to protect my self. The next thing I new plaster was raining down on my. I looked up and saw a green werewolf ripping into the black thing, Hard Kimchi. The black thing turned into dust and Hard Kimchi looked at me. “Thanks Teru, let’s get the hell out of here.”
We turned toward the door way and Vola stepped into view, faced us, and said, “Hello my pets.”
Naoy Lebel
1
I through another knife and it bounced off that things armor like it was nothing. “What the hell are these things?” Mia hissed, her back up to mine.
I glanced back, saw her semi transformed, deadlocked with another one of those things. “I don’t know&#33;” I replied, what the hell was going on?
Rathos Vitman
1
“Why do you run from me? I don’t want you dead. I just want you.” I said, my voice filled with lust, walking around the bed as she scampered over it.
“Stay away from me you monster&#33;” She yelled, while edging towered the door.
“I wouldn’t go out there, you might get your pretty little self hurt.” I said, walking back around the bed, “Besides we have everything we need in here.”
“Go to hell&#33;”
“Don’t rush me.” I replied, “Besides, I should have killed you a long time ago, but what’s left of my human host won’t let me. He still loves you, you know.”
“Leave me alone&#33;” She yelled, grabbing the lamp, from the dresser, and pitching it me.
I batted it aside and she ran out of the room, damn&#33; I ran out after her, saw her running down the hallway, and chased after her. My temper flared and a blackish-blue fireball formed in my hand. I chucked it at Brittany and it hit the center of her back, burning through her dress. She let out a scream and crashed to the ground. I stopped behind her, as she tried to push herself to her knees, and slammed my foot on the burn on her back. She screamed and I said, a fireball forming in my hand, “You should have taken my offer, puny wolf.”
I saw the necklace, the wedding ring on it, and reached down, ripping it from he neck. “He was weak and deserved to die.” I said, tossing it to the ground and the fireball grew, “And now you’re weak as well.”
Art
1
I slammed Galist into the chimney, we where on the roof. Galist topped to the ground, blood dripping from his nose and the right side of his mouth. “You are pore excuse for a soldier.” I said, “And werewolf.”
He lunged at me, I parried, and slammed the hilt of the sword into his back. He crashed to the ground as my feet, his sword slid down the side of the roof, stopping at the edge. “You can’t beat me.” I said as he crawled to toward his sword, “So why do you still fight?”
Galist grabbed his sword, struggled to his feet, and faced me. “Because I choose too.” He said and I snarled, time to finish this&#33;
Vola
1
Teru crashed into the wall as Steven scrambled out of the way. “You’re no mach for a demon.” I said, cracking my knuckles, “I can kill you both with ease.”
Teru struggled to his feet, a mettle rode protruding from his stomach and Steven said, “They why haven’t you killed us yet?”
My eyes narrowed and a the black sword appeared in my hand, the time for games was over.
Mia Tobira
1
Naoy crashed to the ground, blood trickling from his head, and I landed right next to him. “I think this is it.” He said as one of those shadow things raised its sword, I closed my eyes and hopped it would be quick.
Taris K. Straywood
1
I turned the corner and saw Blood Claw standing in the middle of the hallway, his head down. I ran over to him and said, looking back, “It’s good to see you up, we need to take care of a serious demon problem.”
I looked back at him and stared into black eyes. “You have no idea.” He replied, his hand slamming into my sternum.
I flew back and crashed into a wall. I coughed and blood splattered into the ground. I looked back up at him and asked, “Who are you?”
“Suhahdu, High Demon of Underworld.” He replied, “And the demon who will destroy this world.”

[Moon Hunter]

Wolf War Chapter Four EVIL’S part three
Taris K. Straywood
1
Suhahdu’s sword slammed into the wall, next to my head, if I had been a second slower that would have killed me. I slammed the butt of my staff into his face three times and then slammed the tip of it on the side of his head. He stumbled back, blood trickling down the side of his head, and then charged at me. I blacked the sword, aimed the tip of the staff at his head, and murmured a few words. Blue light shot out of the end of my staff and engulfed Suhahdu’s head. There was another flash and his entire body was encased in a thin layer of ice. “How about you chill out for a little while,” I said walked past him, “Don’t go anywhere.”
I had gotten a few feet when I heard a cracking sound. I turned around and saw cracks appearing in the ice. “Aw crap.” I said as the ice exploded.
I was pushed back a few feet by the shock and when I looked up, Suhahdu was standing over me, sword ready to strike, and I didn’t have enough time to defend myself. The sword’s tip shot forward and stopped just before it hit my neck. Suhahdu’s eyes began flashing from pure black, to red irises; Blood Claw was still in there. He looked at me and said, “Run.”
I scrambled to my feet and took off running. I turned a corner and saw Mia and Naoy, on the ground, a shadow warrior standing over them. I said the ice spell again, and blue light shot toward the shadow warrior. After a second it was encased in a solid block of ice. I walked over and Mia opened her eyes. “About time.” She said, shaking Naoy awake.
Naoy groaned as he sat up. “We win?” he asked, looking at the ice statue.
“Not yet, we need to fine the rest of the group and get the hell out of here.” I replied, helping Naoy to his feet.
Steven Armstrong
1
Vola stood over Teru, who was out cold and reverting back to his human form. She raised her sword and I crashed into her back, sinking my claws and teeth into her back. She screamed and spun around, causing the flesh that I had a grip on to be ripped out. “You little monster&#33;” She roared and raised her sword.
She started bring it down when she was engulfed by a blue light. I laid their staring at Vola, who was encased in ice. Taris stepped into view and I said, “My guess is that this is your handwork.”
“You guessed right, help me with Teru.” Taris replied.
2
We returned to the hallway, Taris and I holding Teru up, to find Mia helping Naoy stand. “You look like hell.” Mia said, looking at me, “But then again, so do I.”
“We need to find Brittany.” Taris said leading us down the hallway.
“What about Blood Claw?” I asked.
“He’s, uh… dealing with inner demons.” Taris replied, looking around the corner, “Crap&#33;”
Taris dived away from the corner just as a man wearing a tight black shirt, a pair of dark grey pants, and black boots flew by. Brittany, in her werewolf form lunged past, landing on top of the man, her teeth ripping into his shoulder and claw tearing into his chest. “Found her.” I said, as Taris got to his feet.
Brittany backed away from the mutilated body, part of the man’s shoulder in her mouth. She looked at his, loped over, handed Taris something, and then vanished around the corner. A minute later Brittany, in her human form and fully dressed, came back around the corner, took a necklace from Taris’s hand, and put it on. “Let’s go.” She said looking back at the body.
Brittany Smith
1
We ran out side, as a group, as to the tree line. We looked back and saw the Building on fire, screams still echoing from inside. “We should go back.” I said, “We could help them.”
“No.” Taris said, everyone looked at him, “Everyone who’s still in there is as good as dead.”
After a few seconds Mia asked, “Where’s Galist?”
There was explosion from the top of the building and a man, dressed in fur that cut off at different places, flew over the edge fallowed by Galist sword ready to strike. The man hit the ground and rolled just as Galist’s blade cut into the ground, where the stranger had been just a moment before. Galist brought the blade over, the stranger blocked it, but Galist had put too much force into the swing. The man went fling back, through a wall, and back ito the building. Galist rose to his feet, looked at us, and said, “I think it’s time to leave.”
Suhahdu
1
“GET OUT OF MY HEAD&#33;” Blood Claw roared.
“IT’S MY HEAD NOW&#33;” I replied as I took control again.
I looked around, he was gone. I roared in anger, no one escapes me, no one&#33; I walked to the nearest window and saw Art crashed into the building. I jumped through the window, toward the one called Galist, sword set to cut him in half. Galist’s sword shot behind him and stopped my sword, inches from his head. “You should give up Art.”: Galist said turning, “You can’t beat- what the hell&#33;&#33;”
“I’m not Art.” I replied and swung for his side.
Galist parried, spun, and his blade cut across my chest, from shoulder to shoulder. I roared and lunged. My sword nicked Galist’s side, but he rammed his sword through my stomach. I roared and he pulled his blade out, spun again, and sliced my torso in half. As my top half, of my torso, flew into the air, fire shot between them, latching onto both ends, and pulling my body back together. “It’s going to take a lot more than that to kill me, wolf.” I said, staring at his shocked and horrified face.
There was a flash of while light and the neck thing I knew, I was flying back. I flipped, landed on my feet, and looked up. A figure dressed in while armor, that covers the entire body, was standing there. There was a white sword in the right hand, a while shield in the left, and white feathered wings sticking out from behind, an Angelic Warrior. “I was wondering when one of you would show your face.” I said, standing, “I’m surprised it took you this long.”
The Angelic Warrior rose its sword and shield, and said, “Return to the shadows, demon&#33;”
“Never.” I replied, identical black armor appearing on me, with my wings, “My human side could fight you and win, what makes you think you can beat me?”
“I will send you back to the abyss.” It replied and launched itself at me.
I shot into the air; this was going to be fun.
Galist Selphanis
1
I hurried over to the group, watching as the two warriors, one of shadow and one of light, launch into the air. “What do we do?” Brittany asked, all of our eyes glued to the sky.
“Running would be a good idea.” I replied.

[Were Dono]

Aww >_> You made her Kill Rathos?
He was cool, though.
Didn&#39;t even see his demon form.

[Moon Hunter]

Wolf War Chapter Four EVIL’S part four
Galist Selphanis
1
“Running would be a good idea.” I replied, we ran.
There was a small forest between us and the garage, I hope the car’s are still intact. I looked back and saw them fighting in the sky, this was going to get ugly.
Suhahdu
1
I flew toward the angel, sword ready to strike. Its shield black my attack, so I slammed my fist into it’s face. The angel flipped back, and I lunged. It flipped back up, dogged to the right, and slammed its shield into the back of my head. I pun around, sword aiming for the chest, and it parried my attack. We pulled back from each other and the Angelic Warrior said, “I will send you back to the abyss.”
“You’re scared of me, good.” I replied, “I think it’s time to show my true power.”
My sword vanished and fire engulfed me. (Because I’m not sure how to describe Suhahdu’s turn form, I’ll post this pic here)
Suhahdu&#39;s Demon Form (http://webzoom.freewebs.com/sherwood9/Balrog%20picure.jpg)
(Back to the story)
My wings shot away from my body, and flames leaped up from my skin. The angel looked so small. I could feel its fear, it knew it had lost.
Brittany Smith
1
“Dear god&#33;” I said as that… thing appeared, “What is that?”
“Don’t know, don’t care, let’s just get the hell out if here.” Taris replied, as we reached the garage.
There was a figure standing in front of it, my blood ran cold. A strange black creature with four arms, two that are smaller than the other. It has a lizard like tail, that splits into two, with things that seem to be lights along the way, to help him see in the dark, and like the fish in the deep ocean, to lure in his prey. “Miss me?” Rathos asked, in a dark voice that seemed to echo.
“That’s not possible.” I said, stepping back.
“The shadows hold more power than you can possible imagine.” He replied.
“Get out of here, this is my fight.” I said, looking at the group.
“We’re not going anywhere with out you.” Galist replied.
Before I could reply, Rathos sank into the ground and became a shadow. He shot forward, knocking the group away from me, and then rose from the ground, returning to his demon form. He swiped at me and I ducked just in time, slamming my fist into his stomach… I think. He doubled back, and I darted past him, the rest of the group was already in the garage. I jumped into the back of the truck, and Taris hit the gas. We tore past Rathos and out of that hell hole.
Suhahdu
1
Two huge fire balls appeared in my hands, this fight was boring me. The fire lanced forward and engulfed the angel, who had raised its shield. The flames engulfed the angel and, when they cleared, nothing was left. I dropped down to the ground, and reverted back to my human form. Rathos walked up to me and said, “They got away.”
“No matter, they can run, but they have no where to hide.”
Steven Armstrong
1
I sat in the bed of the truck and was able to get a good look at everyone. Taris, who was driving, was covered in burses, Galist, who was sitting into the passenger seat, was soaked in blood, cuts all over his body, and a nasty slash over his chest. His phoenix was sitting on his lap, pressing up against his chest. I looked over at Brittany, parts of her dress where red with blood, she had a long gash on her check, and burns in her arms. Mia was trying to stop the bleeding from a gash on her arm, small cuts across her chest and legs. Naoy was gripping his side, blood dripping from the corner of his mouth. Terusugu was still out cold, the rod still in his chest. I was cover in cuts; a gash over my left eye was hurting like hell. Brittany reached over to Teru, pulled out the rode, and healed that wound. “We lost Blood Claw, but other than that we’re fine.” I said as Teru’s eyes opened.
“We’re not fine, an entire mage guild was wiped out, several demon have reviled themselves, an angel is dead, and…” Taris trailed off, “We need to find a safe place.”
“Vampire safe house.” I said, “It’s sad to say but that’s our best chance.”
“There’s one in the industrial district.” Brittany said, “We should go there.”
“Fine.” Taris replied, “But, my definition of safe is far different than yours.”

[Moon Hunter]

Wolf War Chapter Five ‘THE COST OF LOVE’ part one
Brittany Smith
1
Back to New York City we went and we where heading to the vampires, which was good, but vamps aren’t that trust worthy. I finished healing the last of our wounds, but our clothing was still cut up, burned, or damaged in some other way, and bloody. Teru was naked, so we had a small problem, we need clothing. The store where we had first gone too, before we went into New York, was on this same road, we went there. We stopped in front and Taris killed the engine. “Teru, stay here, we’ll grab you some clothing.” Taris said and we climbed out as Teru nodded.
The same guy was at the counter, when he saw us his eyes widened and asked, “What the sam hell happed to you?”
“Making a movie, fake blood.” Naoy replied and we walked into the store.
2
We all got the same clothing we where wearing and, while everyone else was doing some more shopping, I found myself at the spot where Blood Claw was sitting last time. I don’t know how I got there, I just found myself looking down at the chair. “How are you doing?” Mia asked from behind me.
“I’m… I’ve been better.” I replied, to weary to get angry at her.
“We’re all ready to go, gota pay first.”
I nodded and headed up to the front counter with Mia. Taris paid and as we walked out I glanced back at the guy at the counter, his eyes on my butt. That’s it, something in me snapped. I stalked over to him, gave him a warm smile, and slammed my fist into his stomach. He doubled over and I walked out, everyone started at me in surprise. “He hit a nerve.” I replied and got into the back of the truck.
Suhahdu
1
I touched the ice that encased Vola and it shattered. Her sword vanished and she fell to one knee, “Thanks.”
“Don’t mention it.” I replied helping her up, “I was thinking I was time to summon an old friend.”
“Who?” She asked, looking at me.
I kneeled down and, with one finger, traced a summoning circle, burning into the floor. I stepped back, murmured the spell, and the circle glowed red and then a pillar of fire enveloped the circle. When the fire cleared a figure stood there, shackled to the ground. She was wearing a black leather coat, a tight leather jump suit that stuck to every curve, and black boots. Her face was covered in a thin layer of fur, rabbit/fox ears on the top/side of her heard, and claws on her fingers. She looked around, brownish-red eyes landing on me. “Suhahdu?” She asked, eyes narrowing.
I waved a hand over the chains and they broke. “In the flesh, old friend. How’s banishment?”
“It’s hell, but it’s good to be back.” She replied, a dark smile on her face, as she rubbed her wrists, “To what do I owe this freedom?”
“What can she do for us?” Rathos asked, in his human form.
“Go find Art, he’s around here somewhere.” I growled, “Now&#33;”
Rathos stalked off, growling. “Who’s sir charming and what kind of name is Art?” She asked.
“Who are you?” Vola asked, looking from me to her, and accusing eye.
“This is Silver Ocean, used to be one of the good guys, until bound with a demon. He was male and the fusion changed him in more than one way, considering the demon was female. She was banished to hell over five years ago, and now is fighting with us.” I looked over at her, “Isn’t that right?”
“Yes, my lord.” She replied, bowing her head slightly.
2
We found Art, out cold, with a two by four, sticking through his chest. After a little dark magic from Vola he was up and as good as new. “Where now?” Vola asked.
“The underworld, I need to speak with a few old friends and take care of some… unfinished business.”

[Were Dono]

As per request of the author...

This is Silver Ocean.

http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b215/0Were0Dono0/ShowLetter.jpg

[Moon Hunter]

Originally posted by Were Dono@Aug 4 2006, 12:15 PM
As per request of the author...

This is Silver Ocean.

http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b215/0Were0Dono0/ShowLetter.jpg

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This is Silver Predator Wolf&#39;s chariter&#39;s image. E-mailed to me, i couldn&#39;t post it, computers and me get along most of the time, so Were Dono posted it for me.

[The wild one]

whoh&#33; who drew that? for that is good and I likes.

[Moon Hunter]

Originally posted by The wild one@Aug 4 2006, 01:10 PM
whoh&#33; who drew that? for that is good and I likes.

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No clue, ask Silver Predator Wolf.

[Moon Hunter]

All right people, i need some feed back on the story. I know where the story is going to go, but i would also like people to post any ideas they have. If someone has a question ask and me or someone else will answer. Tha&#39;ts all for now. :laugh:

[Silver Predator Wolf]

your story is so far so good. keep up the good work. :closedgrin: by the way... is there gonna be a big fight scene where eveyone including the bad guys who will bring out their full strength and the entire area where they are fighting on will be leveled to the ground?

[Moon Hunter]

Originally posted by Silver Predator Wolf@Aug 8 2006, 10:17 AM
your story is so far so good. keep up the good work.* :closedgrin: by the way... is there gonna be a big fight scene where eveyone including the bad guys who will bring out their full strength and the entire area where they are fighting on will be leveled to the ground?

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Most likely, why?

[Silver Predator Wolf]

COOL&#33; looking foward to that part of the story. and who are the other old friends that Suhahdu need to speak to? and wat is this unfinished business? the suspense is killing me....

[Moon Hunter]

Originally posted by Silver Predator Wolf@Aug 8 2006, 10:28 AM
COOL&#33; looking foward to that part of the story. and who are the other old friends that Suhahdu need to speak to? and wat is this unfinished business? the suspense is killing me....

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All answers wil come with time.

[Silver Predator Wolf]

sure ill wait. by the way... can the fight between the 2 sides take place in an abandon mansion? i was thinking that they walk in to the masion as a group but got separated as the bad guys launch a surprise attack on them and they have to fight one on one in different parts of the mansion. i think a mansion is a good place for a big firght. its big and has plenty of rooms in which each char can crash into the walls, pillars,floors,windows and some of the fights will go from the inside of the mansion to outside at the garden. how they got there and who will be fighting who i will leave it to you. you have the final say on this idea. :allears:

[Silver Predator Wolf]

I am not sure if u got this post of mine since it was not here so i am posting it again. the mansion has 6 levels not counting the basmemet. any were,demons can survive a fall from that hight. they can even jump from a 100 storey building and lend on their feet. but if a human fall from 6 storey they will break a leg or worse. they wont die. will there be a car chase scene through the streets of new york? i also got an idea from reading wat exthehunter put up about making his were char pregnant and was wondering weather or not to have silver ocean pregnant... as for the father of the child (if silver ocean gets pregnant) i am still think of who it will be... and since his (silver ocean) gender has change so has is whole body inside and outside. so that means if a human,were or demon were to mate with her she can get pregnant. what do you think of this idea? is it ok with you? :embarassed:

[Were Dono]

=/
I take it this story is dead.
It&#39;s a shame.
I liked it alot.

[Silver Predator Wolf]

Na. Its not dead yet. Moon Hunter does not have enough time for himself to write. So we will all have to wait. Patience is the key. :allears:

[Silver Predator Wolf]

Hopefully M.H (Moon Hunter) will start writing again soon. :eyeroll:

[midnightclubx]

I agree.
Hopefully this won&#39;t be the end.

[Moon Hunter]

Wolf War Chapter Five ‘THE COST OF LOVE’ part two
Suhahdu
1
I stalked through the cave, toward the dual stone doors that stood at the end. Vola and Silver Ocean where behind me, fallowed by Rathos and Art. We reached the door and I threw them open, knocking the two demon guards to the ground. “WHO DARES TO INTRUDE?” A dark voice emanates from a cloud of shadow at the far wall.
“Hello, Marthons.” I replied stopping a few feet away from it.
“Suhahdu, is that you?” I nodded, “What the hell are you doing here?”
“I’m here to repay a debit.” I replied and lunged at the shadow.
The second my hands touched it, I started to absorb it energy. After a few moments the figure of an old man appeared in a stone thrown. He was gasping for breath as his demon guards lunged at me. I lifted one of my hands and the guards burst into black flames. “I’ve always loved your powers, and now, there mine.” I said as black smoke started emanating from my mouth, “Now I only need three more demons, before I pay our master a little visit.”
Brittany Smith
1
I sat on the edge of my bed and looked clock, 1:49 a.m. I looked over at Galist’s bed, good he was asleep. I stood and walked to the door, opening it silently and walking out of the room, time to pay a few vampires a visit.
2
I found the building I was looking for, a night club called ‘Night Love: Drinks and a Good Time’. I opened the door and walked in, I hope this goes well.
There where only a few people in the bar, all of them looking up at me as I walked in. I walked to the bar and as the tender, “I’m looking for Travis Freeman.”
“You’re looking at him, what do you want?”
Travis Freeman had pail skin for a African, but he was a vampire. His eyes where red and hair black. He was wearing a tight black shirt and black pants. “You know how to raise the dead?” I asked and he nodded, “What do I need to do?”
Vola
1
The three demon’s didn’t put up much of a fight and Suhahdu absorbed their powers with ease. Now we where standing outside the thrown room to the Demon Master Torkos. The doors slowly began to open, reviling a pick black room, a thrown made of gold, and Torkos sitting on the thrown. He had black scales, red eyes, and was bearing black armor. “You have much to answer for Suhahdu, killing my demons.” He said as Suhahdu walked into the room.
“You’re the reason I was imprisoned.” He said stopping in front of the thrown, “Because you tried to destroy me, I’m taking everything form you.”
The black sword formed in Suhahdu’s hand and he began to change forms. Once this was done he looked Torkos in the eye, and Torkos stunk of fear.
“You will fail, they’ll destroy you.” Torkos said, his voice wavering.
“I think not.”



I am sorry for the wait, but life got in the way and I also had one hell of a writers block, but now i&#39;m back. :howl:

[Were Dono]

Good chapter as usual.
Can&#39;t wait to see what happens next.

[Silver Predator Wolf]

YES&#33; THE NEXT POST ON THE STORY IS UP&#33; ( Jumps with joy and hits his head against the celling) Ouch.......

[Silver Predator Wolf]

Yo. I forgot to tell you this. If Suhahdu and his gang every need to walk through a crowd of people without getting any attention can you have Silver Ocean wear a clock to cover her body and her head and the only thing visable r her eyes. Since she cannot transform and the others have their human forms. Ty. :allears:

[Silver Predator Wolf]

Ok everyone. Moon Hunter has a problem logging in so he will be late on the next post. He might also get a new account if he cant get into his old one.

[RetnuH NooM]

I'm back, but i needed a new account and i'm PO about it. I'll keep the story going untill i can get my old account back.

[Silver Predator Wolf]

Good to see you again Moon Hunter. Welcome back! :)

[RetnuH NooM]

I'm working on the next chapter, but life keeps on getting in the way and schools coming up so my posts are going to slow down a little bit, so please bear with me.

[Silver Predator Wolf]

Sure. Take your time, we will wait.

[Moon Hunter]

Wolf War Chapter Five ‘THE COST OF LOVE’ part three
Suhahdu
1
I sat on Torkos’s thrown, Vola and Silver Ocean at my side, while Rathos and Art stood by the doors. A messenger demon was keeling in front of the thrown. “Tell your master that she made a wise choice by allying herself with me, and I hope others will fallow her example.” I said and the massager demon nodded and vanished
“Annoying little buggers, but that transportation ability really comes in handy.” Rathos said and Art nodded.
"I don’t care what any of you do, but I need to be alone.” I said closing my eyes and leaning back, “Just don’t get yourselves killed.”
Taris K. Straywood
1
“Brittany’s gone!” Galist said barging into my room, “We have to find her!”
“Hold on a second,” I replied, pulling on my robes, “What do you mean gone?”
“Gone... as in not here!”
“All right, we’ll wake everyone up and get out of here... but get some pants on first.”
2
It took a grand total of ten minutes to get everyone up and in the truck. “We’re going to need an alterative mode of transportation soon, I can’t go driving down the streets of New York with a bunch of people in the back of my truck.” I said pulling into the drive-through of a McDonalds.
“Welcome to McDonald’s may I take your order?”
“Twenty four sausage Mic-Griddles, three Egg Mic-Muffins, eight milks and orange juices, and... what does that come too?” I said, grabbing my wallet from the glove compartment.”
“Um... Fifty-three seventy-nine.”
“All right, that’s all.”
“Please go to the second window.”
As I pulled forward I muttered, “Man... feeding this group isn’t going to be cheap.”
Vola
1
I looked down at the swarms of humans far below my perch on the Empire State building, “They’re cattle.” I muttered.
Suhahdu appeared next to me and said, “I couldn’t agree more."
“My lord.” I said bowing my head.
“Don’t ‘My Lord’ me, my love... it would seem we’ve ran into some trouble.”
“And what would that be, my love?”
“Silver Ocean, it would seem that she is...”
“Is what?”
“Pregnant.”
“Pregnant?”
“Pregnant.”
“How?”
“Not sure yet, but I’m going to find out.”
A messenger demon appeared in the air in front of us and said, “We found them.”

[Were Dono]

Ohh. Pregnent. Dun dun dunnnn.
Can't wait to see what happens as usual.
The wait is always worth it.

[Silver Predator Wolf]

Dang! She got pregnant sooner than i expected. Cant wait for the next post on the story to be up. :) I forgot this info so here it is. Silver Ocean can still fight even if she is pregnant. Since she is pregnant she will be stronger than she used to be untill she gave birth than her strength wil return to normal. As for her speed she will start to slow down a little as the infant inside her starts to grow. As for the gender of the offspring what will it be? I am open for option from all who have made a char in the story. I have were donos reply already so i am waitting for the rest of your reply. Please post your answers soon. Ty. :)
And she will be more aggressive than normal because of her instincts to protect her unborn child.

[Moon Hunter]

I'm haveing a ton of ideas for the story so there may be several chapters up in the next week or two, still open to suggestions.

[Moon Hunter]

Wolf War Chapter Five ‘THE COST OF LOVE’ part four
Mia Tobira
1
“Central Park, great choice Taris, but I still think we look a little... suspicious.” I said looked around at the entire group, “Specifically, Galist.”
“I told him to put of normal clothing but he insisted on his ‘normal’ clothing.”
Everyone was digging into the food like they hadn’t eaten in days… wait… it had been days, crap where the heck was the time going.”
“So, this ‘vampire safe house’ is north of the park?” Naoy asked, “I’ve never heard of it.”
“Brittany’s the one who knew about it...” Galist trailed off, “She may be there.”
Teru looked over at Steven, who was hunched over a napkin, writing something with a pen he must have taken from the hotel. “What the heck are you doing?” Teru asked, “Galist is eyeing your food.”
“No I’m not!” Galist said looking up, jaw clenched.
“Ken sa-to go rostan… no that’s not right.”
I saw Taris frezze and slowly look over at Steven. “Ken-sa-torw-golin-rostanla?” He said slowly.
“Yeah, how’d you know that?”
“That’s a powerful summing spell, how do you know it?”
“It was in my dreams last night, but it went on… Ken-sa-torw-golin-rostanla-takun-ra-toloc.”
“That’s not like any spell I have heard before.”
“It’s probably nothing, let’s just get to this vampire safe…ish house.” Steven replied putting the napkin in his pocket.
Brittany Smith
1
My eyes fluttered open, my entire body was killing me. I tried to raise my head, but it felt too heavy, and pain surged through my head every time I blinked. I looked around and saw bars… jail bars and a mettle cell! My left hand flew up to my neck, pain shot through my body and I bit off a scream, and then I felt it. Two puncture wounds on my neck… HE BIT ME!!! “It’s good to see you awake, I was wondering if I took to much for one of your kind.” Travis said from the other side of the bars, “Tell me, how could you have fallen for such a dumb rumor, I mean, bring someone back from the dead, honestly.”
He laughed and I slowly curled up into a ball, I was going to kill him, no matter what.
Naoy Lebel
1
We park in front of the bar, night had fallen, but things went going well. I would seem that the police wanted us for questioning about the apartment fight, and were searching for us. “Night Love: Drinks and a Good Time.” Mia muttered shaking here head, “That’s just wrong, vampires should be more creative.”
We all moved as a group to the door of the bar and Taris said, “Don’t trust them, don’t break off from the group, and keep your eyes open.”
We were about to go in when the sound of gun fire ripped through the air. “Crap.” I muttered, so much for safe.
A familiar roar ripped through the air and we charged in, Brittany was going to need help.
Suhahdu
1
I watched as they charged in, the fools, and then I heard the sirens of cop cars. I looked to Vola, “Make sure you get the ashes of the vamps, I’m going to try and take care of this once and for all.
Brittany Smith
1
My transformation was quick and when it was done, I was pissed. I ripped off the cell bars, and ripped through two vampires before they knew what was happening. I charged up a flight of stared, through a mettle door, and into the kitchen of the bar, crushing three more vampires. I ripped the wall and that’s when everything went wrong. I felt hundreds of bullets pears my skin and I crashed to the ground, looking up at ten vamps with automatic weapons. “Good bye, bitch.” Travis said, his fangs poking out in his grin.
Galist Selphanis
1
We broke trough the door and into a scene of chaos. Brittany’s blooded for was on the ground, changing back into her human form, and several vampires where scattered around the room. “FREEZE!” A voice yelled from behind us, oh crap.”
Taris K. Straywood
1
I spun around and saw about fifteen S.W.A.T. guys… shit we’re in the middle of a firing range! I lifted my staff, began the spell, and they opened fire. Everything went dark.

[Silver Predator Wolf]

Everything went dark...... Hm........... wonder what happen? The story is getting more exciting with every post. Cant wait to find out what happens next. :)

[Moon Hunter]

Wolf War Chapter Six ‘The SHADOWS WILL’ part one
Lathena
1
“Hold your fire, HOLD YOUR FIRE.” I roared, but it was too late.
The group of people between us and the ‘black market thugs’ where ridden by bullets. “Get and ambulance here, NOW!” I roared, running over to the people crumpled of the ground, blood pouring from every wound, “Check them!”
While one of my men called for an ambulance the rest started checking to bodies. “Sir,” One of my guys said standing, “He’s dead, bullet trough the skull and four to the heart.”
I looked over at a silver haired man, no more than twenty five. My eyes lingered there for a second before scanning the rest of the room.
My eyes landed on a young woman, naked and riddled with bullets, blood covering here entire body.
I ran over to her as my guys called for an ambulance and started performing the first aid I had them learn. I put my hand on her neck, and felt a faint pulse. I lifted my hand and her eyes shot open, hand grabbing my neck, and a necklace dropped to the ground. “I’m not hear to hurt you, were getting help.”
Her eyes filled with fear, why was she scared, but then I caught her scent and my heard stopped, she was a werewolf… if we took they to the hospital the truth would get out… but if we didn’t all of them would die. “V…vam…pi…” She said and went limp, but she still hand a pulse.
“There on their way sir.” One of my guy said from behind me.
I leaned there for a second an knew what had to be done, “Get them here double time, they aren’t going to last much longer.”
My eyes scanned the room, ash was all over the place, but then I saw the body of another person, a man. I hurried over to him, a bullet had hit his neck and blood was squirting out. I put my fingers into his neck and his eyes opened, black eyes looked at me and then changed to dark red eyes… Blood Claw… but how… he was dead. Blood Claw was there when my family was killed, trying to save who he could, which was me and my sister, but I saw him shot to death… with silver bullets. “You’re dead.” I whispered so only he could here and then yelled over my shoulder, “I’ve got another, tell the hospital to send everything they can and get ready for a long night.”
I looked back down at Blood Claw and he managed a weak smile, “Long time no see, little one.”
“How’ve you been?”
“I don’t-” He coughed, blood splattered on my uniform, “I don’t think right now is the best time for… pleasantries.”
Rathos Vitman
1
I appeared behind Vola and walked up next to her. “What’s going on?” I asked looking down at twelve ambulances.
“It would seem that your girl and that group were in the middle of a fire fight.”
“What?!” I asked, searching for Brittany’s face.
‘Hold on for a moment and we’ll see.” She replied, eyes glued on the chaos below, a small smile on her face.
First they rolled out a few people, non of whom where Brittany. It was the flame sword guy, staff guy, and the werecat. The came the body bag and my heart stopped. After a few seconds I saw Brittney rolled out, she looked like hell. My fists clenched at my side and ignited, “I’m going to the hospital, don’t fallow me.”
Lathena
1
I arrived at the hospital a few minutes after they had been rushed in. An old doctor, with no hair, gray skin, and dark bule eyes, stopped me and said, “Hello, Lathena. Steven Armstrong, the silver head guy, was dead at the scene. Taris K. Straywood and Terusugu "Smooth Noodle" Kanegumi had minor wounds, but they where at the edges of the bullet storm.” He handed me six bloody I.D.’s, “Naoy Lebel took three bullets to the right shoulder and then a crap load of grazes. Mia Tobira took three bullets to the abdomen, tearing her womb apart, we’re repairing the damage, but she’ll never have kids. Now for the two bad cases, Brittany Smith is in emergency surgery, bullets have torn apart here entire body… I don’t think she’ll live. The last guy had no I.D. and he’s taken… twenty bullets to the chest, his right lung has collapsed, and he’s bleeding profusely, inside and out.”
“What about there… ‘races’?
“Mostly werewolves, a mage, a human, and a werecat.” He whispered, “And then there is your friend Blood Claw.”
“What did the blood tests say?”
“Not back yet, but Taris and Teru are in there rooms recovering, critical care, theird floor, east wing. I have the guy and girl in surgery down the hall from them, which is where I’m heading, Steven is in the morgue down the hall from surgery, and Naoy and Mia are in the same room with Taris and Teru… I have your friend Blood Claw in the East wing, first floor, in surgery.”
“Thanks,” I looked to the two S.W.A.T. with me and said, “Blood Claws room, stay there until I get there. I want to ask those people what the heck is going on.”

[Silver Predator Wolf]

Pity one of the weres fighting for the side of good died. It makes me feel kinda of sad. Even if they are not my characters i feel like i am right there in the story when it happens. I felt kinda of attached to them. I pray that Brittany Smith will survive the surgery and i hope that Rathos Vitman can be stopped before he try to harm her and the rest of the gang.

Good post on the story although it makes me feel kinda of sad when some of the characters died and some are injured near to the point of death and others got injuries that will scar them for life. It's still a good story. Keep up the good work! ;)

[Moon Hunter]

Wolf War Chapter Six ‘The SHADOWS WILL’ part two
Taris K. Straywood
1
My eyes slowly opened and pain started shooting trough my skull. I was in a while room that smelled too clean, I was at a hospital. I slowly looked to my right and saw Teru laying on the bed next to me, his eyes closes and a steady beep from his heart monitor. Next to him was Naoy, a doctor taking a bullet out of his shoulder. I looked to my left and saw Mia, eyes closed, with her chest rising and falling. “all right, buddy, time for some answers.” A voice said from the foot of my bed.
I slowly looked at the woman standing in front of me. She had brown eyes, but I could see that the rims where purple, her eyes where silver and skin was a healthy white. She was dressed in a S.W.A.T. outfit and looked rather pissed. “What the hell do you want?” I asked, seeing my staff and robes hanging on the far wall.
“Answers.”
“Fine, ask.”
“What the hell is going on?”
“I wish I knew, my turn, where is Brittany, Steven, and Galist?”
“Brittany and Steven are in surgery…” she paused, “Steven didn’t make it.”
“What?” Teru murmured from his bed, “He’s dead?”
“Yeah.” She replied, “What where you people doing in that club?”
“Saving a friend.” I replied as Teru slowly opened his eyes.
“All right, he’s how it stands, you guy’s got off lucky, your buddy Steven’s dead, an autopsy is being preformed on the body, and your friends Galist and Brittany won’t live through the night.” She turned to leave, “One more thing, what is Blood Claw doing with you?”
I bolted up, pain racing through my entire body, “Blood Claw’s here?”
“Yeah, why?”
“Blood Claw isn’t… Blood Claw.”
The woman stood there for a second and then when white.
Frank
1
“What’s his heart rate?” I asked, as my team tried stopping the bleeding in this guy.
This guy had come into surgery practically dead, left lung collapsed, bullet wounds over the entire body, and now his internal bleeding was getting worse.
“Holding a 87.” The nurse replied.
“James, Will, get the bleeding stopped. Cathy get that lung re-inflated. Nurse, keep an eye on his vitals.” I said as I took another bullet out of his lung.
Before we could do anything else, the guy flatlander. “Heart stopped, get me the defibrillator I yelled.
I nurse ran over to the machine and wheeled it over. I grabbed the patches, put them on, grabbed the paddles, and yelled, “CLEAR!”
I shocked him, his body leaped, but nothing else happened.
“CLEAR!” I yelled and again nothing happened.
I tried ten more times, but nothing happened. I put down the paddles and looked at the clock. “Time of death, 12:56 p.m.”
2
I ran into the next room, with the girl, and asked, “Well?”
“She’s flat lined four times, but we’ve brought her back.” The surgeon replied and I looked up at the observation room.
A single man was standing there, face rigged, and I asked, “What can I do?”
Rathos Vitman
1
I watched as the doctor came in and couldn’t help but wonder if she was going to live. For the fifth time her heart stopped, and my fallowed in suit. Some part of me loved her… and couldn’t bear to see her die. They human’s scrambled around the room, performing CPR, but I could tell that she wasn’t coming back. I closed my eyes as I heard one surgeon say, “T.O.D., 1:02 a.m.”
The Keeper
1
I watched as the candle went out, Steven was dead. I looked at the smoke rising from the other candles, the images forming within; those two would die… could I let it happen? I raised my hand and rubbed my chin. My entire form was clocked in black; I was a ‘Grim Reaper’ of sorts, but at the same time I wasn’t. The other two candles went out, interrupting my thoughts, and I closed my eyes. “Show me what is yet to come.” I murmured and images flashed before my eyes.
After a few moments I opened my eyes and knew what I had to do, even tough it broke many rules. “Arise.” I said moving my right hand over the three extinguished candles, ‘Your jobs are not yet done.”

[Were Dono]

:D They're going to live again?
YEY x3

[Silver Predator Wolf]

That's good news! YAHOO!

[Moon Hunter]

Wolf War Chapter Six ‘The SHADOWS WILL’ part three
Brittany Smith
1
My eyes shot open and pain surged through my body. There was a doctor… a surgeon, who was staring at my face. He stood there, shock on his face, and then he screamed, falling back. I sat up, every face turned looking at me, and I felt my power surge through me… I needed to heal my body… something told me this wasn’t going to last. I put my hands over my heart as the doctor started running toward me, and I realized I was naked. Bright white light streaked out from beneath my hands and the doctors cover there eyes, stopping in there tracks.
Steven Armstrong
1
My eyes opened and I bolted up, knocking back a doctor who was hunching over my. “WHAT THE HELL?!” He yelled as bright while light consumed the room.
Galist Selphanis
1
My eyes opened as while light filled the room, I felt like hell. “Ouch.” I muttered sitting up, “What’s going on?”
The Keeper
1
The three candles ignited, I lowered my arm, and looked at a black candle with a black flame. “Your move, Suhahdu.”
Brittany Smith
1
I slid off the table and walked to the door, my wounds healed and the doctors out could on the ground… my powers didn’t do that, but I wasn’t going to complain. I stood in the hallway and Galist and Steven cam out of two doors, one in from of my and the other a little ways down the hall. “Any ideas?” Steven asked.
“No, lets find our friends… and some cloths.” I added and his eyes dipped down, “Don’t do that.”
Suhahdu
1
“Your move, Suhahdu.” Echoed through my mind and my eyes shot open.
I grabbed the doctor who was standing over me and sat up. The doctor started struggling in my grasp, shouting for help. I tightened my grip and cut off his shout. As I stood up two S.W.A.T. came in, handguns raised. “Put him down.” One said as I stood up, holding the doctor in the air.
I looked at him and the doctor’s neck burst into flames. He started screaming in pain and the S.W.A.T. opened fire. I felt the bullets rip into my body, but didn’t feel pain. I dropped the burring doctor and faced the S.W.A.T., I think I was time to test out another one of my powers. Electricity started flowing between my fingers and formed to spheres electricity in my hands. The two S.W.A.T. officers stared at me in horror and I said, “My turn.”
My hands shot up, toward them, and two bolts of energy flew at them. Both bolts hit there targets and then ripped through the S.W.A.T.’s bodies. Fireballs formed in my hands and I stepped out into the hallway, time for some destruction.
Rathos Vitman
1
I watched as Brittany walked out of the room, admired her figure, and then turned to the door, time to leave. I grabbed the handle when I heard the explosion, and felt Suhahdu’s power. “Crap.” I muttered and sank into the ground, this wasn’t a good time.
2
I rose through the floor, ahead of Brittany, facing her. She stopped dead, along with Galist and Steven, as I opened my eyes. “Hello there.” I said, “Fancy meeting you here.”
“Go, he’s mine.” Brittany said and the others nodded, running through the door to their right.
“You look great Brittany.” I said, a small grin on my face, “I must say you look better than I thought you would.”
“Go to hell, Rathos.” She said, fur sprouting all over her body.
“Been there, done that.” I replied as darkness consumed my body, transforming me.
Lathena
1
I opened the door to the ground floor and saw a wall of fire coming toward me. “SHIT!” I yelped, slammed the door and dived under the staircase.
The door flew off it’s hinges and fire struck the wall over my head, if I hadn’t dived under the stairs I would have been toast. I got to my feet and, while taking out my gun, walked into the hallway. The hall was burning and bodies where scattered all over the place. As I walked flames leapt up around me, the fire control system must have been fried in the blast. I took a few more steppes and Blood Claw walked out into the hall ahead of my, turned, and faced me. He was holding two fire balls in his hands and his eyes where black. “What the hell’s going on?” I yelled to him, lowering my gun a little.
“The future.” He replied and pitched the fireballs at me.
I dogged the first one, but the second crashed into my chest, knocking me back. I landed on my back and looked up, Blood Claw stood over my, a black sword in his hand. “I remember you and your sister… you should have died with the rest of your pack.” He said, smirking.
Something in my snapped and as he slammed the sword into the ground I rolled out of the way, shoot to my feet, and slammed my foot into the side of his head, pulling off a perfect roundhouse kick. Blood Claw crashed through the wall, his sword impaling his heart.
Blood Claw looked at for a second, looked up at he, blood dripping from his mouth, and went limp… dead.
2
I ran back up to the third floor, the demons must have something to do with those people. I reached the door and opened it. The sprinkler system on this floor was working, because the second I opened the door I got soaked. I ran down to the room where, Taris and those people where and stopped dead at the entrance. They where all standing, pulling on there clothing, but that wasn’t the strange part, Galist and Steven where standing there, alive!
“Hello, again.” Taris said grabbing his staff, “We should get out of here, questions later.”
I nodded and we too of running.
Steven Armstrong
1
We all made it down to the first floor with out a hitch, but the second we opened to door, he reached out ‘hitch’. Flames leapt up as we moved into the burning hallway. “Well, at least there’s no demons.” Mia muttered and the floor ahead of us exploded.
A woman… thing was standing there. She was wearing a black leather coat, a tight leather jump suit that stuck to every curve, and black boots. Her face was covered in a thin layer of fur, rabbit/fox ears on the top/side of her heard, and claws on her fingers. She looked around, brownish-red eyes landing on us. He hands ignited in blue flames and I muttered, “Great, another demon.”
Lathena
1
“Go.” I said stepped in front of the group, fur sprouting all over my body, “I’ll handle this.”
They took off, down the hallway to my right, and Silver Ocean said, “Long time, no see.”
“What are you here?” I asked, stopping the transformation, so that I could fit in my armor, but had claws and fangs, “I though you where dead.”
“More or less.”
“I’ll free him you know, and then send you to hell.”
“I’d love to see than.” A black sword formed in her hand.
I was about to lung when the ceiling between us exploded and a white werewolf and some kind of demon fell through. When I looked back up Silver Ocean was gone and I swore. I ran toward the fight when the wall to my right exploded and before I could look something slammed into the side of my head. I hit the wall and slid down it, I could actually see stars… I always though that was an expression. I looked up and saw… dear god, Blood Claw?

[Were Dono]

Dun Dun dunnnn.

[Moon Hunter]

Wolf War Chapter Six ‘The SHADOWS WILL’ part four
Suhahdu
1
I stood over Lathena and watched as she struggled to stay awake. I looked to my right and saw Brittany ripping into Rathos, again. I sighed and walked over, grabbed Brittany’s shoulder, and she looked up at me. I smiled and said, “Hi.”
I pulled back and whipped her through the wall, “Bye.” I said and looked down at Rathos, “I leave you alone for a while and you can’t even handle a werewolf let alone a female werewolf. You’re a pathetic excuse for a demon, now get up.”
I walked back to Lathena, who was struggling to her feet, and added, “Make yourself useful and go and get Art.”
He turned into a shadow and sank into the ground as I slammed my foot into Lathena’s head. I looked down at my body, and my normal black appeared, replacing the hospital gown. “Wondering how I’m still alive?” I asked as she rolled onto her back.
“What are you?” She said weakly.”
“Still haven’t figured it out, little wolf?” I laughed, “Well then I‘ll save you some time. I am Suhahdu, Ruler of the Underworld.”
“Blood Claw’s demon half.” She said I nodded, and then slammed my foot into her ribs.
Her face contorted in pain and I said, “Ah, I see, don’t want to scream and ‘give me what I want’?” I laughed and Rathos appeared behind me, Art rising with him.
“Art, go do what you want to and Rathos, your girl is through there.” I said pointing, “Now back to you.”
My sword appeared in my right hand, I kicked the side of here head, and I said, “You know what the sad thing is?”
She didn’t reply and I put the tip of my sword against her chest, and then said, “The sad thing is that I’m going to have to find your sister, teller that you where killed my some demon, and then… well, that’s my little surprise.”
I saw the fear and anger in her eyes and drank it up, “Time to die.” I whispered and raised the sword.
“NO!” Blood Claw’s voice exploded in my head, “I WON’T LET YOU HURT THEM!”
I dropped the sword and grabbed the sides of my head, pain shooting through my skull.
“GET OUT OF MY HEAD!” I roared and stumbled into the far wall.
Blood Claw
1
I put everything I could into the next push and was able to take control of my body. I opened my eyes and stepped back, turned to the hole in the wall, and saw Rathos standing over Brittany. A black fire ball formed in my hand and Rathos looked at me. “She’s mine Suhahdu, that was our agreement.”
“Suhahdu’s not here right now, “I replied, “Can I take a message?”
Rathos’s eyes widened and I pitched the fireball at him. It crashed into his chest, which promptly exploded. Black blood spattered everywhere and Rathos fell back. I walked over to Brittany and she looked at me, confusion in here eyes. “Go,” I said as Rathos began to stand, “I’ll take care of him.”
Brittany Smith
1
I staggered through the debris and into the hallway. I saw a young woman struggling to her feet… the cop from the bar… she looked like hell. She looked up at me and asked, “Can you lend me a hand?”
I reached down, lifted her up in my arms, and walked quickly down the hallway. “Thanks.” She whispered and passed out in my arms.
Taris K. Straywood
1
“A BUS!” I yelled as Mia and Steven pulled into view with a bus, “YOU COULN’T FIND ANYTHING ELSE?”
Art crashed into an Ambulance and Galist leapt at him. I sent another wave of ice at Vola, freezing her again and yelled, “Everyone get in, before to cops show up!”
As we charged in I cast frost nova and Vola and Art where encased in ice. I got onto the bus and Steven yelled, “Where is Brittany?”
A wall on the third floor exploded and Brittany landed on… never mind, she went through the roof of the bus. “There she is.” I said as Steven swore.
“Let’s get the hell out of here.” Teru said and Mia hit the gas, the bus lurched forward.
Mia Tobira
1
I turned onto the street and sped down it, the road where remarkable empty for New York City at night, but then again it was close to 1:30 a.m. I looked back and saw three things, one; a hole in the roof. Two; some woman being laid down on the bus floor. Three; Brittany changing back into a human.
I looked back up front and a pillar of fire appeared in the road ahead of my. Vola, Suhahdu, Art, and Rathos stepped out… they looked pissed. “Um… guy, we have a problem.
The Keeper
1
They couldn’t survive this fight, I had to intervene… again. I raised both my hands and did what I had too.
Mia Tobira
1
There was a flash of bright white light and I was driving down a road, desert on each side. “What the hell?” I heard Naoy said.
“Dorothy, I don’t think we’re in New York anymore.” Steven replied.
“That’s not funny.” Teru said.
Vola
1
“Where the hell did they go?” I asked, looking around.
“Don’t know… lets get out of here.” Suhahdu replied, “Let’s get out of here.”
2
Suhahdu waved his hand and the vampires ash’s formed into a human form. The vamp. had pail skin for a African, but he was a vampire. His eyes where red and hair black. He was wearing a tight black shirt and black pants. He stood there gasping and then asked, “Who are you people… what do you want?”
“Did you hurt the werewolf at the club vampire?” Rathos asked.
“Yeah, what do you care?” He said facing him.
A black fire ball formed in Rathos’s hand and he pitched it a the vamp, who exploded. Suhahdu waved his hand and the vampire reformed, screaming. Rathos blew him up again and then Suhahdu brought him back again, Suhahdu’s eyes on Silver Ocean the entire time. After then time Rathos stopped and the vampire collapsed to the ground. “What do you want?” He gasped.
“Will you serve me?” He asked.
“Yes, I’ll serve you… just stop blowing me up.”
“I will send you back, gather all the vampire’s loyal to you, and go to Detroit.” Suhahdu waved his hand and the other vampire appeared, “Take them with you.”
After the others left and before I did Suhahdu said, “The child is a Chaos Demon.”

[Silver Predator Wolf]

Whow! The next post is up faster than i thought. Good work on the story. I love it! Keep it up! :) Dont tell me Silver ocean gave birth already..............
O yeah..... Were Dono, what do you mean by Dun Dun dunnnn?

[Were Dono]

Whow! The next post is up faster than i thought. Good work on the story. I love it! Keep it up! :) Dont tell me Silver ocean gave birth already..............
O yeah..... Were Dono, what do you mean by Dun Dun dunnnn?

It's usually put in on TV shows or movies
when something dramatic happens

[Silver Predator Wolf]

I see. Thanks.

[Moon Hunter]

Wolf War Chapter Seven ‘BETRAYAL’ part one
Suhahdu
1
“The child is a Chaos Demon.” I said and Vola’s eyes widened.
“How are you sure?” She asked, surprise in her eyes.
“I watched her womb and saw a noticeable difference.” I said leaning back, “It grew and the only demon that would be effected by death, destruction, chaos in short, it a chaos demon. The more chaos Silver Ocean causes or is in the faster the child will grow.”
“So, what do we do?”
“Make the child grow.”
“Are you sure that is wise?”
“Yes, it must be done.”
“Why?”
“That’s my little secret.”
“Very well… How far are you willing to go?”
“As far as I need to go.”
“What do you want me to do?”
“Just… play along.”
Brittany Smith
1
After two hour of driving we came to a bar in the middle of nowhere. “We need food, water, and a place to stay.” I said looking over my white dress, “How’d we get our stuff back… undamaged and covered in blood?”
Teru, nodded, got off the bus, and walked into the bar. “No clue,” Taris replied, “It was just… here.”
“Someone must like us up there.” Steven said rubbing his forehead, “But my head is still killing me.”
I put my hand on his forehead and, after a second, lifted it. “Thanks,” Steven said grinning, “I feel like a million bucks.”
“Great, do you want a cookie?” Mia snapped.
“What’s wrong with you?” Naoy asked, looked at her.
Mia stared out of the window for a little while and said, “All those people… dead.”
“What about our cop friend?” Galist asked, “She may be very pissed when she wakes up… why hasn’t she woken up?”
“I’ve kept here asleep so we wouldn’t have to deal with her until we’re ready.” Taris replied and Teru walked back onto the bus.
“Well, I got good news and bad news.”
“What’s the good?” Gaslist asked.
“They had food and beer and they took a check.”
“What’s the bad?” Steven asked.
“Wait, don’t tell us, we’re in the middle of nowhere with demons closing in.” Mia snarled.
“We’re in the middle of Death Valley.”
“Oh, this sounds like a great place.” Galist muttered.
“How’d we get out here?” I asked.
“No clue.” Teru replied tossing everyone a beer, “And as far as the demons, I don’t know.”
I opened the beer and as I took a swig Teru said, “But one thing I do know, if we don’t find shelter before sur rise, it’s going to get very hot in here.”
“And gas.” Mia added, “Or we’ll be walking.”
Steven Armstrong
1
Kuy was sitting on Galist shoulder, Galist was asleep, and Kuy was staring out of the window. I slowly closed my eyes and sleep began to take over. After a few moments I was steadily dreaming. I was walking down a hallway, it was made of stone, it looked like the entrance to an old castle. Ahead of me there was a huge set of double wooden doors… I felt drawn to them. I pushed open the doors and walled into a huge room, so height and so long/wide I couldn’t see where it ended. But the thing that caught my attention the most was the hundreds upon thousands of candles sitting on the ground, sitting on pedestals on the wall, poking out of the walls, and just simply floating through the air. I walked toward the center of the room, or at least what I though was the center of the room.
After about ten minutes of walking I saw a figure standing ahead of me, cloaked in a black… cloak, and was standing in the center of some kind of white pentagram. I slowly walked forward, not knowing what to expect, and stopped at the edge of the pentagram. “Hello Steven,” A voice said, echoing through the room, “How are you?”
“I’m… fine… who are you… or would what be more accurate?”
The laughter echoed through the room, the voice didn’t sound male or female… more like both… or neither. “I knew that question was coming and I didn’t even have to look.” It said turning to face me.
The back cloak cover the entire body, even the hands and face, it kinda looked like a Nazgul, from Lord of the Rings… or the ghost of charismas past… I couldn’t decide. “I am a friend,” It said, “And that is all you need to know at this time.”
“Ok, why am I here.”
“I brought you here to give you a message, to take back and give to your friends.”
It didn’t say anything for a moment so I asked, “And that message is?”
“Dark times are coming, things are going to change, alliances will be tested, friendships broken, new allies and enemies will rise, a foe will become a friend and a friend will become a foe, and the face of your true enemy will be revealed.”
“Great.” I replied, “Can you be a little more specific?”
“No.”
“At least you’re straight forward.”
2
My eyes slowly opened and I sat up. “What the hell was that?” I muttered.
“Sorry,” Mia said, “Hit a major bump.”
I looked around the bus, everyone was asleep, so I got up and walked to the seat behind Mia and asked, “You want to talk?”
“I don’t have anything better to do.” She replied, “What’s on your mind?”
“The past… the future… and everything in-between.”
“Can you be a little more specific?” She asked and I smiled, “What’s so funny?”
“Nothing.” I replied, “Nothing at all.”

[Silver Predator Wolf]

Well done M.H. Well done. :) Hm...................... wonder what does the keeper means.............. the plot thickens................ By the way... is the childs father going to be reveal soon?

[Moon Hunter]

Well done M.H. Well done. :) Hm...................... wonder what does the keeper means.............. the plot thickens................ By the way... is the childs father going to be reveal soon?

Yes, the childs father will be reviled soon.

[Silver Predator Wolf]

Cool. I think i know who the father is but i think it is best for me not to say it. I'll just wait and see if i am right.

[Moon Hunter]

Cool. I think i know who the father is but i think it is best for me not to say it. I'll just wait and see if i am right.

Feel free to guess.

[Silver Predator Wolf]

Hm.............. Suhahdu or Apocalypse.... i think.......

[Moon Hunter]

Hm.............. Suhahdu or Apocalypse.... i think.......

:D maybe... maybe not.

[Silver Predator Wolf]

Dang....... can t think of anyone else..... lol

[Moon Hunter]

Dang....... can t think of anyone else..... lol

Mabye... i didn't put the charater in?

[Silver Predator Wolf]

A secret a character? Man your good! :)

[Were Dono]

I don't think he means there will be secret character...
I think he means that someone else put the character in.
And they don't belong to him.
So, like...Rathos or something.

[Silver Predator Wolf]

I see........... Thanks for the info.

[Moon Hunter]

I am now accepting new characters, if you wish to post one, please post it with a ememy/evil character too. Thank you.

[Were Dono]

Mind if a I post a picture of Brittany Smith I drew up?
Fanservice...kind of.
There's no fans, though. Of her anyway.

[Moon Hunter]

Mind if a I post a picture of Brittany Smith I drew up?
Fanservice...kind of.
There's no fans, though. Of her anyway.

Go ahead, feel free too.

[Were Dono]

Brittany Smith
GuAAHaaha...

*coughs*

http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b215/0Were0Dono0/BSfanscolor2.jpg

[Silver Predator Wolf]

Only one word. Cute. :)

[Silver Predator Wolf]

Ok. Here are my charactes. The good one first.

Name: Aluna

Species: werewolf

Age: 20

Gender: Female

Eye Color: Violet

Hair color: White

Fur/skin Color: Ghostly white

Special ability: Transform at will, rapid healing, ability to see through any illusion technique, agile and mind reading.

Personality (optional): Calm, friendly, speaks with a very gentle voice, rarely raises her voice or loses her temper, gentle, kind, helpful, smart and loyal.

Extra Description (optional): Train in arm and unarm combat, calm looking face, hair length till the waist.

Werewolf form: Her height will shoot up to 2.20m. Her fur colour will be ghostly white, strength and speed will increase, walk and run on two or fours, teeth will be sharper than a katana, sharp claws, her face will change in such a way that anyone can tell that she looks like werewolf. Even by looking at her body can you tell it’s a female. Her hair will remain the same. So will her eyes.

Semi transform form: Head and skin are the only ones that change. She will also grow a tail. But when she is semi transform she still wear her clothes as although she may have transform her body still look like a female humans body under her clothing and her fur have not appear yet and she can still use weapons walk and run and do other stuff she normally do in her human forms.

Human form: 1.90m tall. Wears a sleeveless black shirt and blue jeans. wears a silver colored chain around her neck with the pack symbol on it. (The symbol is a sword with a wolfs head in front) The necklace once belong to her mother and was given to her before she died. Lathena has the pack symbol tattooed on her right side of her right arm.

Weapons: Two blessed silver balde katana, dual magnum that fires blessed silver bullets, one gauntlet on each hand that has a hidden blade. The blade is different form Lathenas blade. While Lathenas blade shoots out from the front Alunas blade shoots out from the side. The balde is 1.0m long from tip to tip and it's retractable.
It is used in similar style to a sword, but its power is greatly increased by its counter-balanced design. Mostly created from a forged alloy and double-edged, the Maul is capable of being used as a slashing weapon in all arcs of movement; but it can also be spun like the spear, to rain a barrage of blows onto a target.


History (optional): Lathenas younger sister and one of the two surviving member of their clan who Blood Claw tried to save. She and Lathena study in the same school and they live together and at the same time befriend Silver Ocean and his sister. She also has a crush on Silver Ocean but was to shy to tell him. But by the time she wants to tell him he already proposes to Lathena. Silver found out about it when he asks her why she looks so sad the day before his wedding. She than told Silver that she has a crush on him on the first day they met and was to shy to tell him and now he is going to married to her sister and she will lose him forever. Silver heard this he holds her hand. She looks at him and he said. “Although I am wont be able to be your mate I can still be your friend.” When she heard this she smiles. Silver holds out his hand and said. “Friends?”
She holds his hands and said “Friends.” From than on they have been the best of friends. Some say that they are more than just friends and that they look more like siblings. When she heard that Silver Ocean has been bound with a demon she teams up with his sister to find a way to save him. She also works for the police and is second in command of her sisters S.W.A.T team. Their clans name is Asstortremter.

Now the evil one.

Name: Arcass

Species: Vampire/werewolf (Hybrid)

Age: looks 20 (Age 120)

Gender: Male

Eye Color: Blue

Hair color: Brown

Skin Color: Pale

Special ability: Immune to sun light and silver. Stronger and faster than any normal vampire or werewolf.

Personality (optional): Evil and sadistic. Loves to torture female human, werewolf, demon just so he can hear them scream in pain.

Extra Description (optional): Dress in black from head to toe. Trained in arm and unarm combat.

History (optional): He killed his own parents for reasons unknown. He even tortures his mother before he kills her.

Anything needs to be change E mail me. Thanks. :)

[adam_nihilus]

Alright, MH asked me personally to be here, so here goes:
Name: Kyle Erris
Species: Human/ bitten Werewolf
Age: 19
Gender: male
Hair color: black
Skin/ fur color: African brown
Personality: Quiet and withdrawn, as he is still getting used to being what he is, but will likely become more open and charismatic as time goes on.
Extra description: Tall and muscular, with a young Morgan Freeman-esque face and thickly planted hair.
Werewolf description: Even taller than he is in human form, and covered in wiry fur with very sharp teeth and claws. Heals fast, is incredibly strong, and has ultra-keen senses.
Human description: Usually dresses in a green muscle shirt with battered jeans and a denim jacket.
Weapons: A pistol.
History: He was attacked a few months ago by a rogue werewolf that had managed to find it's way into town, and barely escaped with his life. He reveled in the power it brought him until one night, after he stole a six pack for a party, he got drunk, lost control and killed a man who had angered him earlier that day. He ran away later that week. His ultimate goal is to find others like him and join or start a pack.

(He doesn't have an arch enemy, is that OK?)

[Moon Hunter]

Alright, MH asked me personally to be here, so here goes:
Name: Kyle Erris
Species: Human/ bitten Werewolf
Age: 19
Gender: male
Hair color: black
Skin/ fur color: African brown
Personality: Quiet and withdrawn, as he is still getting used to being what he is, but will likely become more open and charismatic as time goes on.
Extra description: Tall and muscular, with a young Morgan Freeman-esque face and thickly planted hair.
Werewolf description: Even taller than he is in human form, and covered in wiry fur with very sharp teeth and claws. Heals fast, is incredibly strong, and has ultra-keen senses.
Human description: Usually dresses in a green muscle shirt with battered jeans and a denim jacket.
Weapons: A pistol.
History: He was attacked a few months ago by a rogue werewolf that had managed to find it's way into town, and barely escaped with his life. He reveled in the power it brought him until one night, after he stole a six pack for a party, he got drunk, lost control and killed a man who had angered him earlier that day. He ran away later that week. His ultimate goal is to find others like him and join or start a pack.

(He doesn't have an arch enemy, is that OK?)

It's ok, it just means i'll create the enemy myself.

[Moon Hunter]

I was woundering, who reads Wolf War? I just don't want to be writting a story for two people.

[Silver Predator Wolf]

Well.............. me and were dono are reading............. so are the guests and some other members.

[Moon Hunter]

Well.............. me and were dono are reading............. so are the guests and some other members.

I know about you and were dono, you two are the only one's who post, it's kinda got me worried.

[Silver Predator Wolf]

The others just read but they never post. So dont worry. At least they are reading.

[Were Dono]

Yeah, I see people read the story once and a while.
But, in all reality, it's really up to you if you keep writing.
If you do end it, then, well, it was good while it lasted, I suppose.

[Silver Predator Wolf]

You are not planning to end it are you ? :(

[Moon Hunter]

You are not planning to end it are you ? :(

No, no, I'm not planing to end it, i'm just wondering who reads it. I stumbled across something yesterday that made me happy, my story is the most posted and viewed thing in the fourm.

[Silver Predator Wolf]

Whew................... now i can breath easy. I was so worried that you were gona stop that i cant seem to focus on anything. But now that i have read your post i can be at ease.

[Moon Hunter]

Wolf War Chapter Seven ‘BETRAYAL’ part two
Silver Ocean
1
I walked into the thrown room and saw Suhahdu standing alone in the center of the room, hands behind his back, and his back to me. I slowly walked in and the door closed behind me. “Why did you summon me?” I asked, stopping a foot away from his back.
“I wanted to speak with you.” He replied.
“About?”
“Your other half, your child, and how you look at me.”
I stood there in shock for a second, “How did you-”
“Know?” He faced me, “It was simple. You’re like me, two entities in one body. I can see your womb growing and feel your child’s power. And I’ve seen how you look at me, lust in your eyes.”
I didn’t know what to say, I knew he has two souls in his body, I felt the child moving in my womb, and I did watch him. “Do you know who the father is?” I asked.
“Don’t you?”
“Ye... no, I was...”
“Don’t worry about it, the child’s father was a Chaos demon named Krantye-ostin, Kran-tie-lost-in... he was destroyed a few years ago, but not before raping you.” Suhahdu turned back around and said, “He’s paid for his actions.”
“Is there something you want?” I growled, “I don’t like it when someone knows more about my past than me.”
“I was wondering if you wanted to go out for... dinner and a good time?”
“To the surface?”
“Yes.”
“How? I’m kinda... I stick out in a crowd.”
Suhahdu turned around and walked over to me. He put one hand on my shoulder and moved the other across my face. My entire body tingled and he smiled. He turned, waved his hand, and a mirror appeared in front of me. I gasped, I looked human. I had long brown hair, brownish red eyes, and ruddy-white skin. I was wearing the same outfit and Suhahdu said, “It’s not permanent... unless you want it to be.”
“I... don’t know.”
“Well, let’s go out for a good time.”
Suhahdu
1
We stood on the cat walk in the warehouse, the rave on the ground floor below us. I looked over at Silver Ocean and asked, “How long have you know you were pregnant?”
“The day I was imprisoned, it was the reason.” Silver Ocean replied.
“Interesting.” I replied and then looked down at the crowd, “How do you feel about meat?”
“I’m a fan... why?”
I smiled and waved one of my hands over the dance floor, all the doors in the room slammed shut, no one noticed. I looked up at one of the sprinklers and it exploded, along with a few others, causing water to flood down into the room. People screamed and went for the doors, which went budging. I glanced at the stair way leading up to the catwalk and it promptly collapsed. A black fire ball formed in my right hand, and a human on the catwalk next to me screamed. I dropped the fireball and the second it hit the water the room filled with screams of pain. The water from the sprinkler system stopped and steam filled the room.
I looked over at the human on the catwalk and asked, “Enjoy the show?”
The human scrambled back and fell off the edge into the water. When the human hit, there was a short scream, and the nothing. I stood there for a moment and then said, “Dinner anyone?”
Taris K. Straywood
1
I opened my eyes and sat up, dang my back was sore. I looked over at the cop, still asleep, and then stood up. I walked up to the front of the bus and saw that Steven was driving now; Mia was asleep in the seat behind him. “What time is it?” I asked sitting down in the seat across from Mia.
“Seven a.m.”
I looked out of the window, it was still pitch black. “Are you sure?”
“Yeah, I don’t know why it’s still so dark... unless…” Steven trailed off.
“Unless what?”
“I had a dream and in this dream some...thing told me, and I quote, Dark times are coming, things are going to change, alliances will be tested, friendships broken, new allies and enemies will rise, a foe will become a friend and a friend will become a foe, and the face of your true enemy will be revealed…. What do you think?”
I leaned back and after a moment said, “I don’t know.”
“All I know is that it should be dawn right now... maybe this is what it meant by dark times.”
“In my experience things are never that straight forward.”
Suhahdu
1
“How was that?” I asked, pulling the last peace of par-boiled meat from the human’s bones.
“It hit the spot.” Silver Ocean replied leaning back against a large pile of bones.
“You ate at least forty ponds of meat, and didn’t gain a pound… lucky.”
Silver Ocean laughed and asked, “So what now?”
“I was thinking we go and kill those thorns in my side.”
“I like that idea.”
2
We appeared in the middle of the desert, on a road. I bus was in the distance, coming toward us. “You ready for this?” I asked, my sword forming in my hand.
“Yeah.” She replied, an identical sword forming in her hand.
My eyes went down to her belly; the child would be born soon.
Lathena
1
My eye slowly opened; there was carnage all around me. I was laying on the side of a road… a desert road. There was a burning bus to my right, tip over on its side. “What the hell?” I muttered sitting up slowly.
“Duck!” A voice yelled to my left. I looked over and saw Blood Claw, no Suhahdu swinging a black sword over his head and bringing it down hard on a burning blade.
Taris raised his staff and slammed it into the ground, ice shot out of the ground, impaling Suhahdu, but not seeming to have any effect. “Nice to see you’re awake.” A voice said from behind me.
I rolled forward and shot to my feet. I spun around and saw... her! She looked different, but it was the same person. “What do you want?” I asked, my eye going down to the bulge that was her womb.
“To kill you.” She replied.
2
“You love him, don’t you?” Silver Ocean said as I dogged another attack.
“Why do you want to know weather I love him or not?” I replied.
“Because if you don’t you can help me release my full strength by killing his Soul.”
“What do you mean by killing his soul you can use your full strength?”
“You see when I bound with him I was unable to use my full strength because his soul is still in this body you see before you right now. And by killing his soul it will be gone and I can finally have full control over this body and use my full strength.”
Before I could reply Silver Ocean’s eyes bulged and she dropping the sword, hands shooting to her womb. She dropped down to the ground and screamed in pain.

[Silver Predator Wolf]

This is Great! I love it! Keep up the good work M.H! :) Looking forward to the next update on the story.

[Moon Hunter]

Wolf War Chapter Seven ‘BETRAYAL’ part three
Suhahdu
1
Silver Ocean’s scream ripped through the air and I looked over at her, in time to see her dropping to her knees. I blacked Galist next attack without looking and slammed my foot into the side of his head. I teleported over to Silver Ocean, grabbed Lathena, and pitched he at the bus. “The time has come.” I said as Silver Ocean looked up at me and I raised my sword, “You have out lived your use.”
Galist Selphanis
1
I crashed into the bus’s side… bottom, and dropped to my knees. I looked up and saw Lathena crash into the ground next to me. I saw Suhahdu raise his sword and a pillar of fire shot up around them, blocking my view. “What the hell?” I muttered.
A high pitch scream ripped through the air, silence, and then crying... a child crying. The flames vanished and Silver Ocean was lying on the ground, blood spewing from her womb and Suhahdu was standing over her, holding a baby. The baby was drenched in blood and crying and Suhahdu was staring down at it. Silver Ocean’s womb closed and she slowly sat up. “Give me my child.” She whispered.
“You can have what left of it.” He replied and his sword vanished.
As Silver Ocean stood Suhahdu put his hand on the child head and closed his eyes. “What do you think is going on?” The cop lady asked me.
“No clue.” I replied, “But I have a very bad feeling about this.”
Silver Ocean
1
Suhahdu put his hand on my child forehead and closed his eyes. How dare he touch my child! I longed, but the next thing I knew I was laying on the ground, next to the bus, part of the underside we sticking through my shoulder. I looked over at Suhahdu as he place his hand back on my child’s head.
Suhahdu
1
I focused on the child’s power and started ripping the life from it. After a moment the baby went limp in my arms and I opened my eyes. I’m my hand was a small black flame, the last peace of the puzzle. I tossed the lifeless body aside; before it hit the ground a bloody Silver Ocean caught the corps. I held the flame to my heart and pushed it in. The flame went inside my body and I smile. “He who was once broken is now whole.” I said, taking a deep breath, freedom felt good.
Brittany Smith
1
My eyes opened, my head was killing me... hmm, this seemed to be a trend. I looked around... why was I laying on the window of the bus? I slowly stood up, somehow I didn’t have a scratch on my. I hurried to the front of the bus and climbed out through the windshield… err, the hole where the windshield was. I looked around and saw Suhahdu standing a little ways away. He looked up at me, smiled, and then he fell to his knees shaking.
Suhahdu’s head shot back and he screamed, just as black... energy consumed his form, forming a pillar in the sky. “What is it with these guys and pillars of stuff?” Taris asked, as I stepped to the... side/bottom of the bus.
I watched Galist struggle to his feet and raise his sword above his head, close his eyes, and slammed the blade into the ground. Burning spikes shot out of the ground and then shot toward Suhahdu. Just before they hit, I saw pillar of energy vanish and Suhahdu looked at us, and then Galist’s attack hit. Smoke, dirt, and flames shot up, hiding Suhahdu from view.
“Got him.” Galist said leaning against his sword.
“I don’t think so.” A voice said from the smoke.
As the smoke cleared I saw Suhahdu with his sword in the ground ahead of him, and Galist’s attack had been split in two, hitting two boulders behind Suhahdu. Suhahdu stood up and looked at us... something was different about him. A dark smile spread across his face and a cold wind began to howl. The temp in the air plummeted and even the warmth inside seem to dim. “It’s been a long time.” Suhahdu said, his eyes seemed even darker than before, “I’ve been broken for so long.”
“Who are you?” I shouted.
He ignored me and looked down at the ground, at Silver Ocean. “I thank you for carrying the last peace of my soul, so I will not kill you.” He looked back at us, at me, “I’m not Suhahdu, he was a part of me.”
“What are you?” Taris asked, I could hear fear in his voice.
“I wish to offer you all a deal.” He said ignoring Taris.
“What kind of deal?” I asked as Galist raised his sword, the blade was shaking.
“Will you serve me in exchange for anything and everything you want?” He looked at me, “A loved one.” He turned to Galist, “Your memories.” Then Taris, “All the power you could ever want.” Then Steven, “A release from you past?” Then Terusugu, “Revenge?” Then Naoy, “Or perhaps money?” He looked at Mia and a small grin appeared on his face, it sent chills down my spin, “Revenge against the one who left you for dead?” and at last he looked at Lathena, “Revenge against the one who killed your pack… or maybe your beloved back?” His sharp laugh ripped trough the night, “Or maybe, just maybe, you want your fallen angel returned to you?”
“What are you talking about?” Lathena asked, but I knew the answer.
He lifted his right hand and a bright white glowing sphere appeared in his hand. In the sphere there was swirling white mist… and Blood Claw’s face. “I won’t ask for you answer now, but until you give it to me he’ll, “He nodded to Blood Claw, “be in hell.”
Blood Claw’s orb was consumed by fire and vanished. He lowered his hand and said, “Suhahdu was a part of me, but now I am whole. I am the Demon Ancient Tryan-Kelton.”
And with than he vanished, no puff of smoke, no pillar of fire, no nothing, he just vanished.
“This is very, very, very bad.” Mia said.
“You think!” Naoy shouted, “What was your first clue?!”
Kyle Erris
1
I didn’t like stealing, but I didn’t have a choice right now… not with how I left things. I stole this motorcycle and helmet, but the green muscle shirt, battered jeans, and a denim jacket where mine. “Things could be worse.” I muttered.
A man appeared in the road ahead of me and I swerved, crashing into a cactuse. Figures, I come to Death Valley to hide and crash into a cactus after some guy appears from thin air. I stood up and looked at him. He looked like a friggin bouncer; his hair was black, his skin a ruddy white, his eyes where dark black, and he was wearing a black ‘biker’ outfit. “Who the hell are you?” I shouted, my hand going to the gun I had hidden in the back of my pants.
He looked at me and said, “Hmm... I guess my aim’s a little off, well, that’s bound to happen after... a few million years, oh well.”
The guy vanished into thin air; I just stood there staring at the spot where he had been. “WHAT THE HELL DO YOU HAVE AGAINST ME!?” I shouted looking toward the sky, “WHAT THE HELL DID I DO TO YOU?”
The Keeper
1
I stood there feeling... worried I guess, he was free. Step’s needed to be taken, which meant they would have to meet the Twelve. “This is going to be very... strange.” I said as their candles appeared in front of me, I had to summon them all.

[Silver Predator Wolf]

This is getting better and better. keep up the good work M.H! Looking fowarad to the next update! :)

[Silver Predator Wolf]

Moon Hunter is having a bit of a trouble with the up comming chapter so it will take a while before the next post on the story will be up.

[Moon Hunter]

Wolf War Chapter Seven ‘BETRAYAL’ part four
Tryan-Kelton
1
I appeared in the stone thrown room, good my aim was getting better. I looked around and saw Rathos and Art standing by the door, Suhahdu had made them guards, and Vola stood by the thrown. They all stared at me and the first to say anything was Rathos. “What the hell happened to you, Suhahdu?” he asked and I faced him.
“Suhahdu was a part of me and now that I have been… reassembled, he has taken his place among the parts.”
Vola walked down from the thrown and over to me. We looked at each other of a little while and then I pulled her up into a kiss. “It’s been too long, Vola-nea (Vola-knee-a), far too long.” I said after the kiss.
“Well, I’m just glad your back my husband.”
“Whoa, whoa, we miss something here?” Art asked, “Vola-nea? Tryan-Kelton? Husband? What about Blood Claw, Glaist, and the rest of those creatures?”
I turned and looked at him, “One; Vola-nea is my queen, my wife. Two; they are still alive and will remain that way until I see fit that they should be… terminated.”
“That wasn’t part of the deal!” Art growled, his hand going to the blade at his side.
My right eye twitched and his arm exploded, blood and gore splattered Rathos and the walls. Art fell to the floor screaming, and I slowly walked over to him. I knelt down next to him and whispered, “I’m going to make this simple for your animal brain, the deal you made was with Suhahdu, not me. So here’s a new deal,” I grabbed him by the neck and lifted him off the ground, holding him high in the air, “You work for me, you do as I say, and you ask no questions or I blow you apart, piece by piece.”
I dropped him and the gore and blood vanished as his arm reappeared. I looked at Rathos and asked, “Is there anything you like to say, demon?”
“No.” Rathos replied.
“Good, now both of you, get out of here. Vola-nea and I have some… catching up to do.”
Lathena
1
“Well now, that’s one hell of a story.” Mia said, after two solid minutes of silence.
“Yeah, well, I get around.” I replied, “Now it’s your turn, who the hell are you people?”
We had been walking for two hours along the road and we where heading east… I think, without the sun it was hard to tell. “Do you want the long or short version?” Brittany asked.
“Short.”
“We all met up, demon’s attack us, kill some of us, then we’re back, now this, oh and Blood Claw’s demon side apparently ‘fixed’ himself.” Steven said, “Here’s the really short version, we’re screwed.”
I sat there for a second and then said, “Right, we need to get back to New York.”
“Why?” Mia growled.
“We have allies there.”
“Great, more wood for the fire.”
“Huh?”
“Everyone who’s helped us has ended up dead.” Taris replyed.
Before anyone could say anything there was a flash of bright light, then we where standing in a huge room, filled with millions of candles. “What the hell?”
There was a scream behind us and I spun around in time to see a guy in a green muscle shirt, battered jeans, and a denim jacket flying through the air. “LOOK OUT BELOW!” He yelled as I stepped out of the way.
He crashed into the ground and skidded to a stop. The guy was African American, black hair, brown eyes, and, once he was standing, I could tell he wall tall and very muscular. He was mumbling soething about the fates hateing him when he looked up and saw all the candles, most of which where just floating around. “All right, I’ll bite, what the hell is going on?” He asked as a candle foated by his head.
“Got me.” I replied and looked over at Taris, “You’re the mage, you know were we are?”
“I don’t believe it...” Steven muttered looking around, “It wansn’t a dream.”
“What wasn’t a dream?” I asked.
“Fallow me.” He said and started walking.

[Silver Predator Wolf]

A bit short. But its good. Looking fowarad to the next update. :)

[Moon Hunter]

A bit short. But its good. Looking fowarad to the next update. :)

"Like i said, Writers block is a 'insert swear word here'!

[Moon Hunter]

Dear Readers,
One, I'm not ending the story anytime soon, but i do want to say that school has picked up, along with my movie, and life keeps on getting in the way. I'm going to try and have the next chapter up in a week or two. Two, thank you to all the readers who read this story.
From Moon Hunter

[Moon Hunter]

Does anyone have ideas for the story, coment's, thoughts, insults, or anything they want to say?

[Silver Predator Wolf]

Well...... i did some you all my ideas already so i am just waitting to see if they will be used. :)

[Were Dono]

No ideas D:
I would be makeing my own if I still had any story creativity left in me.
Which I don't.
Sorry D:

[Indiana_Jones]

I am thinking about ideas.

[Moon Hunter]

Wolf War Chapter Eight ‘WHY WE’RE HERE’ part one
Steven Armstrong
1
I had been here before, that person/thing would be here, but now I was really here… how? What was going on, where we going to get answers, how much would those answers cost us? There where some many question and so few answers… but for now, we would walk.
Tryan-Kelton
1
I cracked my neck and smiled, Vola-nea returned the smile and asked, “So what do we do now?”
“Those people are going to either join me or die, so until then we do nothing… but the Keeper my be a problem.”
“The Keeper, what could that thing do?”
“That thing could be the only threat to me... Their are no other’s left who could stand against us.”
“Should we pay it a visit?”
“We will soon, but for now…” I smiled and laid back down, “I’m in no hurry.”
Silver Ocean
1
I closed the grave; my grief had consumed me... I want revenge, but to get it I would have to join them… she would destroy me. “It’s worth it.” I muttered, looking down at the grave, my hands going to my belly, life still existed within.
The Keeper
1
The end was coming, darkness was closing in, the great one had come back, and the only hope for this world was coming. I looked at the black candles, three of them. The center one, a black flame was burning, the one to the right was the same, but the third’s flame was nearly out… they would come for it, we had no time.

[Silver Predator Wolf]

This is getting better and better. Keep up the good work! :)

[Moon Hunter]

Wolf War Chapter Eight ‘WHY WE’RE HERE’ part two
Brittany Smith
1
We walk in complete silence for the better part of an hour… none of us could think of anything to say… I guess. When Steven stopped I nearly walked into him, stopping at the last moment. “Why did we stop?” I asked and he nodded ahead of our little group.
I looked and saw a figure cloaked in black, it’s back was to us. No one moved, we just stared. “It’s not nice to stare.” A voice echoed through the room, it’s voice, “Now get over here, we have much to talk about and little time to do it in.”
The Keeper
1
They approached slowly as I turned around. “It’s good to see you again Steven, I’m glade you’re all alive.”
“Again?” Mai asked, looking at Steven.
“You’re the one helping us, aren’t you?” Galist said and Steven nodded.
“Yes, I’m the one, but we have much bigger problems right now.” I stared walking, “Tryan-Kelton is free and that means it’s the end of the world, you know, the normal apocalypse stuff.”
They stared after me and Taris asked, “Let me guess, we get to save the world.”
“That’s right.”
“Great.” Noay said sarcastically.
“How do we stop them?” Mai asked, “Last time I checked they had all the cards.”
“The candles here represent the life force of everything, from bacteria to elephants, from angels to demon.”
“That means Tryan-Kelton’s candle is here?” Steven asked.
“Yes, but one can’t simply put out a candle, not even me, I’m the Keeper of life.”
“So who can?”
“You all must speak to the Twelve.”
“The who?”
“The Twelve, the balance, the… they’ll do all the introduction’s.” I replied as we stopped at a huge stone door, just sitting in the floor.
Teru looked behind the gate and said, “Um... theirs no black here, just solid rock.”
“Not everything is what it seems.” I replied and put my hands on the door, “This isn’t going to be fun.”
I pushed open the door and bright light consumed us.
2
After a few moments the light died, more or less, and we all where standing in... well, light. I looked around and saw twelve gray orbs, the Twelve. “Welcome.” They all said at the same time, growing brighter with the word.
“Um… Hi?” Galist replied, staring at the orb close to him.
“What the heck…” Kyle muttered, “What are you?”
“We are nothing and we are everything.”
“Huh?”
“What side are you one?” Taris asked.
“We are on nether side and both sides.”
“Are you good or evil?” Brittany asked.
“We are good and evil.”
“What are your names?” Teru growled.
“We have name, we are one and we are many.”
“You’re contradicting yourselves left and right.” Steven replied.
“We are many and none, we are balance between the light and dark.”
“That’s why you’re grey, right?” Mai asked.
“Correct, but we’re steadily growing darker. The demon’s power is getting stronger, soon he’ll cover your worlds in shadow.”
“Worlds?” Noay asked.
“There is not one Earth, but many.”
“Xavis.” Galist said.
“Correct, if this world falls, then all the others will fallow.”
“Can we stop it?” Brittany asked.
“We know not, there are too many variables... but we must show you.”
“Show us what?” Taris asked.
“What may come to pass.”
There was another bright flash of light and they where gone. “I hope you know what you’re doing.” I said, “They may not be ready.”
“We sent them somewhere else first, that will come if they… live.”
Galist Selphanis
1
There was a bright flash of light and then darkness. I slowly opened my eyes; the landscape slowly came into focus. I sat up and looked around, everyone was laying on the ground, slowly waking up. I looked back to the landscape, the sky was reddish black, and the ruins of a city stretched out as far as I could see. I looked behind me seeing black water, we where on an island, and an identical landscape on the other side. There where several bridges, well, what was left of them, connecting the island to the main land. I heard a groan and looked over at Taris and asked, “You ok?”
“I’m great.” He said rolling over, “Just great, I mean wh… oh shit.”
I looked over my shoulder and saw another island, with a large stature on it… it was covered in rust, but it still looked familiar. “Oh shit.” Brittany said as I stood up, “Is that what I think it is?”
“The Statue of Liberty, yeah.” Teru said.
“Um… guy’s!” Steven said from behind us, “You might want to see this.”
“What is it?” I asked turning around and froze in shock.
Standing about ten feet from us was a group of people. But only one of them stuck out. “ART!” I shouted, “What have you done?”
Art slowly walked over to me, he looked like shit. He was missing his… ‘special eye’, was covered in scars, and was wearing a outfit like thee cops do, full body armor. He stopped in front of me, he looked old, his eyes where tired… he looked like he had seen and been through hell. What happened next shocked me; Art’s wrapped his arms around me and gave me a hug. “It’s good to see you again brother.” He looked at me, “It’s been too long.”

[Silver Predator Wolf]

Very nice. It is up faster than i expected. Keep up the good work. :)

[Moon Hunter]

I should have the next chapter up in a few hours or days, i don't know which, got a LOT going on.:wacko:

[Moon Hunter]

Sorry guys, I'm going to try and get the chapter up today, i haven't had time, i'll have it up in three or four hours. Sorry it's taking so long, I haven't had any time, it's ticking me off.:supermad:

[Silver Predator Wolf]

Ok. Hope it will be a long one. :)

[Silver Predator Wolf]

So..... is the next chapter done yet?

[Moon Hunter]

Wolf War Chapter Eight ‘WHY WE’RE HERE’ part three
Brittany Smith
1
Galist looked socked, and I must admit, I was too. Art, the bad guy, was hugging Galist, the good guy, in a post-apocalypse New York City. “How’ve you been?” Art asked after amoment and after letting go of Galist.
“Um… what the hell happened?”
“It’s a long story and it’s not safe to tell it here.” Art said turning back to the group of ten or so people, “Let’s more, make our way home.”
The group started moving off, keeping close to buildings and shooting from wreakage to wreckage, we did the same. After ten minutes we stared walking in the centers of the streets, quickly, but we weren’t moving around like rats anymore. New York was trashed, there where skeletons in the street, ruble from buildings, cars pilled up all over the place. “Can you tell us what happened now?” I asked Art, who had taken the lead.
“They won.” He said, knowing he didn’t have to say more.
“How bad?” Taris asked.
“The entire planet, Xavis, and many other worlds.” Art replied, “Where just hanging on, hopping that someday we’ll be able to defeat them.”
“Where are we going?” Teru asked, looking at the body of a long dead child.
“The only safe place in this cursed city.” Art replied, grabbing a manhole cover, “Under it.”
2
After we dropped into the sewer system, and the manhole cover had be put back, we started walking. The sewer was full of bones, human, animal, and other things. “After you guy’s vanished, Rathos and I turned against the demon’s, but we didn’t stand a chance. They took my eye and dumped us in this city. We tried to stop them, but... well, we lost. For the past nine years we’ve tried to take back this world, but their too powerful. Demon’s now walk this Earth freely, Tryan-Kelton rules with Vola-nea at his side, his son leads the armies on other worlds, and… well, we might be all that’s left on this world.” Art replied, and looked at us, “Silver Ocean was killed a year ago… um, I’m not sure how to tell you guy’s this, but when you came back, a year after the demon’s took over, Galist, Taris, and Lathena where killed. Kyle you died in an attack a few months later. Steven, you’re still alive, but have the I.Q. of a rock, blunt force trauma to the head, fried you brain, sorry.”
“Don’t worry about it, wasn’t like I was using it anyway.” Steven replied, somehow mustering a grin.
“Teru attack the demon’s and hasn’t been heard from since... dead. Naoy and Mia, you two had kids.” Mia and Naoy stared at each other, “You two are still alive and kids are doing... ok.”
We walked in silence for a minute and I asked, “What about me?”
“You... um... won’t believe me if I told you.”
Art stopped and a metal door and pounded four times, paused, and then two more time. The door opened and we all walked in.
3
It was a sewer made into a fortress. “Wow.” I said, “You redecorated.”
Art smiled, “You could say that.”
“Brittany!” A voice I knew very well, shouted.
I looked over and saw Rathos limp over to us, looking as bad as Art. “Hi, long time no see.” He said with a grinning, the scars on his face stretching.
“Um… I’m sorry, this is too weird.” I said backing away.
“Have you told here?” Rathos asked looking over at Art.
“No, I thought you should.”
Rathos looked over at me and asked, “Can we go for a walk, no mind games, no tricks, just a walk... with a little talking.”
I looked at Rathos, I have never felt so confused in my life, and slowly nodded, “All right... for a little while.”
Naoy Lebel
1
“Can you show Mia and me where we, uh, live?” I asked and Art nodded.
“The rest of you, feel free to look around, um, Taris go two level down to the record room, there’s someone I want you to talk too.” Art said and we all went our separate ways.
2
Art lead us to a hallway and said, “Third door on the right, I’ve got to go and take care of a few things... plus I really don’t want to see this.” Art added and smiled, “It’s going to be weird enough without me there.”
Mia and I nodded and Art walked off, this was going to be weird. We walked down the hallway and stopped at the third door to the right. We both stood there, looked at each other, and I slowly knocked. “Come in.” My voice said from inside.
I opened the door and we walked in, this is way too weird.
3
We where standing in a large room, it served as a living room, dinning room, kitchen, and bed room. There was a door on the far wall, bathroom. I looked aground, there was a table, four chairs, oven/stove, sink, four beds, and an older version of Mia and me sitting at the table. “How are you doing?” I asked… me, boy this was going to be a grammar nightmare.
“Fine, but it’s good to see… me, before all of this.” The older me replied.
The older me looked just like me, but a few scars, and some grey hair. The older Mia looked just like here, but two long scars across her face and grey hair. “So… what do you want to talk about?” Mia asked… the other us… this was going to be a long day.
Taris K. Straywood
1
I went down two level, this place was set up like a fortress. It was divided into sectors and each sector could be locked down. Apparently I was heading to the records room, what did Art want me to see?
I came to a huge room, I couldn’t see the ceiling or the bottom of the pit. I was standing on a small ledge with a single chair. I sat down and waited nothing. After a few moments a voice asked, “How may I help you today, Taris?”
I stood up and looked down, the voice had come from the depths. A huge machine shot up the side of the chasm, stopping when it was level with me. I looked old and was made of very old machinery, this thing was huge! “Who or what are you?” I asked, staring at it.
“I am Vanguara X.” I replied, “How may I be of help?”

[Silver Predator Wolf]

Very good! Hope to see the next chapter up soon. :)

[Were Dono]

>_> I have a feeling you're going to stick Rathos with Brittany.

[midnightclubx]

I''m sorry if I haven't been commenting on your story in a long time, but I'm working that story that will hopefully be as popular as this.

I am also hoping that I will get as much commentary as this as well.

Keep up the good work, and not to sound like a TV ad, but please read my story if you have the time (but I think everyone is expecting werewolves and all the same old plots, but I can't really help it... :( ).

[Moon Hunter]

I''m sorry if I haven't been commenting on your story in a long time, but I'm working that story that will hopefully be as popular as this.

I am also hoping that I will get as much commentary as this as well.

Keep up the good work, and not to sound like a TV ad, but please read my story if you have the time (but I think everyone is expecting werewolves and all the same old plots, but I can't really help it... :( ).

Post and i will read, my friend. :cool:

[Indiana_Jones]

I like it! Keep it up.

[Silver Predator Wolf]

So...... how is the next chapter going?

[Moon Hunter]

My computer keeps on deleting the file, it's driving me nuts, but it's done, just needs to be rewriten.

[Silver Predator Wolf]

Ok. Hope to see it up soon. :)

[Moon Hunter]

I'm going to get the next page up in the next three or four days, computer finnaly fixed and no longer deleting stuff.

[Silver Predator Wolf]

That's good news!

[Moon Hunter]

Guess who got their creativity back.

Wolf War Chapter Eight ‘WHY WE’RE HERE’ part four
Vanguara X
1
“What are you?” The Mag asked, searching data banks, Mage... Taris.
“I as Vanguara X, data colector and keeper, you are Taris K. Straywood, Hight Mage, now,” Searching… Searching… Taris K. Straywood, High Mage… Pulling file… Taris killed in the battle of the Seven Stars… pulling file… The Battle of the Seven Stars, the first and last atack on Demon forterus, all killed, “what would you like to know?”
“What happened?”
"When?”
“How’d the world get like this.”
“The demon army swup across this world, after bring freed from the gates, and after the birth of the demon lord’s son.”
“Who’s his son?”
“Apocalypse.”
Brittany Smith
1
Rathos and I walked through the sewer system, he talk about how many years had gone by, what had happened, and that he was sorry. We stopped at an elevator and he ushed the button, “I’m sorry that I had a part in… this.”
“It’s… ok.” I replied, “You where driven by a need for power. Where are we going?”
“I wanted to talk to you about the demon’s offer.”
The elevator doors opened and Rathos walked in, his back to me. “How do you know about that?”
“Get in.”
I stepped into the elevator and it jurked, heading up, and Rathos said, “I know you want to take the deal… I also know that you will.”
Galist Selphanis
1
Art and I walked into a Armory, and sat down. “What happened to Xavis?”
“It burned,” Art replied, “we’re all that’s left of the demon spawning ground.”
Vanguara X
1
“This world fell two days after you left, the first day. New York City, gate to hell, H-1, was opened by the Demon lord. Human’s did what they could, but they weren’t prepared for the horrors that came out. The city was over run in less than a week. While the supernatural comuntity tried what they could, the second gate was opened, after Atlantic was raised from the depths. The their and four gates where opened and this world fate was sealed. The demon loard made a huge tower, to make their kingdom, and opened gates to other worlds, ripping this world appart. As the armies spilled into other worlds, the resistance launched an attack on the Shaodw Tower, but failed. Now, they wait, and pary they can figure something out.”
I watched the human’s emotion’s, he was horrofied, confused, anger, all at once… human’s are complex creaturs. “What about my friends?”
“You know how died and who lived, Art had told you that.”
“Blood Claw?”
“Hell.”
“Brittany?”
I paused, should I really tell him… computing… yes, data is ment to be shared. “Brittany Smith joined the demon’s, becoming the Shadow Wrath, an demon/angel/werewolf, and lead the conquest of Asia. Responsible for the death of millions, on this world alone, and is now on over running another world.”
Brittany Smith
1
“No couldn’t have done all of that!” I cried at Rathos, who looked out over the city from the top of the Empire State building.
“Its true.”
“It can’t be.”
He spun on he, his eyes blazing, “IT IS, YOU WILL KILL BILLION’S IF YOU TAKE THE DEMON’S DEAL!”
Sahdow Wrath
1
“They’re here.” I said looked at the demon’s next to me, “Find the base, I’ll call in the army.”

[Silver Predator Wolf]

Looks good! Will the next chapter be up soon?

[Moon Hunter]

I think so, I've been in the mood to write.

[Silver Predator Wolf]

Good :closedgrin: Write more M.H! Write more! :panting:

[Moon Hunter]

Wolf War Chapter Nine ‘THE BLOOD OF OUR BROTHERS’ part one
Shadow Wrath
1
I looked over what was left of the city, this was where it all began, funny how that kinda stuff happens. I waved one of my black, clawed, hands and opened a portal, summoning the army. “I haven’t been here in ages.” A voice said behind me, Apocalypse.
I looked back at him, ruby red eyes, which also seemed to be one fire, black hair as dark as night, even his skin was a black color, burning symbols all over his body. He was waering a black leather trench coat, blacj pants, and black boots. “Its been a long time.” He said walking up to me, putting his arm around my back.
“You never called,” I replied looking back to the city, “one night of fun and then nothing.”
“You know my father… and mother for that matter.”
“True, so why are you here?”
“Looking for some fun, scouts searching for a base?”
“Yes.”
“We’ve gone through this city hundereds of times, and we’ve never found a thing.”
I looked at Apocalypse and said, “I felt something.”
“Right,” Apocalypse replied, “care to be more… specific?”
“I’m not sure.”
“Ok, well, I’m game.”
We took a step forward and a figure appeared in fron of us, I dropped to the ground bowing. “My lord,” I said looking up at Tryan-Kelton, “what bring you here?”
“Your right, something is here, find it, and kill it.” He replied looking at the city, “oh and one more thing.”
A black disk appeared in front of me, I grab it standing up. “Give that to Vanguara X, it has a complete record of our conquest’s, it’ll like to have it.”
“Yes mt lord.” I replied as the first of my sologers exited the portal.
Tryan-Kelton vaished and Apocalypse laughed, “That was amusing.”
“We have an enemy to distory.” I replied as the army started spilling to the city.
Apocalypse opened another portal and his forces started spilling out, this was going to be a sloughter.
Brittany Smith
1
The sky adarkened and Rathos stopped and looked at the city. “What’s wrong?” I asked.
“They’re coming.” Rathos replied.
“No, where here.” A male voice said from behind us.”
I jumped and spun around, coming face to to face with ruby red eyes, which also seemed to be one fire, black hair as dark as night, even his skin was a black color, burning symbols all over his body. He was waering a black leather trench coat, blacj pants, and black boots. “Why the hell are you?” I asked, stumbling back as Rathos put himself between the man and me.
The man didn’t replied, just started at me, and then begain to laugh, it sent chills up my spine. I felt a solf and clod hand on my arm and slowly turned around. I came face to face with... me, but it wasn’t me. She had jet back hair, black eyes, blackish grey skin, and a black dress on. Two black angel wing where flaping behind her and she was gazing right at me. “The Shadow Wrath.” Rathos said as she let go and I stummbled back.
Thr Shadow Wrath landed and said, “This was the last thing I expected to see, it had been so long I had forgoten this had happened.”
“What are you talking about?” I asked, “What happened to me?”
“You made a deal.” Rathos growled and looked at the young man, So, what are you here for Apocalypse and where’s daddy?”
“He’ll come if he want’s too and I’m here to kill you and everyone here.” Apocalypse replied leaning back against the wall.
“Then get it over with.” Rathos replied, “Or get the hell out of here!”
“Hay, Brit. I must say your looking good.” Apocalypse said to me, a dark smile on his face, “I’m guessing the entire group is here. Oh, it’s gona be some much fun to rip Tartis appart again... but first I’ll have some fun with you.”
“Over my dead body!” Rathos roared and charged at Apocalypse.
Apocalypse winked and Rathos burst into flames, screaming. “Hurt’s now, deosn’t it, you could have taken it before, but now your imortal and powerless. You can’t die, but you can feel pain.”
Rathos lunged at Apocalypse, who slammed his foot into his chest, causing him to topple over the edge of the building. Apocalypse walked to the edge and watched him fall, wisling as he fell. “He’s gona feel that in the orning.” He said looking at me, “now for you.”
Apocalypse advanced on me and I looked at myself, who looked away, a tear going down the side of her face, she knew what was about to happen.
Galist Selphanis
1
A loud explosion ripped through the tunnels, Art and I shot to our feet. “Damn, there here.” Art growled and took off running, shout orders as he went.
I chased after him and was grabbed by Taris. “No,” he said, “we need to get out of here.”
“I can’t leave him.”
“This world is dead, it’ll be no use, we need to leave now.”
I was about to argure with him when Taris ran arounmd the corner, stopping dead, his staff out and black blood dripping from it.
Naoy Lebel
1
I tried to move, but the stone hand pinned or crush more of my body. The blast had caused a cave in, crushing us, I pulled, but it was giving, I saw my blood leaking out and Mia’s hand twich once. We’re dead, I though as another blast ripped through the stone, causing the rest of the room to fall.
Steven Armstrong
1
Teru and I fell back, as a human/demon/freak thing swund at us. “What the hell is that thing?” Teru yelled, slamming his fist into it’s nose.
“Hell if I know.” I replied, my claws ripping into its stomic, blood spray as it roared in pain, drpping.
“That was close,” I siad looking back at Teru, who was staring at me, “What’s wrong?”
Teru fell forward, his back ripped appart, he was very dead. I roared in rage and started transforming.
Lathena
1
I crashed into the wall, I felt my bones crack on impact. I hit the ground and stood up again, my claws a nd fangs growing, they would pay for this.
Kyle Erris
1
I fell back, crashing into the entrance to the libray. I looked behind me, a drop into darkness, and looked back at the demon attack me. He charged, I kicked, and he flew over the edge, as I stood up. I smiled and turned around, a black fireball crashing and sendinging me flyig over the edge, crap.

[Silver Predator Wolf]

Let the fun...Begin.... Love the post! Keep it up! :closedgrin:

[Moon Hunter]

Wolf War Chapter Nine ‘THE BLOOD OF OUR BROTHERS’ part two
Galist Selphanis
1
I looked from one Taris to the other, “What the hell?”
The Taris next to e said, “They’re using magic, try to confuse us.”
“He’s lying to you, I’m... me.” The other Taris said walking over, his eyes locked on the other Taris.
“I’ll send you to the depths of hell, monster.” The Taris next to me said, his staff appearing.
“You first, demon.” The other Taris replied.
I wish I knew more about Taris, but I did know one thing. “Why do you hate werewolves?” I asked and they both stared at me.
“Almost got bitten by one.” One replied.
“I don’t hate werewolves, I don’t trust them.” The other replied.
I attacked the Taris that answer first, they both had told me the truth, but a long time ago Taris had told me that he didn’t trust werewolves. When the imposter hit the ground, the other Taris slammed his staff into his neck, breaking it. “We need to get out of here now.” He said and we took off.
Steven Armstrong
1
I ran down the hallway, I had to get out of here, I had to find the others, but I had to get out of here. I turned a corner and saw Taris and Gatlist running toward me. “Guys,” I yelled, “Over here.”
They saw me and started running toward me. They where about twelve feet away from me and the wall next to them exploded, the wreckage consuming them. I ran toward them and stopped dead, someone I knew very well walked through the opening. “Tryan-Kelton.” I said as he walked through the rubble.
He looked at me and smiled, it sent chills down my spine, “I was under the impression that you where a vegetable.”
“Sorry to disappoint,” I replied, my fangs and claws growing, “what the hell do you want?”
“That is the dumbest question I have ever heard.” He replied, turning to me, and for a second I thought I saw Blood Claw there.
Lathena
1
I reached the surface and ran for my life, the battle was lost and while I didn’t like running, I had no choice, they won. When I stopped and looked back, I felt bed, but we couldn’t fight this battle. I turned around again and froze, my heart stopping. Standing there, not four feet away from me, was a face I felt like I hadn’t seen in ages. “Aluna.” I whisper and she looked at me.
Aluna had violet eyes, don’t know how, white hair, and ghostly white hair. She was wearing black armor, it felt evil, and had a sword at her waist. “It’s been a long time... sister.” Aluna said drawing her sword.
Vanguara X
1
I listened to the battle, it was none of my concern, and I was simply a keeper of history. “Vanguara X,” A female voice called, “Come here.”
I surfaced, a body hit me on my way up, oh well, another one dead. I reached the top and looked at the Shadow Wrath, and she smiled. “You called and by the sounds of it slaughtered the rest of the resistance,” I said, “what do you wish to know.”
She head out a black disk, “Tryan-Kelton told me to give this to you.”
I took it and said, “A data disk,” I absorbed the information, “the results of your conquest on the other worlds... I thank you.”
“Your welcome.” She replied, and I sank to the depths, as I said, their war was none of my concern.
Shadow Wrath
1
I tuned and walked away from the pit and back into the ruins of their base, the battle was over, and the prisoners where being taken to slave camps. We left the city; I warped to the top of the Brooklyn Bridge remains, and watched with Apocalypse and Tryan-Kelton. “You gave him the disk?” Tryan-Kelton stated, knowing full well that I did.
“Yes my lord.”
He smiled and said, “Then this is going to be quite the show.”
Just as he finished his sentence the city exploded, as Vanguara X’s core went critical. The blast shot toward us and Tryan-Kelton lifted one of his hands. The blast hit what seemed like a barrier around the entire city. When the blast stopped, he lowered his hand and we stared down into a crater the size of New York City, duh, but so deep I couldn’t even see the bottom.
“What now?” I asked.
“Back to what we where doing,” Tryan-Kelton replied, “I want the two of you to work together, now go.”
The Keeper
1
They appeared, lying on the ground, in the center of the Twelve. “Have a good trip?” I asked as they stood up.
“Yeah,” Steven replied, “got a tan too.”
I laughed and the Twelve said, “This is what will come to pass if you don’t stop Tryan-Kelton. All the worlds will turn to ash and shadow.”
“What can we do?” Taris asked.
“Tryan-Kelton is a god of a long past age, he was betrayed and his powers separated, crating the demon lord we know now, but one of his powers vanished, until a few weeks ago.”
“Suhahdu.” Brittany said, she looked white... sadly I knew why.
“Correct,” The Twelve replied, “Suhahdu started killing the other demon’s and took their powers, but one of his powers was hidden, not even he knew where. The child of shadow, Silver Ocean’s child, was the last part of his power. When he took that, Tryan-Kelton was reborn, and the god of old could walk again. What he wants is simple, power. He wants to control everything and will stop at nothing to get that. Soon he will come here and try to adsorb us.”
“If he does that,” I said, “then he will not only control fate itself, but he’ll also control life and death. Tryan-Kelton will not be a god, he will be the Balance.”
“That’s great and all,” Galist said, “but what the hell can we do?”
“Tryan-Kelton has one weakness.” I replied.
“Blood Claw.” Teru said.
“Correct,” The Twelve said, “if you can find and free Blood Claw, you may be able to stop Tryan-Kelton.”
“Certainty of death. Small chance of success. What are we waiting for?” Steven said grinning.
The Twelve started to glow red said, “You must go to hell itself, find him, and free him, if you fail, we all are doomed.”
“Ok,” Teru replied, “no pressure.”
Before anyone could say anything flames shot up, consumed them, and they vanished, going straight to hell. I hear and explosion, from my chamber, and the Twelve said, “He’s here.”
“No shit.” I replied.

[Silver Predator Wolf]

VERY GOOD! Hope to see the next chapter soon! :closedgrin:

[Moon Hunter]

Dear readers:
What do you think is going to happen? Post replies, who knows, I may use part of your idea in the story.

[Silver Predator Wolf]

Hm..... I think that the 12 and the keeper will keep Tryan-Kelton busy for as long as they can while the rest are in hell looking for Blood Claw and try and free him.

[Moon Hunter]

Question:
What do you think hell looks like?

[Silver Predator Wolf]

Like in Doom 3. The image they made of hell is perfect!

[Moon Hunter]

Here's something to think about.
All heaven has to do is be a little better than hell, so what's that say?

[Silver Predator Wolf]

Not much difference between the 2 places.

[Moon Hunter]

Kinda funny.

[Silver Predator Wolf]

Ya.... Oh yes! One more idea! As they try and reach Blood Claw, they will meet Silver Ocean. Than she swings her sword that is in the whip form at them but it killed a demon that was sneaking up from behind trying to kill them. What you think?

[Moon Hunter]

I have planes for Silver Ocean, I think you'll like them, and that MAY or may not be part of it.:howl:

[Silver Predator Wolf]

Nice! Hope to see them soon!^_^

[Moon Hunter]

Wolf War Chapter Ten ‘HELL’S FURY’ part one
Brittany Smith
1
I opened my eyes, shit it was hot! I stood up and looked around. “Well, there’s something you don’t see everyday.” I muttered looking over the ruined landscape.
It was as hot as... hell, lava was flowing in rivers across a burnt landscape, the sky itself seemed to be on fire, and there was no life in view. The heat was burning my throat with every breath and stinging my eyes, but in the distance I could see a city... of sourts.
“Great, I’m stuck here with you.” Mia said walking uo next to me.
I growled at her and then stopped, “What?”
“Look around, no one else is here, we got seperated somehow.” She replied.
“Shit.” I said looked around.
“That is an understament.” She replied starting off toward the city.
Steven Armstrong
1
I looked around, this couldn’t be right, I was in the middle of a city, full of people. I walked along the streets everything was normal, nothing out of place, nothing wrong. “Weaird,” I muttered and walked down into the subway, “Eather I missed my stop or hell’s a lot cooler than I thought.”
I walked to the subway and stood with the crowd, looking for any sign of anyone else or Blood Claw, nothing. The train pulled up and I got on. The doors closed and the train lurched to a start. I looked at the people around me and smiled, “Maybe hell any so bad.”
The train sped down the tracks and the lights flickered and then whent out. Red light turned on and I nearly shit myself. Everyone on the train had turned into zombies... and they where looking at me. “I was wrong, Hell is bad, hell is bad!” I said ducking under an attcking zombie.
Lathena
1
I looked around, Galist and Taris where standing next to me, and we where in the middle of a desert. “This can’t be.” Galsit muttered.
“What is it?” Taris asked.
“Xavis... my home.”
“Oh,” I replied, “isn’t that a good thing?” I asked.
“Galsit just found out that his home is a level of hell.” Taris said to me.
“Oh... that’s bad.”
“That’s putting it lightly.”
Naoy Lebel
1
Teru and I where standing in what I could only call the heat wave of a nuke, the wind was howling, the buildings blown out, flames leaping up from… everything, and the heat was burning my... eveything. “Look’s like we found the right place.” Teru said looking over the landscape.
“All right, just one thing,” I said looking at him, “why the hell is hell New York city? I mean we’re not that mean... are we?”
Kyle Erris
1
I stood in a white hallway, there where doors going down both side as far as I could see, and I was alone. I turned to my right and opened the door, flames shot out at me, along with what looked like a walking corpse. I slammed the door shut and put my back to it. “Well, thhis isn’t going to be fun.” I muttered looking down both side of the hallway.
Tryan-Kelton
1
The doors flew off the hinges and I walked into the Keepers chamber, Vola-nea was next to me, and Art and Rathos where behind us. I looked around at the billon’s of candels that where floating around, the life force. “You are not alond to be here, demon.” A familer voice said from ahead of me.
I looked at The Keeper and smiled, “It has been far too long, old one, tell me, how have you been?”
“I was doing great untill you showed up.”
“We both knew this was coming, old one.”
“What do you want?”
“We both know what I want.”
Silver Ocean
1
I opened my eyes, they had vanished, but where. I closed my eyes again and started searching other planes. After a few moments my eyes opened again and I laughted, “They’ll need help to find him.”
I stood up and waved my hand, a gateway of fire appearing, “I’ll be their guide.”

[Moon Hunter]

What's your favorit hell and any ideas for a hell?

[Silver Predator Wolf]

Pain and suffering. Everthing that makes up hell. Your worst nightmare and demons coming from any place. Even after you kill them, they will still come after you.

[Moon Hunter]

I loved creating Steven Armstrong hell, kinda modled it after the Matrix city.

[Silver Predator Wolf]

Anything goes for me. As long as it is hell. ^_^

[Indiana_Jones]

The story justs keep on getting better.

[Silver Predator Wolf]

Just hope it does not end too soon. Or any time soon....

[Moon Hunter]

I don't plan on ending it anytime soon.

[Silver Predator Wolf]

Good! ^_^

[Moon Hunter]

To be honest I don't know when it's gona end.

[Silver Predator Wolf]

Even Better! ^_^ CSROFLMAO!!!

[Moon Hunter]

CSROFLMAO!!!

What does that mean?

[Silver Predator Wolf]

It means. CSROFLMAO - Can't stop rolling on floor laughing my ass off.

[Moon Hunter]

I see

[Moon Hunter]

Wolf War Chapter Ten ‘HELL’S FURY’ part two
Steven Armstrong
1
My claws grew as another zombie lunged at me. I ducked out of the way and the zombie hit the window, shattering it. I slammed my claws into the ceiling and swung up, just out of the zombies reach. I ripped a hole in the roof and crawled out, barely avoiding the zombie below. I lay down on top of the train and muttered, “Well, this could be better.”
The train shot out into a huger cavern and started picking up speed. I sat up and looked around, lava far below gave enough light for me to see. The tracks started winding around stone pillars and I could see where they promptly ended, leaving a... who knows how far of a drop to the bottom. I got up and ran to the back of the train, the train speeding up. I reached the back just as the front reached the end of the tracks. I turned around and said, “Well, I’ve had a good run.”
The train went over the edge and I flew over with it. I saw a rectangle hole open up and a guy standing there, Kyle. He saw me and jumped out of the way, just as I flew through the opening, crashing into the far wall. He slammed the door and I fell to the ground. He walked over to me and looked down, “You ok?”
“Yeah, only thing that’s hurt is my pride... and body.”
Galist Selphanis
1
My home was one of their hells? How could this be? I started walking and the ground stared to shake, that wasn’t normal. A few moments later something huge shout of the ground, a little ways away... “That’s not from my world.” I said looking at the giant worm.
“Well, that’s good, but think it’s coming this way?” Lathen asked.
“No,” Taris replied, “It’s moving away.”
We started walking; something in the distance caught my eye. “Lathena, can you see that?” I asked pointing.
Her eyes narrowed and she nodded, “Looks like a tower, must be huge if we can see it from here.”
2
“Ok,” Lathena said looking up, “Huge was an underestimate.”
I nodded; the tower seemed to reach for the heavens itself. It was the same color as the desert, maybe a little darker, and seemed to go on forever. We where standing at the entrance, a doorway that stood four stories tall and twenty feet wide, at least. “We should go in,” Taris said walking forward, “by the looks of it we’re heading for the top.”
We walked into the main chamber, there was a ramp going up the side, but what caught my eye was the statue in the center. “It’s Blood Claw,” Lathena said looking at the man in armor, but what surprised me was the fact that half the statue was a demon and the other was angel.
“This is interesting,” Taris said looking at the writing on the walls.
“What’s interesting?” I asked looking around, the entire inside had been written on, a language I don’t know.
Lathena walked over to the statue and walked around it as Taris began to read. “It’s Blood Claw’s story, all of it, from everything before him to now, everything that has to do with what’s going on.”
“Start reading.” Lathen said walking over to us.
“Tryan-Kelton was the first, he was the first thing ever made by the creator, but there was a problem. The creator gave him free will and made him just as strong as the creator. Tryan-Kelton felt this weakness and attacked the creator, but was sent, no, hell was created for Tryan-Kelton and he was sealed away in it. Time passed by and the worlds where created, earth, Xavis, and many others. Tryan-Kelton escaped, creating the ‘army of shadow’ from his prison and the ‘army of light was created’ to send him back to hell. The war nearly destroyed everything, but Tryan-Kelton was stopped and captured. The leader of the ‘army of light’ took all of Tryan-Kelton’s powers and put them into low level demon’s, creating the demon lords, who he had made allies of during the war, it’s doesn’t say how. Anyway, time passed and the warriors of shadow and the guardians of light continued fighting. For ages their war tore apart the world and, that’s how it was for eons. Then Blood Claw cam into play, he was a soldier of light, in mid-evil times, a werewolf who fought for the gods of good, truth, and light. His last mission was to kill another soldier, this one of darkness, and then he would be free to live the rest of his life any way he wanted. He found the soldier of darkness and their battle lasted for days. In his enemy’s final moment, he cast a curse on Blood Claw, binding his to this world and to his age. He could never die, but in return for this gift was the curse. Blood Claw was fused with the sprit of a demon, the second he killed the soldier, for all time. The curse turned him into the very thing he had tried to destroy and became a target himself. Now it speaks of Vola, Tryan-Kelton’s... wife. She spent ages looking for a peace of Tryan-Kelton and found it in Blood Claw. They spent years destroying, Blood Claw was consumed by shadow and Suhahdu was born, but Blood Claw returned to the light. For ages Angels have been sent after him, but he continued to destroy the darkness, and killed anyone who got in his way, good or evil. Now he is a target of both sides, good and evil, but both fear him. As he ages, his power grows, along with the demons, and has become a threat to both sides... we know the rest of the story.”
Taris stepped away from the wall, we had been walking up as Taris read, and now we where near the top. We walked to the top and looked around, it was a garden, full of life and a single fountain in the center. “I don’t get it, how is this a hell?” Lathena said looking around.
“Maybe,” Taris said looking out over the desert, “no one has ever reached this place, you saw those worms.”
Naoy Lebel
1
We reached Time Square and looked around, the place was wreaked and there wasn’t a single sign of life. I scanned the area, nothing. “Something’s off,” Teru said, his claws and fangs growing, “I can feel it.”
“I could have told you that,” I replied, “but then again, this is hell.”
Teru was about the reply when a growl came from our right. We both turned and I nearly crapped myself. A huge demonic dog walked into the light, with about twenty of its buddies. The hellhound looked like a huge wolf, black wild fur, glowing fiery red eyes, and really pissed. “That’s not good,” I said taking a step back and hearing a growl behind us, “and that’s even worse.”
Brittany Smith
1
Mia and I reached the edge of the city, it was New York, and it looked like shit. There was a roar in the distance, a roar I knew. “Teru,” I said with a smiled, “we found them.”
“And trouble.” Mia replied, she had semi transformed.
I looked around and sword, hell hounds.
The Keeper
1
“So tell me,” Tryan-Kelton said, “where are your saviors?”
“Out to lunch.” I replied.
Tryan-Kelton laughed and said, ‘I always liked your personality, brother.”
“Don’t call me that,” I replied, “I am not your brother.”
“Yes you are,” Tryan-Kelton replied motioning to Rathos and Art, “we where both created by the same thing, so we are brothers.”
“That means nothing, I replied, “let’s get this over with, I’ve got a world to run.”
“No for much longer.” Tryan-Kelton replied and nodded, both Art and Rathos shot toward me.
Rathos shifted into his demon form and Art vanished from sight. Rathos came at me head on and I swatted him away like a fly, he was no match for me, Tryan-Kelton knew this, he just wanted to see how strong I was. I sword shot through the center of my chest and I looked down at it, bad move. I grabbed the blade and pulled Art right through me, throwing him at Tryan-Kelton. Tryan-Kelton lifted one of his hands and Art stopped in mid air. He snarled and Art chased into a wall, landing next to Rathos. “You two have out lived your usefulness.” Tryan-Kelton said and the two of the burst into flames, either he killed them or sent them to hell.
“Now,” he said stepping forward, “let’s see what you can do.”
Silver Ocean
1
I walked down the white halls, I knew they where close. I turned a corner and Steven jumped back, cutting off a scream. ‘What the hell do you want?” he yelled, as the other man stared at me in confusion.
“I’m here to help you.”
“I’ll kill you,” Steven stopped and stared at me, “Wait... what?”
“I’m here to help you find and free Blood Claw, Tryan-Kelton will pay for what he did to me.”

[Moon Hunter]

Uh... thanks.

[Moon Hunter]

Your welcome... I'm glad I could help you.

[Silver Predator Wolf]

Very well done M.H! Hope to see the rest of the chapters up soon!^_^

[Silver Predator Wolf]

What the hell man........ what are you talking about now? It makes no sense. You came out of no where and post here tell us this.

[Moon Hunter]

Oh DEAR LORD, YOU DON'T POST THAT SHIT HERE! :angry: I get one more post like that, one more private message like that, I'm puting several people up for a ban! WOLF WAR IS NOT A FOURM FO TALKING ABOUT THAT KINDA SHIT, SO DON'T POST THAT SHIT HERE!

[Moon Hunter]

Wolf War Chapter Ten ‘HELL’S FURY’ part three
Taris K. Straywood
1
“I don’t think this is a hell.” I said looking at Galsit, “This may be your world.”
“Then why are we here?” Galist replied.
“Maybe we’re hear to learn something... or this is a hell made to look like your world.” I don’t know,” I replied and looked over at Lathena, “you ok?”
“Yeah, Blood Claw’s not here, so how do we get out of here?” She replied looking at me.
“Good point.” Galist replied.
Silver Ocean
1
Steven and Kyle where fallowing me, I guess they thought I knew my way around this place, I didn’t. While I had a good guess where they where holding Blood Claw, we had to get the rest of the group before we could go after him, we would need everyone for that. “So,” Kyle said, breaking the silence, “Where you from?”
“Hell?” I replied, glancing back at him.
“Um... ok.” He replied and I looked back ahead, this wasn’t going to be easy.
2
I stopped next to a door and looked at it, they might be in here. I opened the door and saw Galsit, Taris, and Lathena, good I could tell where they where. “What the hell are you doing here?” Lathena snarled at me.
“Helping you, the hells can only be opened from the outside, so are you coming or would you like to wait?
Terusugu
1
I hit the ground and flipped the hellhound over me, its jaw snapping shut an inch or two away from my face. I rolled out of the way of another hound my claws raking its side as I went. I shot to my feet as Naoy slammed his knife into one of the hound’s eyes. The hell hound howled in pain and stumbled back, as another leaped at Naoy. He dropped and the hellhound crashed into a ruined car.
Something crashed into my back and I hit the ground, hard. I turned over and a hellhound stepped onto my chest. This was it, this was how I was going to die, dang, and I wanted to go in my sleep.
The hell hounds head shot down, to rip out my throat, and I something move in the corner of my eye. The next thing I knew a pure white werewolf was standing over me, Brittany.
Mia Tobira
1
Brittany crashed into the werewolf and stood over Teru. AS I jumped over the car I saw Teru blush a little and look away from Brittany’s... never mind. He scrambled out from under her as I landed on the ground near them. I was in was in my full cat form, I was as big as a panther, but had cream-colored fur and purple spots. I roared at one of the hellhounds as Brittany lunged at another, he muzzle ripping into its side.
The hellhound lunged at me and I sank my claws into its face, ripping out a chunk of flesh. Black, oil like, blood squirted out of the wound. The hellhound lunged at me again, but this time I ducked under its attack and sank my teeth into his stomach.
Silver Ocean
1
It took us another twenty minutes to find the next door. I opened it and saw hellhound running away in fear. A bloody Naoy, Teru, Mia, and Brittany stood there, looking at me. “You coming?” I asked and walked out of sight, let the rest of their little group get them.
2
We all stood in the hallway, everyone was looking at me. “Yes, I’m here to help you, why, I’m pissed at Tryan-Kelton, best way to get back at him, find and free Blood Claw, how am I able to find you, this is hell, I’m a demon, any other questions?” I growled.
“Yeah,” Lathena replied, “how can we trust you?”
“I know the fact I’m a demon doesn’t help,” I replied, “but we’re all in this together. If Tryan-Kelton wins this war it’s all over... for everyone and everything. I know we have our differences, but I’m on your side, and I know that Tryan-Kelton needs to be stopped-” I stopped, that couldn’t be right, “Well Ill be damned... er.”
I crossed the hall and pulled the door open, flames shot out, consuming me, but Art and Rathos crashed to the ground behind me. “Fancy meeting you here,” I said as they stood up, looking from me to the group, everyone’s weapons going up, “let me guess, ‘you’ve out lived your usefulness’, am I right?”
“You could say that,” Art replied, his eyes locked with Galist’s glare, “the demon will pay for what he’s done.”
“I’m glade you see it that way,” I replied, “but you don’t stand a chance against him, not alone.”
“Are you suggesting what I think you are?” Rathos asked, his eyes on Brittany.
“An alliance,” I replied, “you can all go back to fighting your little wars after Tryan-Kelton is dead.”
Everyone lowered their weapons and looked at me, nodding one by one. “Good,” replied, “Now, Art, Galsit, Brittany, Rathos, shake hands and no stabbing each other in the back.”
Art and Galist approached each other and gripped each others hand, apparently thing to break the others hand. Rathos nodded to Brittany, their agreement could be a silent one, no mind games, nothing, Rathos would play fair.
3
I stopped in from if ‘the’ door, the prison that held Blood Claw... or at least I hoped. I had to be right, because all of use where going in, meaning if I was wrong, no one could get out. Only and angel could entire and exit a demon’s prison freely, a demon had to fight his way in or out. I grabbed the door and looked back at the group and said, “if I’m right, this isn’t gona be good.”
“IF?!” Steven shouted as I pulled open the door.
What happened next can only be described as a black hole. We where ripped from where we stood and cast into the darkness, the black abyss, I only hoped that Blood Claw’s prison was in here... or I had just doomed us all.
The Keeper
1
Tryan-Kelton crashed into the wall and I lowered my hand, no even he was strong enough to do battle with me... so why was he here? “I see you powers have grown,” Tryan-Kelton said floating away from the wall, unscratched, “this seems to be a repeat of our last battle.”
“Seems,” I replied as he landed on the ground and walked toward me, “this is exactly what happened last time.”
“Well,” He replied, “not exactly.”
Tryan-Kelton turned away from me and looked at my chamber. He lifted his hands and closed his eyes, “Time for you to see my true power.”
I looked to the candles and knew what he was about to do. His eyes shot open and million of the candles went out. I looked into the darkness he created and focused, the candles relighting, but draining me of my powers. I looked back to Tryan-Kelton, he was laughing and walking toward me, “I wasn’t strong enough to do that last time, let us see how many times you can return life to them, brother.”
The candles went out again, more this time, and I rekindled them, stumbling away from Tryan-Kelton. He put them out again, and I spent more of my power, the light coming back. He kicked my side and I crashed to the ground. I looked up at him and he smirked down at me. You dare attack life itself,” I growled, “for that crime the only punishment is death.”
He stepped on my chest, slamming to the ground, “You don’t get it, it’s over, brother, I won.”
He roared with laughter and I aw the candles start to go out.
A few moments later my chamber was completely back, no light from anywhere and I felt his hand on my neck. “Good-bye, brother.” Tryan-Kelton growled and his eyes glowed a dark red.

[anarchy]

Moon Hunter your words speak to me like the wolf's crying howl after its mother has let it into the world we now know of. You are my Idol My hero thank you.

Why *does* your mother even allow you to breathe?


i praise you on your holy words that have touched the blackest depths of my soul.

Please.....just die.....


OMG leave let Moon Hunter speak and show us the ways of the wolf. I must learn, Eat & breath the wolf.

Haha, Moon hunter became a messiah, a champion of ideals for those poor, poor souls.

[Moon Hunter]

Come to me my childern...... sorry I really coudn't resist.

I do have one question thought, what are you people comeing to me to learn about the ways of the wolf?

[The wild one]

Come to me my childern...... sorry I really coudn't resist.

I do have one question thought, what are you people comeing to me to learn about the ways of the wolf?

no need to worry about that now, Wan banned them, deleted their account that they shared on, and wiped their foul trace off the threads of this forum. God bless us on this night.

now,have a good day when you come back and please continue with the story in the peace you deserve.

[Moon Hunter]

no need to worry about that now, Wan banned them, deleted their account that they shared on, and wiped their foul trace off the threads of this forum. God bless us on this night.

now,have a good day when you come back and please continue with the story in the peace you deserve.

Thank you, I'm glad to hear that and I will continue the story, I'm trying to get a chapter up eveyday.

[Silver Predator Wolf]

Good chapter! Hope to see another one up soon!^_^ Btw.... should we spare this person too?

[Moon Hunter]

As long as he dosn't start Spamming on this threat, if anyone does, there dead

[Were Dono]

>_> *ish still alive and reading the story*
Good to see it's going well.
This is still one of the few things I look forward to seeing on this forum.

[Moon Hunter]

Thank you Were Dono, you have bo idea how much that means to me.

[Moon Hunter]

Wolf War Chapter Ten ‘HELL’S FURY’ part four
Rathos Vitman
1
I felt my feet make contact with the ground, but I still couldn’t see a dang thing. “Everyone all right?” I heard Silver Ocean ask, “Anyone hurt?”
“What do you mean by if I’m right?” Steven asked, he sounded close.
“Does it matter?” I replied.
“Go to hell.”
“Been there, done that.” I replied with a sneer.
“Stop it you two,” Silver Ocean replied, “We have a job to do, now start walking.”
I rolled my eyes and started walking, hoping that everyone else was going the same way too.
2
“I think I can see some light.” I said looking at what appeared to be a gray area.
“I see it too,” Taris replied, “but I can’t make out what it is?”
“The exit,” Silver Ocean replied, “into the hell.”
“I wouldn’t call that an exit.” Steven replied and I couldn’t but smile.
After a few more minutes of walking I could start making out the shapes of my fellow companions, we all walked the right way.
I looked back ahead of me, the light was too bright to see past, but we where heading the right direction.
Art
1
“What the hell?” I asked as we walked through the light.
We had just walked out of a tunnel into... suburbia. There where two rows of white, cookie cutter, houses going down both side of the street. I looked at Silver Ocean, she looked extremely confused. “I think,” Steven said, “we made a wrong turn.”
“”No,” Silver Ocean replied, “we’re in the right place... but it looks...”
“Wrong,” Rathos said finishing here sentence, “you think?”
“If this is hell,” Teru said watching a little girl skip along the sidewalk, “it must be for the Brady Bunch.”
“Let’s just get moving.” Galist said and started walking down the street.
Silver Ocean
1
The was no way Blood Claw would be here, this wasn’t a hell… at least not the one I remember. “What do you think,” Lathena asked me, walking up next to me, “kinda weird huh?”
“Yeah,” I replied, “You could say that.”
We walked in science for a second before I asked, “Why are you trusting me so readily?”
“We want to do the same thing,” Lathena replied, “but for different reason’s.”
We came to an intersection and looked around. “This place is a maze, we’ll never find Blood Claw at this rate.” Teru said watching a group of butterflies fly by, “That is so wrong.”
“They’re butterflies.” Brittany replied.
“In hell!”
“Ok... good point.”
“If you two are done,” Art growled, “can we go find him now?”
“Don’t talk to them like that.” Galist growled and Art drew his sword.
I was about to say something when storm clouds started to roll in and suddenly the streets where empty. I felt something and turned around, and driving toward us was none other than Blood Claw.
Blood Claw
1
I stopped my car and looked at the group of people standing in the middle of the street, what where they doing. I started at them as one by one they stared back at me, I could swear that I recognized them, but I just couldn’t place it. I turned off my engine and got out of the car, it was kinda funny, I couldn’t remember a lot of things, and my past for example, but that didn’t matter.
Brittany Smith
1
Blood Claw got out of the car... he looked human and normal. He was dressed in a suit, his hair combed neatly, his face looked... confused, like he didn’t know us. “Blood Claw,” Steven said walking toward his, “it’s great to see you buddy.”
“I know you?”
Steven stopped in mid step and slowly said, “Yeah, for a couple years.”
“Really?”
“Yeah!”
“No, I don’t think so, I’d remember an arm like that.”
Steven shoulders slumped and he looked back to us, “I got nothing here, this the right guy?”
“It’s him,” Silver Ocean said walking up to Blood Claw, who promptly started retreating away from her, “but his memory is being affected by something.”
“Get the hell away from me!” Blood Claw shouted and turned to run, crashing right into Rathos, in a semi demon form.
“I get his hell now,” Rathos said as Blood Claw stumbled back and crashed into Art, we all started forming a circle around him, “to live with no memory of who or what you are.”
“How’s that a hell?” Steven asked, as Blood Claw’s eyes darted to him.
“The person will feel lost forever,” Blood Claw looked at Mia, “not knowing where they came from or what made them who they are.”
“That doesn’t seem like a hell.” Taris replied.
“It is,” Glaist said his gaze fixed on Blood Claw, “it’s knowing that you have forgotten who you where, what you where, who you loved, who your family was, it’s hell just not knowing.”
Blood Claw looked at each of us, I saw something flash in his eyes, who he was, like he understood what we where saying. “What do you want?” he asked, looking at Silver Ocean, who was standing right next to him.
“To get you out of here,” She replied and lifted her hands, reaching for Blood Claws head, “to free you from this hell.”
“What are you doing?” Lathena asked, her claws growing a little.
“To get out of a hell like this,” She replied touching the sides of his head, “the only way to get him out is to trade places, a soul for a soul.”
There was a flash of white light, from the sky, and lighting crashed down on where Blood Claw and Silver Ocean stood. All of us where thrown back, crashing to the ground a little ways away. I looked back and saw a black shape lifting from Silver Ocean’s body; it looked like a demon... the demon inside of Silver Ocean. She looked at us and I saw a smile on here face and she said, “Get him for me, this is how I repay me debt, this is how I pay from my sins, this is my choice and I will pay the price.”
The back shape shot upward and there was a blast that knocked me down, I blacked out.

[Silver Predator Wolf]

Very Well Done! I Love It! Keep Up The Good Work! Hope to see the next chapter up soon!^_^

[Moon Hunter]

Wolf War Chapter Eleven ‘THE PATH WE ALL MUST WALK’ part one
Lathena
1
I opened my eyes and sat up. “That hurt.” I muttered looking around, the area was ripped apart, like the center of a nuke it’s shock and heat wave.
The entire place seem frozen as well, the flames went moving, the houses where in mid air, and even chunks of the earth where frozen in time. “You all right,” A familiar voice asked me and my heart stopped.
I slowly looked toward where Blood Claw and Silver Ocean had stood. Blood Claw was standing in the center of the blast, his shirt gone, pants on, and his white angel wings fully extended. But I only glanced at that, because Silver Ocean was standing over me, her hand out to help me up, but the eyes and voice where different. “Is that you?” I asked taking her hand, could it really be him?
“In the flesh,” She replied and then smiled a little, “Well, sorta.”
I shoot forward, pulling her into a tight huge and kiss her on the lips. “Whoa,” Steven said from nearby, “I miss something?”
We broke our kiss and I said, “This is the real Silver Ocean, the man I married.”
Steven’s eye browns went up and Silver Ocean said, “Yeah, female body, I know, demon’s fault, which reminds me” She turned to Blood Claw, “how the hell was the demon removed from my body?”
Blood Claw looked up at Silver Ocean, his eyes white, and said, “The demon traded places with me, there where two souls in that body, she gave herself giving you back control, Silver.”
“Huh,” Siler Ocean looked back down at me, “that works for me.”
We kissed again and Steven said, “Please get a room you two, that looks really weird.”
Blood Claw
1
I stretched and looked around and the group walked over to me, it was good to see them again. I saw Rathos help Brittany up from a ruined house and Art and Galist laugh, hug, freeze, and back away from each other, I couldn’t help but smile. The side of light and dark stand united, and know I was back. “I hate to say this,” I said looking over the group, “but we have a job to do, it’s time to go back to Earth.
I closed my eyes and focused, let’s see if my aim was still good.
2
I opened my eyes, New York, New York, Time Square. I looked around, we all did, and saw what Tryan-Kelton had done, it was too late. People where just laying on the ground, dead, all of them. The group started checking bodies, but I knew, no wounds, and it happened all at once, millions dead. I closed my eyes and searched, the blood in my veins going cold. “It’s worse than I feared,” I said and they looked at me, “he’s gotten The Keeper, the twelve are next, we must hurry.”
Tryan-Kelton
1
I walked into the chamber that held the Twelve and smiled. “How’ve you been?” I asked, they remain silent, “We both know what going to happen here, so let us take a little first, I like to get to know the creatures I kill.”
The Twelve said nothing and I smiled, they where nearly completely black. I walked to the nearest one and touched it, absorbing it’s power, it felt good. I walked to each of them and absorbed them one by one. When I was done I walked back out into the main chamber and looked at Vola-nea, “It is done.”
“Good, we have much to still do,” she said as I stopped next to her, “the gates must be opened.”
I smiled and looked over her shoulder to the main doors into the room, “Enter, my love.”
Vola-nea spun around as a sword plunged into her chest. He head fell back onto my shoulder, here eyes locking with mine, and I said, “You thought that you where my queen?”
I roared with laughter and looked back up at Aluna, Lathena’s sister. Vloa-Nea looked at her, as the sword drained her power and put it into Aluna. “Kinda funny, isn’t it,” I said as small flames started bursting all over her skin, “you where the demon that made it possible for them to stop me the first time, but I knew you’d be helpful in the future.” I lowered my head to her ear, “I’ve been planning this for ages my dear.”
Aluna pulled the sword out, her eyes black, and Vola-nea burst into flames, screaming. I laughed and said, “Don’t worry, the child of shadow grows in her womb, I will rule this world, my dear. Dead. Demon.”
Vola-nea turned to ashes and I looked up at Aluna, “We have much work to do, my love.”
I lit all the candles and smiled looking at Aluna, “It’s no fun to conquer a dead world.”

[DarkWolf22]

wow i just read chapter 11 and it is really cool i cant wait to read the others!

[Moon Hunter]

Thanks

[Silver Predator Wolf]

OMG! I never expected her to be Apocalypse's mother! GOOD JOB M.H! Hope to see the next chapter up soon!^_^

[wolf vampire]

Your the best writer ever

[neoritter]

good story, writing skills need to be worked on though.

[SilverBack Novelist]

Well, it's been a while since I last read this. I had to start from a previously read post. I see it's coming along nicely. I'll read up to 11 when I get the chance. Good work. Dialogue seems forced sometimes. Trying to make things less constructive and more casual in speech patterns can sometimes seem sloppy. The intent is clear. You're getting better as you progress through the story.

[Moon Hunter]

Wolf War Chapter Eleven ‘THE PATH WE ALL MUST WALK’ part two
Blood Claw
1
I was standing on my apartment balcony when everything just... restarted. Everyone was alive... even time seemed to rewind and everything was back to normal. I looked at alive New York... this was unexpected, but I understood why it happened. Tryan-Kelton would want to capture this world, he wanted a fight. I would never understand Tryan-Kelton, but I that wasn’t the point.
I walked back into the room, everyone had gone to sleep a few hours ago, they needed sleep, I didn’t. I stretched out my wings, it felt good to be back... Silver Ocean had made the ultimate sacrifice... I wouldn’t let her be forgotten.
I looked toward the rooms and closed my eyes, they where alive and Silver was really screwed up. That demon had done so much damage... I don’t even think I could reverse the damage. I wished that this had never happened, they deserved better than this... but they where here and this was happening.
“I can guess your next move, Tryan-Kelton, you’ll open the gates,” I muttered and looked back at the setting sun, “and doom this world and all the others.”
Brittany Smith
1
I opened my eyes and sighed, I was still tired. I looked around and heard a knock at my door. “Come in,” I said and Galist walked in, “Galist? What are you doing here?”
“I was wondering if we could talk,” Galist said leaning against the wall, “I can’t seem to sleep.”
“Have a seat,” I replied sitting up and propping up a pillow for him.”
He sat down next to me and leaned back, staring at the ceiling, looking like he was a thousand miles away. I waited for him to talk, he came here and he’d talk when he was ready. “I was just think about everything that’s going on,” Galist said looking over at me, “I mean, can you believe everything that’s happened?”
“Honestly,” I replied, “I have too, even if I don’t want too.”
He nodded and smiled warmly, I felt something that I hadn’t felt in a long time... I wanted him to kiss me. I had fought by this man’s side of a month, and I loved him, but I’ll never forget my love. “I’m glad you’re here.” I said and Galist smiled and leaned in a little.
We stopped a few inches from each other, stared at each other, and then kissed. We kissed for what seemed like and eternity and then we broke the kiss, pulling back from each other. We smiled at each other and then we both realized what had just happened. He scrambled off the bed, blushing, and said, “I’m... uh... I don’t know what just happened, I don’t know what came over me.”
“It’s ok,” I replied, blushing a little, “you kissed me and I kissed you.”
“Um... maybe I should go,” He said walking to the door, “I’m sorry, I’ll see you later.”
He walked out, closing the door, quietly, and then stopped. “You can come back in,” I said and he opened the door again, “there is room for two... just keep your pants on.”
Galist laughed and walked back in, closing the door behind him.
Taris K. Straywood
1
I had been mediating for an hour, I could feel that something was off, the world felt different. I could feel the darkness growing and the light was dyeing... Tryan-Kelton’s power must have increased ten fold. I was about to stop meditating when I felt something... different.
I focused and saw a figure standing in a landscape of fire and shadow. “Vola-nea?” I said staring at the twisted human form of the demon lord.
She looked at me, her face burnt, puss and blood dripping from the wound, flames slowing burning her body, and two chains of fire held her in place. I saw images of Tryan-Kelton, just bits and pieces of his plan. I saw four great gates... one of fire, one of earth, one of wind, and one of water. After a second I saw a fifth gate, but I couldn’t see any details. The vision stopped and I walked up to Vola-nea, I knew what I had to do. I touched her forehead and she turned into flame, shooting down my arm and into me.
I opened my eyes and heard Vola-nea said, in my head, “I can help you, just make sure I get a body, mortal.”
Steven Armstrong
1
I walked into the kitchen and glanced over at Blood Claw, he was staring out the window. He glanced over at me, flashed a grin, and looked back out side. I opened the refrigerator and pulled out a beer, took off the cap, and took a swig... the beer tasted so good.
I walked up to Blood Claw and stood next to him. “So,” I said, “how you doing?”
“Good,” He replied, “I’ve haven’t felt this good in thousands of years.”
“That’s good... so what’s next?”
“The war.”
“The war?”
“Tryan-Kelton is going to launch his attack on this world, but first he has to open a few gates.”
“And what’s on the other side of these gates?”
“I don’t know,” Blood Claw replied looking over at me, “I don’t know what they hold or where they are... they where long before my time.”
“Huh,” I replied and he looked back out over the city, “any idea who might know where they are?”
“Tryan-Kelton.”
“How about someone who would tell us without trying to kill us.”
“No.”
“Perfect.” I replied and finished the beer, this was going to be interesting.
Terusugu
1
I sat in the shower, the water had gone cold hours ago, but I didn’t care. It felt like the entire world was against us... but we had made some headway, we got Blood Claw back. I cracked my neck and laughed to myself, I was caught up in the middle of a war. I wasn’t a soldier, I wasn’t a killer, and I wasn’t supposed to be doing... this. “I shouldn’t be doing this.” I muttered, maybe I should go.
I turned off the water and got out of the shower. I grabbed a towel and dried myself off, thinking about everything that had happened. I pulled on my pants and walked into my room and turned on the radio, blaring rock music. I laid down on my bed and closed my eyes, this wasn’t my life.
Naoy Lebel
1
I opened another two beers and dropped the caps on the floor. I sat back down at the table and looked at Mia, handing her on of the beers. “So,” I said as she took a swig, “what do you think?”
“We’re screwed.” She replied and started at the beer in her hand.
“Oh,” I replied, “so we’re in agreement.”
Mia laughed and said, “So, it was me and you... in that place.”
“Yeah,” I replied, “funny... right?”
“I think it was kinda sweat.” She replied looking at me.
I laughed, nervously, and said, “Well, I know what I see in you, but what do you see in me?”
Lathena
1
I put down my cell, still no reply from my sister. This wasn’t like her; she always called me back with in six hours. I walked to my window and looked out at the city and put my cell in my pocket. I had put on my normal clothing, full length body amour, black leather trench coat with a fold down collar, and black shoes.
Blood Claw had somehow gotten his hands on my weapons, two katanas, two gauntlets, and two huge handguns. I put on my weapons on and walked into the living room, Blood Claw was standing on the balcony and Steven was sleeping on the couch, beer bottles on the table.
I walked to the balcony and stood next to Blood Claw, who looked over and smiled at me. I smiled back at him and asked, “How’ve you been?”
“Good,” Blood Claw replied with a smile, “except for the whole hell part.”
I gave a little laugh and said, “It’s been too long.”
“Yeah, I know, sorry.”
Kyle Erris
1
I opened my eyes as rock music blared in the room next to me. I stat up with a scowl on my face, I needed sleep. I got out of bed, got dressed, and grabbed my gun. I put it in the but of my pants and left my room. I knocked on Teru’s door and shouted, “Teru, turn that shit off!”
I waited for a few minutes, nothing, and I busted the door open. The room was empty, Teru was gone, and I turned off the music. “Well,” I growled, “that’s just great.”

[Silver Predator Wolf]

This Is Good! Keep Up The Good Work M.h!^_^

[Moon Hunter]

They tried to break me, ,but I'm still here, and so is my story.

[Silver Predator Wolf]

Hope to see the next chapter up soon! Welcome back M.H!^_^

[Indiana_Jones]

Shit always happens in this world, your good to be back, Moon Hunter.

[Moon Hunter]

Thanks's, I'm working on the next chapter, it should be up soon.

[Moon Hunter]

Sprry I haven't been able to get on, the whole collage thing is getting in the way, I'll post as soon as I can.

[Silver Predator Wolf]

No hurry. Take your time. Post when you feel that it is ready. ^_^

[WLewy]

I'm sure that when the time comes you will...

[Moon Hunter]

Now that this is where it should be again, i will finnish my story, thank's Leo, the site is BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Leo]

It's has been a long time, isnt? ^^

[Moon Hunter]

It's has been a long time, isnt? ^^

Well this is quite the honnor, a post from Leo.

Hell yeah, I've tried posting on other sites, but it just hasn't stuck, i just like this one the best. I'm glade to see it back, it's made my week. :)

[Moon Hunter]

Wolf War Chapter Eleven ‘THE PATH WE ALL MUST WALK’ part three
Rathos Vitman
1
I walked into the living room and saw Blood Claw on the balcony. I walked up next to him.
“It’s been a while.” Blood Claw said, glancing at me.
“Yeah,” I replied, “what’s next?”
Blood Claw looked back out at the city, “Tryan-Kelton will strike the world with a ferocity this world has never witnessed, he’ll open the four hell gates, and doom this world.”
“How do we stop him?”
“We need to speak with an angel, try and bring the light into this battle before it’s too late.”
“And if they don’t join us?”
“We die,” Blood Claw replied coldly, “I don’t see any other way that this can happen.”
I nodded and sighed, “We’re fighting a losing battle.”
“Exactly.”
2
I walked down the hallway, toward my room, and stopped in front of Brittany’s, I could hear two heartbeats, someone was in there with her. I felt the rage and the jealousy flare, but I forced them back, this was nether the time, or the place, I continued walking, my claws punching holes in my hands.
Blood Claw
1
Rathos left after our little conversation, leaving me with my own thoughts and fears. I have no idea how to stop him, his power knows no bounds… mine does. I reach out with my mind, Teru’s gone, I can still feel his mind, he’s lost hope, most of them have… hope, once lost it’s so hard to find again.
I pulled my mind back and laughed lightly to myself, Lathena and Silver where making up for lost time. Art was training in his room… Galist and Brittany where bunking together… huh, I didn’t see that coming.
I looked up at the sky and I knew what had to be done… and what it would cost. If we where lucky, only a few would die…
Art
1
I swung my blade with precision, striking down imaginary foes, and snarled, that demon, Tryan-Kelton, he would pay dearly for what he’s done, for humiliating me, for making me bow down like a dog, I’ll kill him, slowly.
Silver Ocean
1
I lay there, Lathena’s head resting on my chest, and I breath in the scent of her hair. I’ve missed her, but this won’t last, we still have a war to fight, but we’re of the losing side. It just like World War 2, but we’re not the Allies, we’re the Axis. Lathena sigh’s happily on my chest and I smile, I’ll let myself be delusional… for now.
Steven Armstrong
1
Choice, that was the key, that’s what lead us to this point, well, fate might be more accurate. I leaned back on my bed, every choice we made lead us here, but would it lead us to victory or defeat? I hated thing about things so seriously.

[Silver Predator Wolf]

lol!! Good to see you back M.H! and Leo!^^ Long time, no see. How have you guys been?

[Moon Hunter]

lol!! Good to see you back M.H! and Leo!^^ Long time, no see. How have you guys been?

Been great, you?

[Moon Hunter]

Wolf War Chapter Eleven ‘THE PATH WE ALL MUST WALK’ part four
Blood Claw
1
I was leaning against the fireplace, looking at everyone. I’d let them get a goodnight’s sleep, they needed it, but now it was time to get back to work.
Galist and Brittany where sitting close to one another and Rathos was staring at them from across the room, his arms crossed, I could feel the jealousy and hate consuming his mind, but he knew this wasn’t the place or the time. Lathena and Silver Ocean where sitting next to one another, waiting for me to start talk, their happiness was nearing drowning out all other people’s thoughts and feelings. Art was sitting at the bar, downing drink after drink, he hated this, every seconds of it, but we could help him get his revenge. Taris was leaning against a wall, keeping both Rathos and Art in his view, and his staff was right next to him. He’d muttered the first few words to a spell, just in case. Steven was laying across one of the couches, he was having a hard time with Teru leaving, but there was still hope in his heart, and that’s what mattered. Naoy and Mia where on the last couch, they knew there was something between them, but it was still in the early stages, they’re in love and they knew it.
“All right,” I said, “We have eight days before Tryan-Kelton can leave the chamber of life, once he can leave, we’ll have a day, maybe two, to stop him. After that, we’re screwed, we have to go after ever lead I have at the same time. So I’m sending everyone on their own missions, which mean we need to split up.”
“Is that a good idea?” Art called from the bar, “There’s strength in numbers.”
“True, but we don’t have the time to track down these leads individually, so we’ll be forming small teams.” I replied, “Like I said, eight days till the end of days.”
“Who goes where?” Rathso asked, eye eyes still locked on Brittany.
“Lathena and Silver Ocean, your going to Michigan, Detroit, to be exact, a man named Raphael, he’ll know what you look like and he’ll pick you up at the airport. He’ll asked a question, the answer is ‘smell’s like carrots.’”
Lathena and Silver Ocean nod and hurry out of the apartment.
“Taris, go to your guild, we need all the help we can get, and bring me ‘The Book.’”
Taris’s eyes widened a bit and he opened his mouth to argue, but stopped, knowing that this was the only way, and left.
“Steven, I’m sorry for this, but, I need you to speak to ‘her’.” I said and watched all the color drain from his face, “She’s in Paris, I have someone picking you up at the airport, Rick, and the answer is Seven.”
“Why am I doing this?” Steven asked, getting up.
“To save the world.”
Any other reasons?” Steven muttered walking out.
“Naoy, and Mia, South America, private jet at a port twenty miles north of here, your going to an old ruin that might have something we can use.” I say and they head out, smiles on their faces.
Brittany, Galist, Rathos, and Art and looked at me as I said, “You four or going to Russia, airport flightm, woman waiting for you, Amelia, code four is the answer.”
“You’re sending us out together?” Brittany asked, glancing at Rathos, none of them seem pleased about this, “Why?”
“I’m sending you on a very dangerous mission, not all of he is on Tryan-Kelton’s side, and we need allies. I need you to find a demon know as Lillith, she’s Lucifer’s right hand, and we need their help.”
“Why the four of us?” Galist asked, glaring at me.
“The three best fighters,” Rathos said and I nodded, “He doesn’t think this will go well, so we need to be able to protect ourselves, where are you going?”
“Heaven, I have to try and sell an alliance between heaven and hell.” I replied.
“Good luck.” Rathos replied, unbelievingly.
“Thanks, any questions?”
“Just one,” Art said, “What’s a Russia?”
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Brittany, Galist, Rathos, and Art left together and I locked the door behind them. I walked to my balcony and looked out at the city.
“I’ve set them on the paths they must walk, now all I can do is hope they succeed.” I whispered and spread my wings.
I reached out with my mind and found Teru, drowning himself in booze. I hoped he knew what he was doing, the path he’d set himself on, he’d have one of the hardest fights of them all.
I shot into the sky, hoping for a… uneventful welcome home.
Tryan-Kelton
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I continued walking among the sparks of life, it was rather beautiful, in its own way. I saw Aluna wandering the hall, her white hair had an eerie glow to it, not to mention the fact her ghostly white skin also seemed to glow. She glanced over at me, her violet eyes glowing, and smiled warmly. She was wearing a tight black dress, that left little to the imagination, and her hands rested on the small bulge of her womb.
I watched her glide among the candles and smiled, corrupting a mortal these days was extremely easy. I continued walking wishing I could leave, but my powers where still unstable and I couldn’t risk it, but this was my path, the one I will walk, to whatever end I see fit.

[Silver Predator Wolf]

Been great, you?

Still alive!^^ lol!! Keep up the good work of the story! I like the 1 page per day post!^^

[Moon Hunter]

Wolf War Chapter Twelve ‘THE PATH OF BLOOD’ part one
Lathena
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Silver Ocean closed the door to the passenger seat and opened the glove box. As I pulled out of the parking space, Silver Ocean slide a wedding band onto her ring finger, and her image shimmered. “It’s a illusion,” She said as we pulled onto the street, “no one can see the real me, just the old one.”
I frowned, “Too bad it can’t turn you into your old self.”
She nodded and looked out the window. After a few minutes, “You know, none of these people even know what’s going on or how close we are to losing this battle.”
“I know,” I sighed, “but right now we need to focus on the job at hand, so, what do you know about Michigan and Detroit?”
“Michigan’s a nice place, lots of forest, high werewolf population. Detroit,” She paused, “Detroit is a hell hole these days, it looks decent enough on the surface, but it’s been consumed by shadow. Vampires have overrun the city, dark magic users are in major places of power, demons dwell in the shadows, sucking the life out of the city, and that’s just part of the supernatural side.”
“Christ,” I muttered, “how?”
“The Detroit Riot, 1967, parts of the city where destroyed, forty-three dead, but that was on the surface. The riot was cover for a full scale war between vampires, werewolves, shadow-casters. The demons there came for the chaos and it’s rumored that the ones that where already there caused the war. The werewolves where run out of the city, dozens of human’s where turned into vampires, the newborns did most of the damage because no one controlled them, the shadow-casters are the ones that stopped the fighting by almost obliterating everything in there way. The demon’s just watched from the sidelines as the city tore itself apart.” Silver Ocean said with a dark glint in her eyes.
“I’m guessing there’s something you’re not telling me,” I said and she nodded, “what?”
“Its better you don’t know, my love.”
Silver Ocean
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Lathena was asleep in her first class seat next to me and I was reading a book I’d picked up at one of the shops in the terminal. Well, I was pretending to read it, but my mind was still on Detroit. After all these years I was going back there and I knew it wasn’t going to end well. The demon’s there, they knew me, well the other me, and they’d want revenge... it was going to be war... again.
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We got off the plane and walked through the terminal, the sky was still pitch black, the stars seemed dimmer. I sensed him before I saw him, but when my eyes locked on his dark stare, I knew this was ‘the’ Raphael. He had black hair, ruddy white skin, bright blue eyes, and the looks an actor would kill for. People would take a hit on there ego by just standing near him... or seeing him. He was wearing a suit with a bright red tie. I walked over to him, Lathena still half asleep in my arms, and smiled, he frowned. “I see you got your body back, well, control at least.” He said in a voice that sounded like music.
“Yes,” I replied, “can we go?”
“What did one snowman say to the other?”
“Smell’s like carrots.” I replied, smiling slightly to myself.
Raphael nodded and lead the way to a limo parked outside. After sliding Lathena into her seat and climbing in after her, he slid in, closed the door, and sat down at the opposite side of the limo. The vehicle pulled away from the airport and Lathena looked at Raphael. “Who are you?” She asked I grimaced.
“Our job is simple,” Raphael replied, ignoring her question, “a vampire by the name or Travis Freeman is calling together all the vampires in the state, thousands of them, and he serves Tryan-Kelton. We’re going to stop him by any means necessary.”
“Who are you?” Lathena repeated, irritation in her voice.
“Would you like to tell her?” Raphael asked, his eyes locked on mine.
“No.” I replied as Lathna looked at me, confusion on her face.
“My name is Rahpael, an angel of the Ark,” Raphael stated in a mater-of-fact tone and Lathena’s eyes widened, she knew what that meant.

[Silver Predator Wolf]

Another good chapter. Keep up the good work!^^