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Kitsune57
10-27-2005, 03:24 PM
I hope no one minds that I am gonna put my works on in one giant topic.

Writings and so-called art. Please tell me what you think.

Writings
All my writings so far are Works In Progress...Except for the one one-shot that is in here.

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Not exactly a werewolf story, I haven't worked on it for a while. I have writer's block with it.

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Young werewolf story using another writer's character, SilverStreak. If you haven't heard of LoneBeatle you're missing out on a good werewolf story. :allears:

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Not a werewolf story, but another kind of were.

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Still no werewolf in this one yet...

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I don't know how many FMA fans are here but I watch this anime religiously. This idea popped in my head while watching it one night.

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I am also a fan of InuYasha so outcomes another fanfic.

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InuYasha fanfic part 2.

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This has been a lifelong work of mine. It's still in progress as well. I hope to get this published one day. It is a long one for a forewarning.

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This is a werewolf one-shot. I wrote this while incredibly angry.

~Kitsune

Flashpoint Gold
10-27-2005, 03:43 PM
It is good! Is there more?

Kitsune57
10-27-2005, 03:58 PM
Which one i was too busy editing the post to see who all was reading. The first one?

Flashpoint Gold
10-27-2005, 04:04 PM
yeah the 1st one

Kitsune57
10-27-2005, 04:13 PM
That's the one I have been racking my brain with. I am completely stuck on where to go and stuff. I actually had a train of though, but it derailed and blew up and other pretty stuff associated with train wrecks.

Leo
10-27-2005, 10:57 PM
Eeeer...None Link works for me.... :blink: and I was eager to see more stuff..., just put your link to your main page at least :allears:

Kitsune57
10-27-2005, 11:24 PM
Artworks
These are my craptacular works of art. I feel bad on my art because it is not good compared to others, but I would welcome tutorials and tips. I don't have form of coloring software either so unfortunately they are very rough...

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Well this one I at least had the genius idea to not draw on notebook paper. Her tail is too short though...

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This one is a LITTLE better. I had it on lined paper and painstakingly erased it. Then some of the lighter lines disappeared.

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This one is fanfic based, but the scanning ate it. It's also on accursed notebook paper. Neck is too long...

http://f6.grp.yahoofs.com/v1/QKJhQ8FpNk-D9...29/scan0002.jpg (http://f6.grp.yahoofs.com/v1/QKJhQ8FpNk-D98bXTkHImyqmXmQBNAmT6p0yNrv_lNGXjK-31j3IP4akq3GeQsjEolQKigIDTnLr8QIJ4Q55PbhW6nhmnPRnH dAl--z1/Kitsune%28BigB%29/scan0002.jpg)
The best and last one in my opinion..I wish i could color it now.

That's all for now and i hope the links work now that i uploaded them. Except for the last one.

~Kitsune

Night Wolf
10-28-2005, 08:58 AM
Hey, don't worry about that. I don't even know how to write a child story :closedgrin: and I've seen far worse pics in the net :laugh:
(what age are ya? :allears: )

Flashpoint Gold
10-28-2005, 09:23 AM
I watch Full Metal Alchemist and Inuyasha too! I haven't watched FMA in a while. I need to catch up.

Huh, you should see my art! My art sucks so bad! The only thing that I draw ok was a dragon and a little bit of stuff before that. I drew it a long time ago! I drew it upside down, which works better for me atleast. I do not know where it is now. All I can do now are crappy drawings and good writing. Some how my artistic ability turned into good writing.

Kitsune57
10-28-2005, 06:15 PM
Originally posted by Night Wolf@Oct 28 2005, 01:58 PM
Hey, don't worry about that. I don't even know how to write a child story* :closedgrin:* and I've seen far worse pics in the net :laugh:
(what age are ya?* :allears: )

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I'll tell you guys my age later. Let me get comfortable first.

Leo
10-28-2005, 07:24 PM
Originally posted by Kitsune57@Oct 28 2005, 11:15 PM
I'll tell you guys my age later.* Let me get comfortable first.

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Age is important just to know how close are your skills with your actual work and how much time have you done working on the stories and in the artwork..., that idea help us to know how to support you . And that's it.

Anyway, keep it up.

Kitsune57
10-29-2005, 08:19 PM
Okay. I'm 18, but soon to be 19!!! Very soon.

No stalkers!

I have minute fear of the internet and other security issues.

Night Wolf
10-29-2005, 08:22 PM
No need to worry about that :smile:
I'm 16, by the way :allears:

Kitsune57
10-29-2005, 08:39 PM
Okay good that was another worry that i was going to be the youngest...

Tyraelis
10-30-2005, 12:27 AM
I'm 18 as well... no harm in age.

Kitsune57
10-30-2005, 01:20 PM
Yeah i suppose not.

Stoopid brain.

of wolf and man
10-30-2005, 06:07 PM
with all the age guessing, it reminds me of this one time i showed someone a story i wrote that i was proud of, (this was over the instant messanger by the way) and i hadnt told her my age. she said "how old are you?" "why?" "because from your writeing i would guess that you are 16." ...........she was right. i dont know why but that made me feel bad. the fact she could guess how old i was by the quality of my writing. i never showed any of my work to another person.....

Kitsune57
10-30-2005, 06:59 PM
Awww man that bites.....

Your signature rules! LMAO!!!!

Kell Hound
10-31-2005, 01:22 AM
Also 18 so no worries.

Edit: And he does have a bitchin signature.

kitetsu
10-31-2005, 01:49 AM
i is 17 'ere.

Kitsune57
10-31-2005, 09:31 AM
YAY!!!

We're all about the same age! :howl:

('Cept I'm 19 tomorrow.) :thpt:

Couple new things for you guys.

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I wrote this the other night. Mayhaps will continue later. No werewolf...yet... (I keep saying that don't I? I swear I actually have a werewolf story laying somewhere in my hardrive.)

I is a busy fox. Anyways, enjoy! :closedgrin:

Draconian wolf
10-31-2005, 01:54 PM
ok im gonna post the links


http://img309.imageshack.us/img309/8558/arl0vv.jpg

http://img62.imageshack.us/img62/988/halloweensketch23ov.jpg

http://img65.imageshack.us/img65/3325/mikesavatar26ps.jpg

thats it for now i left them too big so i need to yet resize them for a direct image

Kitsune57
11-01-2005, 08:04 PM
Hey i hate to double post, but i have an updated and completed chapter of that co-written story. It's Mergers' turn now. That's the other writer I'm writing with.

I'll post his portion up too if you guys like it.

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ENJOY!

~Kitsune

Xloous
11-01-2005, 08:54 PM
What the hell. Everyone else said it. I posted earlier, but who cares?
Okay, exactly? 16 + 1/2 + a few days.
I have a stupid little short story I wrote. I may post it at some point, but I don't feel like it. Meh.

Kitsune57
11-01-2005, 10:59 PM
*IS confused.*

Xloous
11-01-2005, 11:14 PM
Sorry. I'll try to clarify, especially because very little sleep last night + no caffiene = very very tired and out of focus.

I posted my age. Yeah.
I authored a little story about 2 days ago, around 11PM. That's what that was all about.

Yours are very nice, even though I only read a few, I must say they are very good quality.

Hope that helps. I'm too damn noctournal for my own good.

Kitsune57
11-01-2005, 11:22 PM
Aaahh...

Thanks, I'm such a dumb blonde fox. I'll join the nocturnal club as well.

Thanks for your comments. Is your story posted somewhere?

Xloous
11-01-2005, 11:27 PM
No, but I could PM it to you. I could use some constructive criticizm, after all it's my first attempt at non-school related writing.

I had a few ideas, so I got bored and decided to pull up the old word processor. From there, I wrote 4 pages. No idea if they are any good or not.

Kitsune57
11-02-2005, 02:01 AM
Sure go for it.

I appreciate your guys' criticism on my works so i'll do the same.

Dun worry. I'm a gentle critic.

I just had a "friend" look at one of my stories and just nit-picked at it....

I dun do that. It's mean.

TheClock
11-03-2005, 09:02 PM
Hmm...being a fan of Inuyasha...I liked your.

The question I have to ask, is it related to ~Caliosidhe's artwork tht she made of a Anthro version of Kirara ?

http://ic1.deviantart.com/fs7/i/2005/184/1/6/Anthro_Kilala_Kirara_collab_by_Caliosidhe.jpg

If not then it's just coincidence.

Check out her work, it's pretty good.

My favorite artist that does good Inuyasha Fanart is Kuro (a.k.a. Admin of Ear-Tweak.com)

Draconian wolf
11-04-2005, 07:05 AM
im 19 here

and thats some preety sweet art work

Kitsune57
11-04-2005, 05:14 PM
I got a red x....

which one was it?

I have one of Sango TFed into A kirara like thing....But it's kinda on my hw....

TheClock
11-04-2005, 05:22 PM
Anthro Kilala/Kirara Collab (http://www.deviantart.com/view/20186617/)

Kitsune57
11-04-2005, 09:58 PM
Hmmm.....Very interesting....

But no it wasn't. I need to work on it.

But tonight i feel ill......Blah....

TheClock
11-05-2005, 01:09 AM
Dude, upload to this post when you have the chance...

Kitsune57
11-05-2005, 01:55 AM
It's a matter of finding a scanner....

I consider my art to be a personal thing and sometimes don't like asking friends do it. My friends are so kind to think it's their turn to do a personal review..... Some of my friends are good artists, but couldn't write their way out of a paper bag.

So instead of saying, "hey you know, that's good." Or anything with even somewhat of a positive it, they automatically pick it apart.

I already had one friend pick apart one of my stories as well...but he is biased in his reading. Sometimes I forget to not give him things to read unless it's one-shots. Because sometimes people (so-called friends) can derail your motivation to even finish.

I don't mind giving it to complete strangers to read, sometimes like a jury, they are unbiased and tell you that they gave it a chance and actually read it and liked it. I also like the fact that sometimes they are much nicer in giving constructive criticism.

Most of my friends rarely read books. I have read more books than they will read in their lifetime. How's come I make friends with all the non-readers and mathematicians? I suppose opposites, truly do attract at times....

They only read when they are forced to or when *GASP!* they actually set foot in a library and find something they want to read for their own pleasure.

It surprises me that they think they can pick apart my stories, without actually knowing what is good literature and comparing it....

Now, I'm not trying to bash on non-readers or say that my writing is worthy of any awards.... Because it most likely isn't. It's just one of these things that get under my skin.

I'm also not ranting at you TheClock. I just decided to rant.... :P

One example, this friend of mine read the dogmorph story. He disagreed with the husband's reaction at the possible break-in at his home. He said that he would be running around frantically trying to find his wife and kids then hug and kiss them when he found them.

Now, understand that people react differently to different situations. Here is the other part to the husband. The husband is a doctor at a hospital and is highly educated. Perhaps he knows that being in a frantic panic mode doesn't solve anything. Also, he just came home from the dreaded night shift at the hospital at 3am. I think he is a little tired! There's just another thing that I guess I didn't describe properly. I'll throw that in for the next part that I have ended up writing for that story.

I just irritated me. Yes, that is possibly something that HE might do. However, HE is not this particular character.

That's just a rant that has been building up for a while. I hope I didn't offend anybody and probably should have put it in my LJ. But this was the most available medium.

*Dodges any books being thrown at her, and runs away.*
~Kitsune

P.S. Back to the TheClock, but yes it is a matter of finding a scanner.... :P

And I just now realized that I completely missed what you were asking for TheClock. I hope you were talking about the uploaded story. I also have just now ranted for no reason, but I'm going to leave it up there anyways. I apologize. I have not been feeling well and building irritation is not good for the mind, body and soul. So I let it all out.

I am a dumbass fox. Now this is an incredibly long post. I apologize again. I need to go to bed.

~~Kitsune

TheClock
11-05-2005, 02:39 AM
Its ok, your storys are pretty entertaining to read.

Kitsune57
11-05-2005, 02:41 AM
Heh thanks. I apologize again for the non-relating rant....

<--Bad KITSUNE&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

http://www.fanfiction.net/~defectivecat57

That&#39;s the link to my other craptacular fanfics I have written. I&#39;m running out of the attachment room quota.

Most of those there WERE WIPs but....I never got around to finishing them..... :mournhowl:

<---BAD KITSUNE&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

Flashpoint Gold
11-06-2005, 02:22 AM
I&#39;m 16 so I guess there is no chance with any girls on this forum? Dangit&#33;

Oh, well&#33;

Your work is good Kitsune. I could probably write something if I had the patience to do so. Which sometimes I do.....rarely.

I probably couldn&#39;t write as good as you can though.

*Sigh* Everybody has more talent than me. Except for one thing&#33; Well some people could be better. *Sigh*

Excuse me while I go cry in a corner.
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...... Ok, a little better(very little).

Tyraelis
11-06-2005, 07:34 AM
Suggestion, Flashpoint (I can&#39;t tell if joke or not, but going to assume that it&#39;s the latter): Don&#39;t try to set up romantic relationships over the internet. They aren&#39;t as great as the ones you can have if the person who you develop an interest in or crush for is there. Even though I haven&#39;t had a girlfriend yet, I feel a lot better when I actually take a (deep) interest in the girls that I know.

Oh, well, I can&#39;t write creatively worth a bean. A mundane bean. Think of my storyline capabilities as shonen-manga plots. I do have a redeeming factor: the ability to be emotionless while typing responses. Wait, is that a redeeming trait...?

Tyraelis
11-06-2005, 03:53 PM
I&#39;m assuming you&#39;re a fan of... oh, I forgot the name of the comic. I&#39;ve seen the comic before, but I haven&#39;t bothered remembering the name.

Try learning your own style, instead of thinking that Altermeta (http://www.altermeta.com/) (oh, that&#39;s the name, I just remembered) has the right style for you. You have your own unique style, and that&#39;s important to work on.

Kitsune57
11-06-2005, 08:59 PM
I *GASP&#33;* drew something...

I call it my Art Angst. Yes, I am still aggravated that I can&#39;t draw.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v96/Kid57/ArtAngst.jpg

I hope the link works.

Tyraelis
11-06-2005, 09:33 PM
I&#39;m so poor in drawing skills, I can&#39;t even get my drawings online (mainly because there are NO scanners here: rather, no one nearby needs one, since I&#39;m not in an arts college).

Your drawing reminds me of many other early works, and your (illegible [compliment&#33; really&#33;]) handwriting obscures your comments on the paper. Good angst.

Kitsune57
11-06-2005, 11:12 PM
That&#39;s the way I always write.....

*Sigh.*

My drawings bite...

Xloous
11-06-2005, 11:54 PM
Trust me, I can&#39;t even draw correct stick figures... I&#39;m much worse than you.
I have failed every art class I&#39;ve ever taken. So much for that&#33;

Kitsune57
11-06-2005, 11:59 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v96/Kid5...HappyCamper.jpg (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v96/Kid57/NotAHappyCamper.jpg)

I got really sad all of a sudden in the same night. I curse female horomones....

Enjoy....

Xloous
11-07-2005, 12:24 AM
Not bad. Not bad at all.

I&#39;ve read more of your stories. Very enjoyable, seeing as how I have nothing else to do at 11:06 PM.

Kitsune57
11-07-2005, 12:30 AM
Thanks&#33; :allears:

I got inspired over the weekend to start another FMA fanfic.... (Tries really hard not to mention the victim&#39;s name...) :laugh:

Draconian wolf
11-07-2005, 03:07 AM
heh this was ment to be a post in reply to urh kit 57 but i pressed the wrong button, yes and it is based on the altermeta....i orignally drew them as fan art for that website...

i do have my own style its just not developed enough im still needing more leassons/practice, so im borrowing inspiration and basic shapes from books n so on, but i cant find a good combo as of yet

Draconian wolf
11-07-2005, 06:28 AM
well i cant wait to read it.....

Tyraelis
11-07-2005, 11:45 AM
Oh, I&#39;ll add your thread onto this one, D. Wolf.

Flashpoint Gold
11-07-2005, 04:44 PM
Your writing is very good. I enjoy it alot. I&#39;ve probably said that before&#33; Can&#39;t wait to read&#33;

Xoolus: I can&#39;t draw stick figures well either and I can&#39;t draw anything else&#33;(damn puberty...it has messed up everything&#33;)

Tyraelis: yes it was a joke, except for the crying........uhhhhhh just kidding

Xloous
11-07-2005, 05:08 PM
*Raises WTF flag*

:wtf:

Kitsune57
11-07-2005, 05:20 PM
Que...?

*Scooby-Doo noise.* Raroo...?

Xloous
11-07-2005, 05:25 PM
Did I miss something?

Tyraelis
11-07-2005, 10:49 PM
Other than me merging the threads (one that D Wolf wanted to be part of this), Flashpoint said something regarding... what was it, drawing?

SSJ_Vash
11-08-2005, 06:20 PM
I would love to read your stuff but sadly the links won&#39;t work. they say that the filkes are missing, quite sad. :mournhowl:

Kitsune57
11-08-2005, 08:12 PM
Not this again....

I&#39;ll fix it later, I&#39;m writing now...

Kitsune57
11-10-2005, 03:23 PM
Damn you global limiting posting file attachment doohickey&#33;

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2654050/1/

I hope that link works.

Anyways that is the second FullMetal Alchemist fanfic I was talking about earlier. THIS IS NOT FINISHED&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33; I really do plan on writing on this some more. I really like and it&#39;s probably one of the better things I have written. And no, it&#39;s not a werewolf fic. I need to start writing those again.

Flashpoint Gold
11-12-2005, 01:57 PM
Yes, I was talking about drawing. I used to be pretty good, but.... now I am not.

Kitsune57
11-14-2005, 02:27 AM
Let&#39;s get back on topic if there ever really was one.

Okay for whatever reason I can&#39;t upload an attachment so I just have to give the fanfiction site.

I posted this earlier, but i didn&#39;t know if people missed it or what but here is the link again and I added another chapter thing to it so go read or something.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2654050/1/

It&#39;s the second FMA Hawkeye fanfiction.

Anways, it&#39;s 3:30 am.

I have no life.

Kitsune57
11-16-2005, 04:33 PM
OMG&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33; I drew something&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

http://f6.grp.yahoofs.com/v1/4Kt7Q3mweNkix...er%28inc%29.jpg (http://f6.grp.yahoofs.com/v1/4Kt7Q3mweNkixP_1qwa-3921hqfiUUxe7b23maO8E8DcfFzaSXS22XHD0WphBMolfenEOJ cnMoRzO3fTQNZwjaz9RmjcQjURwpPGLwU_/Kitsune%28BigB%29/Weretiger%28inc%29.jpg)

It&#39;s a weretiger. It&#39;s kinda what I picture Hawkeye as a weretiger. I am still working on it. Hopefully it will be finished and halfway decent.

Kinda part of my fanfic.

anarchy
11-16-2005, 08:02 PM
i cant see it&#33; :eyebrow:
the doc cant be found

Kitsune57
11-16-2005, 08:17 PM
grrr....

I don&#39;t think it likes the way that the board shortens the link....

PM for address....

*Mumbles expletives and threats of bodily harm to the linky.*

Tyraelis
11-21-2005, 07:31 PM
Actually, I think you can change it in your user preferences. There&#39;s something there about automatically changing links.

Guest
11-25-2005, 10:57 PM
FEh...forget it...

It&#39;s nothing worth seeing anyways...

Kitsune57
11-25-2005, 10:58 PM
Oops...

I forgot i am not automatically logged in at this comp

that was me as the guest post...

Kitsune57
01-23-2006, 11:44 PM
Yeah....Haven&#39;t posted here for a while.

I wrote this story and it has been some good reviews. I&#39;d thought I&#39;d share it here too. I hope you guys enjoy it. I&#39;ll tell you now it&#39;s not a werewolf story, but a transformation is involved.

http://f6.grp.yahoofs.com/v1/ULTVQ0zNb1bFW...he%20Avatar.htm (http://f6.grp.yahoofs.com/v1/ULTVQ0zNb1bFW-iBBQ6Yz9n4HP8almCZGq6F9n1wdk2pOHmBldad8GH8rklYvuu1 rHwgK5CD7eQikZGYnmO_R6n5PFxDs6vllB74F_fq/Kitsune%28BigB%29/The%20Avatar.htm)

Tell me what you think.

Kitsune57
01-23-2006, 11:49 PM
okay the link isn&#39;t working and I can&#39;t upload it for some reason. I know I have enough room because I just deleted all my attachments. So if someone can help me in this task... It says something about suitable permissions.... or something.

So to tide you over in the meantime here is this Wolf&#39;s Rain fanfiction. Anarchy talked me into posting it here. I hope you guys like it.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2104126/1/

Kitsune57
01-26-2006, 07:22 PM
Hooray for another craptacular drawring from me.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v96/Kid57/SnowLeopard.jpg

I hate not being able to draw.... :mournhowl:

of wolf and man
01-26-2006, 07:39 PM
Originally posted by Kitsune57@Jan 26 2006, 07:22 PM
Hooray for another craptacular drawring from me.*

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v96/Kid57/SnowLeopard.jpg*

I hate not being able to draw.... :mournhowl:

8554

its better than what i could do.

Kitsune57
01-27-2006, 12:32 PM
Okay I drew again. I don&#39;t know if there are any s-CRY-ed fans around here but....

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v96/Kid57/Scheris.jpg

Yeah, Scheris in mid TF.

of wolf and man
01-31-2006, 11:49 AM
Originally posted by Kitsune57@Jan 27 2006, 12:32 PM
Okay I drew again.* I don&#39;t know if there are any s-CRY-ed fans around here but....

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v96/Kid57/Scheris.jpg

Yeah, Scheris in mid TF.

8591

love it. gotta love the dragon TF.

Guest
01-31-2006, 05:02 PM
A friend of mine is coloring it and I will post it when it is finished

Kitsune57
01-31-2006, 05:02 PM
Dammit....that was me again. I hate it when my computer has brain farts.

Kitsune57
01-31-2006, 10:19 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v96/Kid57/Femwerewolf.jpg

Some form of fem werewolf that somehow appeared on my paper.

Kitsune57
02-01-2006, 12:01 AM
Not as good as the first one, but I am in a drawing mood.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v96/Kid5...llhercoyote.jpg (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v96/Kid57/Icallhercoyote.jpg)

I need to work on werewolfy hands.

Kitsune57
02-01-2006, 02:30 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v96/Kid57/Femwerewolf2.jpg

I&#39;m sure people are tired of me like quadruple posting, but I have been in a drawing mood.

anarchy
02-01-2006, 06:41 PM
*hug kits*

keep up the good work kits&#33;&#33;&#33;

the best way to improve is to pratice.......
and a good way to keep praticing, is to get positive review......